Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] Olympics ENF Disaster
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Old 08-18-2012, 05:14 AM
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I liked the story, as said nice and a bit more on the "beliveable" side than usual. But I have to agree with ob45lol that some languaje issues and an awkward use of punctuation take away part of the enjoyment.
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