Thread: [Fictional Stories - ENF] The Fantasy Wrestling Show
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Old 09-06-2011, 07:01 AM
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Originally Posted by cerindclvr View Post
Great concept! Can't wait to see the next one. I'm not too familiar with the wrestling divas so I can't give an opinion on who, only that I DO want more.
On comments and critiques, I can say that the description started out strong, with the outfits and the girls, but it seemed to lose steam before the end. Stacy keibler was naked very quickly, and Im not entirely sure how. Also, once the girls had been quickly stripped, their humiliation was pretty brief.
Overall a good story, I think this can go great places..!
Thanks very much! I know it lost out on the end but that was because I thought I was going to put all four matches in one post, but i decided against it, so the next match, which I hope I will post tonight, will Jheng very in depth.
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