[Dasii010]

I just wanted to say that I love Keilani's Long Vacation, it is truly one of my most favorite stories. AR or otherwise. I first read it years ago when you posted Chapter 1 and I have been hooked ever since.

I really loved Chapter 7. You build up your scenes in just such a way that they are both believable and incredibly exciting. The Hawaiian setting and language additions really add a touch of detail that many other stories lack; very good world building. And the way that you can find a realistic scenario to lead Keilani to yet another spanking, by someone who knows who she really is, and believably become so angry and frustrated as to try to escape again, is simply amazing to me!

I'm a bit sad to think that only one chapter is left, but also very excited and anxious! I shiver to think how long I might have to wait though...

I actually think I might know how it will end, but even if I have guessed correctly, it'll be a fun ride. You handle humiliating scenes with considerable skill. Keilani's Long Vacation has partially inspired an AR story of my own, and in the course of writing it, I have grown even more appreciative of your talents.

Thank you again for your tale. I anxiously await chapter 8. Don't take too long to complete it this time, pretty, pretty please? :-) I don't know if I can handle waiting another several months to read the thrilling conclusion.

- B-Rex, creator of the Degraded Damsels blog, where my own AR stories/captioned images are contained