Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] The Ravenous Bug
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Old 10-06-2012, 01:41 AM
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Damn well written begininng. You've got the setup and pacing down well. Sometimes people rush in too quickly to the nudity/story without writing the leadup well. Can't wait to see any future chapters
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