woah, I didn't realize you meant Karmic Balance was your previous story! I read these on one of the other storyboards and really enjoyed them. Always hoped there would be more. Hope suggestions aren't too impetuous, but I was thinking it might be neat to introduce another demon in the Karmic department, one with another power, not sure what, the ability to grow or shrink things, or transmute matter? Anyways, my thought was that the new demon could be female, and Zeke starts wanting to use his power to expose her regardless of consequence.
Regardless, I'm sure whatever else you add will be great. Keep up the good work.
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