Thank you for the positive feedback. I'm sorry chapter 4 took so long but i am very self conscious about my writing and often rewrite chapters several times before i finally post. Chapter 5 is currently under way and will have some more twists. I've had this story in my head for years and finally decided to write it down. Everything in the story happens for a reason so if something seems odd or random its probably setting something up for a future chapter. I welcome any and all feedback so please tell me what you think.
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