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Originally Posted by JackNY51
Posts are going to be coming out MUCH slower. I hate to sound stuck up, but I feel like my storys are not getting the appreciation that corresponds to the efforts that I put into them... Maybe my style of writing would be more appreciated on another board.  |
I've been holding my tongue for a while now, but this new post really rubs me the wrong way. You want feedback? Here's your feedback: you're not very good. You're stories just aren't sexy. They have no psychology whatsoever. Two or more women fight each other and eventually one or all of them end up naked. Plus there's always various spelling mistakes.
I have a fetish for stories involving female wrestlers getting their clothes forcibly stripped off, which is why I read your other series despite your limited skills. I really miss The Pac, but he doesn't post here anymore (plus I've read his more recent stories on another website and apparently he's now into some overly dark ad violent stuff now.) I was really hoping you'd be able to fill the void he left, because really anything is better than nothing. But if you're gonna pull this prima donna nonsense, then forget it.
If you want to keep writing, then keep writing. If you don't, then don't. Being a comment wh*re is not cool.