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Originally Posted by chrisamon
I'm getting confused...I thought this was in the past but..."She sounds really excited"; and I thought you were "heading off to university in another country." but you " headed home on different trains because I had to work the next day". 
This doesn't belong on the fiction forum? |
I see no problems with the writing. Hes writing in that moment, like a narrator. So when you go abroad you sleep in the street? No you live in a place one might call home. Home isnt always where your mom lives. Home is where he lived and home is where she lived in Australia. I see no issues.