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Originally Posted by MKDude
While I could do without the heavy amount of foot focus, it's definitely got an interesting premise and I'm curious to see where the story leads. I also like the build-up in regards to Noelle eventually losing a battle and being forced to expose herself. My only other critism would be maybe feature some more characters from the original work. The OCs are intriguing and should be utilized, but I'd recommend balancing it out. Like the Gym Leaders being recognizable characters?
It really is a great read, I hope you don't think I dislike it. I'm definitely going to keep reading whenever it's updated.
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I pretty much agree with all this.
I don't understand the attraction of feet and the fetish is a bit much for me, but overall it's an interesting series. I also like the combination between the other trainer stripping their opponent, rather than just the trainer having to strip themselves.
The odd recognisable character would be interesting. I really hope you don't make the mistake of missing out Misty on the second gym. That will be a big loss I think. Sabrina and the goth vibe when you get to the psychic gym could also lead to a lot of fun later on.