Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] She Takes the 8:15 into the City
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Old 05-30-2013, 05:02 PM
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That's something I didn't catch in my final rewrite. She still has her blouse. If I get around to writing a part 2 (no promises right now,) Molly will lose it then.
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