Thread: Shannon's Dignity
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Old 05-08-2013, 01:35 AM
Bd.Carlo Bd.Carlo is offline
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A good story, would be better if you broke the wall of text down into smaller paragraphs though. Also double spacing in between the paragraphs would help.

Also, are you planning to write more about Shannon?
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