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Originally Posted by matdevine216
Fantastic story, would love to read more as this has huge potential.
I know everyone has their own views of what they want to read, if I may suggest that maybe more along the lines of the pranks/revenge to restore the karma balance but keeping the ENF/nudity.
I would also say that each one of the girls/victims could have been their own chapter as they each could benefit from more detail.
Please post more
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Thanks for the feedback! I can agree that in hindsight, they would have benefited from more detail when I first wrote it. Unfortunately due other projects i have, I don't have time to re-edit the old chapters however, you will be pleased to know that I am re-writing new chapters and once I've posted all the old chapters here I will post the new ones which WILL be more detail focused and hopefully involve more pranks.