I think what uh, Hentai Muncher was trying to say is that your comment did come across as a little entitled, given that many authors have written arguably better stuff here and gotten about half as much or less comments/criticisms. That said, your enthusiasm and frequency of posting is appreciated -- it's one of your better qualities. But not everyone checks here every day, and most of the people who read any stories are going to click 'thanks' at best. A sad state of affairs, sure, but you shouldn't feel as under appreciated as you sound. I know how, when basically writing for your own enjoyment and the enjoyment of others, a writer must get as much feedback as humanly possible. It fuels him. Checking your thread again and again and not finding any commentary is frustrating and discouraging. Believe me I know.
As for your writing itself; I've given my two cents in the past and it still amounts to "you have potential, keep at it and work on becoming a better writer in general." The story content/idea of your work isn't really the problem to me, it's your technical expertise. As for the "artistry" of it all, Kyrel pretty much nails it in the previous post:
"What I'd like to see would be longer stories with a better build-up and some more drawn out description of the events in the stories. IMO some of the stories seem to get a little repetitive"
all in all I appreciate your contributions... I think you're just suffering, at least in part, from the lack of traffic on the fiction forum here. Keep writing bro.
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