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Originally Posted by klex
why no one commented on the story ?
as any one read it?
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- I missed this when it was first posted. An honest question deserves an honest answer.
The premise has merit as an interesting story, but the mechanics of the composition make it difficult to read. Incorrect use of plurals and tenses, mis-spelled words, etc. make it appear that the author is writing in a language that is not native to him/her.
Maybe run it through a spellcheck and grammar check? But that may be too cumbersome to be worth while. Maybe someone more familiar with correct use of this language will interpret it for you.
Either way, don't be too discouraged. It has provided entertainment for some.