Now the schedule which will start on Monday will have this story having two updates and Amelia's having one. Alright now to answer the criticisms I must say thanks you for them, I appreciate the feedback and very much am glad that some are enjoying this story. About the foot focus, I don't mind cutting back on them but I don't want to abandon them completely, after all some people do like them (myself included), now about featuring characters from the original work, I don't mind but the main reason I avoided it was to build upon making this region being separate, I also didn't want to write the characters in a wrong way, but instead how about I do a side story for them, like something about Misty going skinny dipping and losing her swimsuit, or Sabrina's psychic powers going AWOL causing many enf situations in Saffron City etc. Now I don't mind doing that but I would probably only do one per Gym, I.e. after the next gym a side story about Misty or Erika, also I would still like names for Gym leaders, so that I can have them pretty easily integrated into the story, (so anyone having any ideas I would like bio's) Name, appearance, Gym type etc. Now finally sorry for the wall of text I just wanted to cover this, also thank you for the criticisms I hope I didn't come off at all douche-like with this reply (I just wanted to seem half-way professional as I understand that it's not everyone's cup of tea) and again thank you.
Noelle began walking into the small Seria city, which was small as a city could be. There were only a few buildings and it would fit the scene of a town better than of a city.
"Okay first things first..." Noelle sighed walking towards the Pokémon centre.
She entered into the pink building, she walked in and was surprised to see a bunch of people sitting around in nothing but their underwear, there were girls wearing only their panties (trying to cover their chest with their hands, some only wearing their bras (doing the same to their crotch and even some guys in just their underwear who looked like they didn't mind (they were just enjoying the view). Noelle then walked up to the counter and asked the nurse what was happening.
"They challenged the gym..." She said looking around. "Things didn't turn out so well for them, as the gym leader obviously didn't hold back." She as she took Noelle's Pokémon and began healing them. "Are you going to challenge the Gym?" She asked.
Noelle didn't know what to reply with, she wanted to defeat the Gym leader but didn't want to end up as a public show for others. She thought about how humiliating that would be for a few seconds and then Eve's face popped into her mind. "Yes I am..." She said steeling her nerves, it wasn't that she liked the idea of being stripped but instead that she never wanted to feel the shame of defeat ever again.
"Well, do be careful then, after all seeing such a pretty girl go through such humiliation would be quite upsetting...at least for some." She said looking towards the guys who were just watching the half naked girls who were clearly uncomfortable, trying their hardest struggling to show off as little as possible.
Noelle left and went to the Gym, she looked at the big building and entered through the front door, as she did a blonde girl completely naked sprinted out, her face was red and she wore tears of shame and frustration as she ran trying to cover herself, Noelle watched her leave
"This gym's latest challenger was such a light weight." Said a female voice from behind Noelle.
She looked in and saw a woman who looked about 25, she was a beauty who had sandy blonde hair tied up in a bunch, she also had blue eyes, a white tank top and a pair of yellow cargo shorts. "Who are you?" Noelle asked her.
"My name is Samantha, I'm the Seria city Pokémon gym leader. I'm assuming you are the latest challenger?" She asked as Noelle nodded, after which she went scoped over Noelle' body. "Hm? You look like a newbie trainer, and you're also a cutie. I'm glad I hate having to strip men, I also really hope you're a crybaby, nothing feels more satisfying then watching an overconfident trainer burst into tears." She laughed.
Noelle felt a surge of electricity travel up her spine, this girl's words were really frightening to hear from a trainer who had proven her strength again and again.
"Hm? did you see that last girl? Watching her blush as I peeled off her clothes was enjoyable. You are much cuter." She licked her lips. "I'm going to enjoy watching your face twist as I slip your panties off." She smiled before climbing walking through a set of double doors.
Noelle was about to walk forward until she saw a bearded old man standing watching her, she went over to talk to him and he began to say. "Hello, I see you're a new challenger. You do know climbing to the top is hard, so how about you let me help and give you edge and we'll claw our way up to the champ's seat together?" The old man smiled as Noelle nodded. "Okay well this gym using the bug type Pokémon, they're weak to flying and fire type Pokémon, oh but don't think about using the grass type, otherwise you'll be bugged out!" He said trying to sound clever.
Noelle took his advice to heart before she walked off into the main Gym, she looked around and saw what looked like a forest, she looked around and saw a few girls about four of them, all moderate beauties looking at her, each one was dressed in camper attire. In fact they looked similar to Jess in to a alarming degree only with differing hair styles. Noelle walked forward and found them challenging her one after another, she dispatched them with ease stripping each girl completely naked before moving on, she felt nervous after she defeated the now naked girls as only one person was standing in her way, Samantha.
"Welcome to my Gym." She laughed. "You are a bit stronger than I thought fighting off my trainers with ease." She licked her lips scoping over the naked girls. "But now you will have to face me." She rose her arms up and sent out a Pokémon, it was a Ledyba. "Get ready to lose." She said as Noelle got her Pokémon ready to battle.
You are challenged by Gym Leader Samantha!
Noelle's Team
Ingrid Level 13
Fluffy Level 12
Sky Arrow Level 12
Athena Level 12
To be continued...