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Old 08-22-2013, 10:10 PM
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Unlike others, my comment will be more constructive criticism over your comic elnemesis3:

The situation and the dialogue it's a bit odd to be honest. She suppose to be on a TV show, right? kinda out of place saying "hell" and "ass" you could have fun with the dialogue more.

The reference on the comic it's just out of place, reminds me of the comic of Darkwing Duck where they add too much reference of different shows and it's not the point, if you like to add a reference you should just go for 1 or tiny ones also that make sense since the whole razor gloves coming from Elm Street could have come better. This is an example:

https://forum.oneclickchicks.com/show...postcount=1791

If you notice i added a few reference especially on Emmitt Nervend from Freakazoid, i did that because i have seen the character appearing everywhere without explanation. There's an upcoming work i will show soon involving a reference of Who Framed Roger Rabbit( it will mostly involve the first scenes of the movie)

Finally the facial expressions on her, the whole smiling thing gets tiring and could make her face more desperate and embarrassed, i do feel that's the most important part of a drawing since no matter how hard you put on drawing their bodies, if the face doesn't look right the drawing won't look right.

This is my personal opinion and hopefully you don't take it the wrong way and think i was insulting your works, only critique.
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