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Originally Posted by cerindclvr
I think what he's trying to say is that it shouldn't be so easy for one girl to win. It becomes obvious pretty early on which girl is going to win, usually, and if you strongly suspect the winner and turn out to be right it's less surprising... and after a while, some surprises would be good to make it interesting.
So basically if one girl seems to have the upper hand, even if she is going to win eventually, have the other girl put up more of a fight, maybe make it look like she might actually win.
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Thanks for "being me" when I was away and unable to respond. That was exactly what I meant!
Another suggestion: Heel turns and face turns. Include some swerves and so on, if possible!
