Thread: [Non Fiction Stories - Straight Sex] Ants on the beach
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Old 09-18-2011, 07:46 PM
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Nice story, but a little paragraphing goes a long way. Also, couldn't agree more...the economy is beyond bad. Opportunities are scarce.
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