Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] The Enferia Chronicles
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Old 12-04-2011, 03:38 AM
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Nice one, cerindclvr! I loved the ending, very creative way for Ashley to "show some fangs", as they said. It's easy for these stories to run away with one and become too long, like you said, but I for one really liked this skirmish.
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