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bob irons 04-12-2011 12:40 PM
room service
 
I was staying in a motel and having a wild affair with the desk clerk. one day after returning to my room and taking a shower. the phone rings it was the desk girl asking what i was doing? i said just got out of shower.she asked if i was wet and naked? i said yes.then she said i'll be right there.before i could get back to the bathroom there was a knock on the door.i looked out the peephole it as her.so i opened the door in the nude.she came in fast and shut the door. want more?

topdogger 04-12-2011 02:34 PM
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Originally Posted by bob irons (Post 909126)
I was staying in a motel and having a wild affair with the desk clerk. one day after returning to my room and taking a shower. the phone rings it was the desk girl asking what i was doing? i said just got out of shower.she asked if i was wet and naked? i said yes.then she said i'll be right there.before i could get back to the bathroom there was a knock on the door.i looked out the peephole it as her.so i opened the door in the nude.she came in fast and shut the door. want more?
No not really

topdogger 04-12-2011 04:00 PM
Far be it from me....
 
I'm not here to judge whether or not the o/p is full of shite (although I suspect you are right). Some of the best "true" stories on here seem fictional, merely because they are so well written and transport the reader to a place where they can imagine the exploits happening in front of them.

That is sadly not the case here. One short paragraph and then the question - "want more?"

Well no actually I don't.

If I'm outta line here then I'm sure I'll be smacked down but hey, if she's such a massive sl*t then slam her against the wall of the Motel and pull her panties to her knees, whip out your mobile and get her to say "cheese"!

Secondly, grab my interest, fill me with details, how did she smell? What colour was her underwear? Did she belch after swallowing?

Just try to stop it from merely being words -after all, this section isn't called "Erotic Single Paragraphs"

;)

the_jammer 04-12-2011 08:06 PM
Ditto

If you're gonna tell a story, tell us the story. If you're just here to garner attention for yourself and see how many people you can gather into your following ... move along.

jjanda_2000 04-12-2011 11:57 PM
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Originally Posted by topdogger (Post 909228)
. . . after all, this section isn't called "Erotic Single Paragraphs"
- Now that's funny. Should be in the rules.

topdogger 04-13-2011 11:56 AM
Should be....
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by jjanda_2000 (Post 909482)
- Now that's funny. Should be in the rules.
Ditto :D

flintlockmdj 04-13-2011 10:47 PM
Room Service
 
My first thought after reading your little short paragraph was "Not Really". A paragraph this short must reflect the size of your dick:p

majinman 04-14-2011 12:10 AM
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Originally Posted by flintlockmdj (Post 910132)
My first thought after reading your little short paragraph was "Not Really". A paragraph this short must reflect the size of your dick:p
Witty. No, honest.

We have 4-5 dudes shooting down this story. Do more people need to pile on their disbelief?

topdogger 04-14-2011 05:28 AM
Yes & no....
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by majinman (Post 910176)
Witty. No, honest.

We have 4-5 dudes shooting down this story. Do more people need to pile on their disbelief?
Thought I'd already finished the job.

It wasn't a shooting down from me, just constructive critiscism :cool:


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