OK, I've used the other girls in very minor supporting roles.
Was just wondering if I could use one of them in a pivotal way to strip May in the end.
I've added two versions of a new chapter. On one, May goes crazy and is determined to use her powers to find out who entered her cabin. He ego grows bigger and makes lots of enemies until she is finally taken down.
In the other, she is slowly becoming a nervous wreck (paranoid).
Feedback appreciated.
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