[jm6379]

Thanks for the compliments Splotch.

I've got a couple of ideas to keep May's secret going for another few chapters but I was hoping someone can take up one of the other girls first so I can also write towards that to try and keep the whole story congruent. Otherwise May's chapters are going to look like something on it's own, unrelated to the rest of the story.

Basically going forward I was going to build up May's paranoia and ego to the point where everyone on the camp will revel in her humiliation later.

I'd like to use one of your other characters if possible to aid towards that end.

Hi Splotch,

I was hoping someone could take up one of the other girls so I can also write towards that end. Otherwise May's chapters would seem to be on their own and not congruent with the rest of the story.

Going forward I was going to build up May's paranoia and ego to the point everyone will revel in her ultimate humiliation.