Just one problem
I reply love your story. It's hit a great plot and plenty of enf action. My one problem, and this actually made me stop reading before I got to the end, was that everyone was so I realistically rude! I mean seriously! A whole crowd of people and not one would offer her a jacket to cover herself with? It is winter after all. I understand it's just a story and it doesn't have to be realistic, but that just bothered me beyond belief.
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