While I could do without the heavy amount of foot focus, it's definitely got an interesting premise and I'm curious to see where the story leads. I also like the build-up in regards to Noelle eventually losing a battle and being forced to expose herself. My only other critism would be maybe feature some more characters from the original work. The OCs are intriguing and should be utilized, but I'd recommend balancing it out. Like the Gym Leaders being recognizable characters?
It really is a great read, I hope you don't think I dislike it. I'm definitely going to keep reading whenever it's updated.
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