Finished! I'm gonna keep quiet for awhile now.
I was using June to finish up on May, but it looks like I hijacked June's thread instead. Sorry Jimmy!
Splotch - the mental breakdown thing ended up being pretty heavy and serious. I tried to make it funny and light hearted but didn't know how to. All the stuff I saw on youtube and wikipedia regarding mental breakdowns were pretty serious stuff so I decided to write to reflect the gravity of the situation.
I hope to see yours and Jimmy's version of May's exposure now.