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jeswan 03-31-2013 02:03 AM

The Lady of the Bush
 
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Hello Everyone,

I've never written a story before and decided to try with an ENF one first. This story is about a real-estate agent (Jenny) who ends up in multiple prolonged ENF situations. It takes a while to get into the first ENF, however my intention was to setup reasonable issues that would cause the situation to be much worse down the track. Or at least that's how I considered it. Note the story does contain traces of blood, however it's necessary for the story and excessive swearing. Being this as my first I hope I captured any gramma errors and typos haha, please consider this while reading. :)

Hope you all enjoy and please provide me with any constructive feedback to help for future works.

Thanks!

Note: This story is for OCC forums only, it is not to be used in any other forum. Please respect my decision with this and do not post elsewhere.

jimmythehand 03-31-2013 09:58 PM

Good story; thanks for sharing. I was expecting the protagonist to get out of the initial difficulty early on, but then have have the video footage come back to haunt her, so the way it did go was surprising to me but no less enjoyable. I'm sure I'd enjoy the possible sequel hinted at at the end, possibly introducing some more friends of different body types.

jeswan 04-01-2013 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by jimmythehand (Post 1470081)
Good story; thanks for sharing. I was expecting the protagonist to get out of the initial difficulty early on, but then have have the video footage come back to haunt her, so the way it did go was surprising to me but no less enjoyable. I'm sure I'd enjoy the possible sequel hinted at at the end, possibly introducing some more friends of different body types.

Thanks jimmythehand, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D, I was going to return "them" in relation to the "footage" predicament in the final part of the story, but decided I'd involved "them" enough already. I'm certainly interested in writing a sequel, will just make the time. :)


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