Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] WWE - Power Hungry GM
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Old 12-01-2012, 08:48 AM
Jack_The_Ripper Jack_The_Ripper is offline
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I F'ING LOVE THIS!

You're doing an amazing job and I've enjoyed every episode. I like how every week you are teasing us with AJ being humiliated and I can't wait for the episode where it finally happens... Great Build.

My one and only suggestion is to go more in depth about what the Diva's are wearing and what their undergarments are like (Colors/Type/Etc). Other then that, this has been nearly perfect. The addition of describing the clothing will give readers a much more better visual.
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