This is quite a comprehensive system! I'm simply stunned to see how quickly these rules came together! I applaud your effort to put a system together for an ENF game.
But, now, I will play "Devil's Advocate" (please take no offense):
1. Will it be awkward to play the role of a female character? It's one thing to write stories, but it's another thing to put yourself in the role of a very different character. You, yourself, wouldn't mind seeing your character stripped and exposed, but your character will seek the exact opposite results!
2. Will it be fun, or (as we geeks are prone to do) is it all about the numbers pr0n? Sometimes, a sick amount of joy is found in min-maxing our characters. (Ask any hardcore MMO player for evidence.)
3. Can it be played well in a forum environment, or will frequent breaks for die rolls frustrate the action?
Just some things to think about!