Jay042-- I enjoyed yours a lot, short though it was. Glad it didn't actually go in a violation direction, as it was threatening to do in panel #1... I didn't even know what L Bush looked like, but after Googling, yes that's her, but more of a younger her. That's just as well.... I want more, and would Laura as a bumbling, unsuccessful naked space heroine be all that bad an idea?
Mexi64-- Your stuff has a nice spirit to it. Well done. I was prepared for her to abandon the living suit of armor and go on her way naked.... If it were me I'd trim the body proportions down just a little, in a few panels, not all.... but you didn't ask for criticism, so why am I giving it? I guess because I'm always looking very hard at my own drawings for problems I've missed, and these days, I'm always sort of stuck in that picking-apart mode. Anyway, I like your drawing style, and hope you post more.
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