Making a ENF Comic. Need Ideas
 

I'm commissioning someone to draw me a ENF comic of the Powerpuff Girls. (the grown-up version of them)

The theme is practical jokes. The whole comic is about the girls playing pranks on each other.
I'm currently writing the script, but i could use some help. Does anyone have any ideas? The comic is going to be pretty long.

So, what would be some cute & naughty pranks the girls could play on each other? :D
The clothes they wear can be anything. They don't have to be wearing their regular clothes.


(Alex, can i please keep this thread in this ENF section? I mean after all, a link to a full colored ENF comic will be the result. Thank you)

Also, here's an ENF picture of Blossom. So, can i keep this thread posted here?

How about this. One of the girls gets mad at the other one for stealing her boyfriend. Anyways she gets mad and when they are in a public place she pulls down the other one's pants. The girl is wearing granny panties and it just so happens that she is in front of her arch nemesis. The girl who just got pantsed is absolutley humiliated. She tries to pull her pants up but her nemesis gets in on the action. The nemesis says somehting like "Nice panties, you old hag". She then rips off the girls granny panties. The girl just has her hands to cover her bottom half. Then she gets pushed over by her nemesis and she steals her pants. The girl's sister meanwhile is just luaghing and saying somehitng like "That's what you get for stealing my boyfriend.' Her sister eventually just runs away. Her nemsis meanwhile constantly taunts her. She has to then run through the city just covering her bush and butt with her hands. Some people in the town yell at her for being indecent and others just luagh at her.

Not a bad idea, Rohan. But the comic is going to be more playful, rather than revengeful. :)

I'd like to share a few ideas, but I don't have any at the moment. But all I know is that there NEEDS to be a part where one of the girls (preferably Blossom) ends up having to run totally naked through town in complete and total humiliation as a result of a prank. Stuff like that is what makes TAG and CAGE such awesome ENF mangas. There needs to be AT LEAST one part like that and you'll already have a win comic. :D

Let's go further...

A prank that goes wrong which ends up one of the girls having to run naked through town.

My fav pranks are bikini ones naturally. My idea is something like they are on the beach and one is sunbathing face down topless and another saw a crab so she picked it up and put it on the sunbather's back. She is startled by this and screams and she scares the crab in a way that it clings onto her bikini top and bottom and runs off with them. Now that's all I got so far, I have to remember she would have a towel and therefore is able to cover up so we need an idea to go from bad to worse for her and has to run through town. But can't these people fly? therefore she would fly above the town to avoid anyone seeing them? Just my idea anyway.

Making a ENF Comic. Need Ideas
 

1) The girls get new outfits, but they are a little loose and unsexy - Buttercup has the great idea of sending off to a mail order catalogue for some special stuff that shrinks clothes just a tad, so they are super-tight. Unfortunately Blossom uses too much, and her skirt becomes a belt - then she bursts out of her top, then her panties shrink into a piece of string, etc etc - until eventually she bursts out of the whole lot.

2) Some nasty person invents a device that can dissolve clothes into their component molecules - the PPGirls set out to foil his dastardly scheme (spoilsports) with the inevitable results.

btw who is the artist?

How about they have just finished a successful mission and have hit the showers ready to do a interview with a tv camera crew , one of the girls is taking to long in the shower so the other two steal her clothes and towel and tell the camera crew that they are ready ,camera crew come in and catch the last girl wet and naked and its live on tv.

Or they could unknowingly sabotage each others costumes and while they are fighting their costumes start to fall
apart.

I hope these are of use to you good luck with the comic mate.

I look forward to seeing the comic, unfortunatly the idea's offered would be better then I could do.

Memory lane
 

One of the all time greats from my youth ... probably politically incorrect today (isn't everything)?

It was a single cartoon panel showing a mature nude woman looking very uncomfortable, dancing on a tiny table. A couple of very young guys (ahem, I mean "obviously over 18!" :o) were sitting around the table with big grins on their face.

The caption was something like "Mrs. So-and-So had to entertain the neighborhood boys."

I don't remember any of the rest of the story, but I'll never forget the embarassed look on her face!

First of all, I appreciate everyone's warm reception here at OCC. :) Thanks for having me.
I appreciate all the ideas, too.

Running through a town naked sounds awesome. That's definitely a keeper. :D Should she run straight home? Or should she face some obstacles on her way?

As for stolen clothes while showering, I like that one, too. A guy on WWOEC suggested that it should be Blossom who gets her clothes stolen. But to be cute and sexy, the girls leave her ribbon she wears in her hair. I thought that was really good.

The comic is going to be drawn by Pal Comix. http://palcomix.com/comics.html
I've already talked to them about it. They asked me what style I wanted the comic drawn in.
Obviously rounder butts, wouldn't you say? :D

I have commissioned other artists, too. I commissioned a guy named Sigurd to draw this for me: http://sigurdhosenfeld.deviantart.co...prank-81990953
Like it? :p


Since everyone is helping out, I feel like the comic is no longer mine, but now it's everyone's. So remember, the comic can go anyway we want and can be as long as we want, so feel free to give me any ideas that you have. No matter how outrageous it may seem, we're under no-one's guide line, so we can do whatever we want! :D
We have so many things that could go into this comic, but their all mixed up. So we need to discuss things, and share ideas to get a steady flow of how they all work out.
But please stay on topic, thanks.


As for my ideas, I was thinking about a scene with a water hose(s). What's a good way a water hose(s) can be used for a prank?

:)

Here's a fun one...

How's this: the girls are all going to a pool and one of them suggests that they all swap bathing suits, just to mix things up. What the other girls don't know is that she has brought a bathing suit made out of sugar and spice, one which will dissolve on contact with water and leave the unfortunate girl she traded with completely naked. What she doesn't know is that the other two girls had the exact same idea.

Hose idea -
 

Let's uphold a story of "Jenny" from Todd_cheese or Biker (Not sure who wrote it between them)
http://www.geocities.com/todd_cheese...tsSprayed.html

Most of yous should know the background of Jenny and Ashley...

Taken out of it is this quote
So the idea is, it starts out as a plain water pistol fight between them, but one decides to go get a bigger gun then the others do til two team up on one and get one of those big high pressure hoses and well you get the rest. Now if you think, one will be naked, with nothing to cover up with in whatever place you want them to be, must I say more?

Glad you like the idea! I'm still thinking of how it would work out exactly. As far as how Blossom would get home, I'm thinking it should start out with her hiding and no one seeing her so that the tension builds up, but gradual obstacles eventually force her out into the open for the full humiliation. And then the long streak home, drawn out to REALLY get the humiliation, all the way until she gets home.

As for HOW she ends up buck naked, I do have a small idea. Instead of it being a result of a prank or a prank gone wrong from the girls, it maybe could involve Mojo Jojo battling her and using a ray gun that accidentally gets set on low so that it only destroys her clothes, including her shoes and socks (Cause we want her COMPLETELY naked). Or, if you want to make Mojo Jojo into a pervert, have him use a ray gun intentionally designed to strip girls or destroy their clothes. Whatever you prefer. I'll try to think of a few more scenarios for you to consider.

Another little idea: The girls have a slumber party with some friends. Truth or Dare occurs. Naughty dares commence. Eventually Bubbles or Buttercup ends up being dared to walk outside in just a towel. But as Bubbles/Buttercup walks out, the other girls rip her towel away and lock her out naked. Hilarity and humiliation ensues as she tries to get back into the house. A lot of chaos can happen, like, she almost gets caught by the neighbor as she tries to get in through a window. She has to hide throughout the neighborhood as she seeks help. And then finally makes a big scene in front of the house, threatening to destroy the entire front of the house to get back in, and she doesn't realize she is drawing a crowd until it's gigantic. Surrounded by people, she's frozen in humiliation for a moment before rushing the front door and causing a mess.

Definitely sounds like a good one for Buttercup. :D

Great ideas, guys. :D
What kind of obstacles could force Blossom out into the open?
Loved the slumber party one. :)
And the hose and bikini ideas are cool, too.

Here's some of mine:

The girls cut a heart-shaped hole in the back of Bubbles' jeans.

Itching powder in bra and panties.

Very hot muscle rub placed in Buttercup's underwear. (Ouch! :eek:)


Well, i'm drawing a blank for now.
Anymore ideas? :D

Some basic ideas
 

Depantsed though that's probably a given.
water + white top = nice
A bad guy whos... sharking everyone? like the japanese.
lifted skirt for whatever reason... maybe even contrasted with some exhibition of one of the girls freeballin'
a guy possibly of the boyfriends or good friends walks in on one having a shower.
Thats some basic ideas

I also must add, with the towel ending up naked idea, how old are the pp girls? Are they still in school or in college? because I was thinking, instead of a slumber party, in a changing room possibly at school

read this for inspiration
http://www.thatsembarrassing.com/story-849.htm

I'm not sure. I was thinking you could do something like in TAG, where the girl gets scared when 2 older women catch her, and she darts out into the opening without thinking. Maybe for Blossom, there can be a chain reaction. Like, she gets scared by a random cat, freaks out and backs into a random women which causes her to accidently dart off into the street.

See, this is what happened in TAG, in case you've never seen it:

Wow, thanks for all the ideas, guys. :)
Soon I will post a rough script of how the events might go, and everyone can give me their input on it.


So far, i've e-mailed bbmbbf, the guy who runs the commissions at Pal Comix, but he's yet to reply.
So I sent him a note on his Deviantart page, but he told me he only responds to his e-mails, and i'd have to be patient.
It's been a week, and he's yet to reply. :(

Anyone else had any experiences with Pal Comix being slow?

I think the girls should have much bigger ahem assets, I really don't like flat-chested girls in my porn.

Anyway there's the usual pantsing and sharking as you probably know.

And there's some other simple pranks like attaching the back of someon'es clothes/swimsuits to a hook a doorknob or having them shut between a door. That way when they walk away they rip or come off.

I can just imagine a scene at a local pool. Bubbles is on the high dive (the really high dive) scared to jump. Buttercup is next and she's impatient with Bubbles stalling and quivering. So she attaches both parts of Bubbles bathing suit to the guard rails (without Bubbles knowing) then convinces her to do a running jump ('just close your eyes run to the end and jump, then open your eyes'). Bubbles does and then rip tear snap shred she's now naked and free falling. Much to our advantage her clothes are at the top of the high dive meaning if she wants her clothes back (which may be torn to bits anyway) she has to go out weave through everyone in line climb up and get them.

For added fun have Bubbles try just that and then have Buttercup or blossom push her off back into the pool before she can grab them.

Next we have the sign switcheroo where someone switches the signs saying male and female locker room this can work both ways.

Have the signs switched before girl X walks into the room. She can start taking off her towel while entering and presto she's been spotted by a whole bunch of guys (some changing) and has to leave.

Or my favorite the other way.

Girl X (pick one) showers before going for a swim. She goes into the empty girls locker room starts showering and listens to an i-pod while showering. While she's inside another girl switches the signs and boys start coming into the room where they all get a GREAT look at her (while wet and showering). Because she's listening to her i-pod she has no idea what's going on until she's finished which by that time a whole throng of people have shown up. She then screams and has to rush out (and who knows what she does in the panic perhaps leave her clothes or run into someone leaving her in a weird position).

Finally there's sun tanning which could have great potential (for revenge). One of them is lying down naked in one of those artificial sun tanning things. She falls asleep the others take her out and put her somewhere (perhaps on a table at an arcade who knows). Ok that last one isn't so great.

I distinctly remember from the show that Bubbles has a large fear of cockroaches. Who knows what kind of hillarity would ensue if a few of those suckers were dropped down her shirt/bra/panties/whatever.

And then there's changing shacks which could be set to collapse by some clever pranksters beforehand.

Oh and I'm not sure how you can work this into the comic but I remember a great gag from the Marx Brothers.

It's really simple there's a hallway with bathrooms with large signs halfway up the walls in big letters saying 'MEN' and 'WOMEN' (yes they were all caps). Harpo is leaning on one of them and a random guy comes along sees harpo leaning on the men sign and walks through the door. We hear a lady (off-screen) scream he runs out startled looks at Harpo who doesn't change his expression then leaves.

It turns out Harpo was leaning on (and covering) the 'WO' part of 'WOMEN'

Oh and yes the grils can fly but there is a way around it.

Just say that parts of chemical X (read flying) wear off over time to the point where thy don't work.

Or you could make them work randomly like at night or maybe they turn off at the Worst Possible (tm).

or it doesn't work if they are embarrassed?

Which is the opposite of ultimate girls who are the most powerful when they are embarrassed which is cool because their clothes disappear... oh god how I loved that show for the embarrassment.

That's supposed to say Worst Possible Moment (tm).

Perhaps you could enlgihten me on that show, I've never heard of it before.

I have an idea well 2 ideas with a similar theme.

One girl is in the shower or sleeping (naked or in underwear take your pick). The other two girls rush in and frantically scream that there's a fire and that she need sto leave. The other girl runs downstairs in a towel or bedsheet with the other girls following her out. The minute she gets outside the other girls quickly snap away her bedsheet/towel and lock her out. The other girl screams drawing a crowd (or not, but she is locked out).

The second one involves school. Now find a way for one girl to become naked in a main part of the school near the entrance or outside. She should preferably be tied up. Now when this happens she should think that because class is in session for the next 45 minutes she should be fine. Then someone pulls the fire alarm drawing THE ENTIRE SCHOOL out to where she is (You could make her bubbles and have her cry if you were really feeling cruel.)

Oh and I really do like the embarrassing stories page someone mentioned earlier pity it hasn't been updated in a long time.

Perhaps we can draw inspiration from some of the stories, like this one (one of my favorites)
http://www.thatsembarrassing.com/story-1092.htm

or this one
http://www.thatsembarrassing.com/story/1126

or this one
http://www.thatsembarrassing.com/story-977.htm

(man reading those stories really makes you feel like a sadist sometimes)

I gotta hand it to you, Ratman. Those are some of the best ideas i've yet to hear. I love them!
This comic might not be long enough to hold every idea, though.

Ok, so here's what we've got together, so far:

*Blossom is forced to streak through town completely nude.

*One of the girls gets locked outside naked. I vote Buttercup.

*A prank involving swimsuits is done. I vote Bubbles.

How does all this sound?

sounds good to me

How about this.......
 

The Powerpuff Girls use their powers to strip other women in public. The women could be deserving of this or the girls could do it to them just for fun.

I look forward to seeing the comic. Anything that involves girls and public nudity is great.

The bikini and towel ideas are good, but the best scenario would have them fully clothed in a very public spot, like a mall or school. Then somehow one of the girls (or all) somehow lose or are stripped of every stitch of their clothes, including shoes and socks, for total and humiliating public nudity. To make it sexier, their clothes are either lost, stolen or totally ruined so they have nothing to put back on.

This wouldn't be the ppg comic he all ready has up would it? (And if it is how do I get to chapter 1?)

I second this. Have this happen to Bubbles. There are hardly any ENF comics where the girl is stuck at school or a mall, naked.

Mall
 

One trying on clothes (bathing suits?) , the others take her clothes from under the door while she is waiting for another suit to try then pull the fire alarm...maybe she ends up outside the mall sneaking around looking at all the clothes INSIDE the mall :)

She finds small things to cover with only to continually lose them

Here's a goofy idea I had... A "Schoolgirls's Revenge" Tale.

I even did a few photoshop pics for it (I'll post one here), but I don't think I'll finish it. I used Natalie Mejia from the "Pussycat Dolls Girlicious" show as the photoshop model, partially because she fit the profile. Totally hot, but very stuck up (anyone who saw the show knows what I'm talking about).


The Premise:
1) One girl is a stuck up b*tch (Natalie), so another girl decides to get revenge

2) As part of an "initiation", she gets Natalie into an empty classroom and convinces her to run naked to the school pool to retrieve something (I don't know, maybe a life preserver or something).
The trick is Natalie does it 5 minutes before classes let out, giving her five minutes to get the item and get back (while the halls are empty and before the halls are filled with students).

3) Now the kicker!
After Natalie runs out of the empty classroom naked to retrieve the item, the other girl throws her clothes out the window..... Even worse, she goes down the hall and in another classroom she has assembled a bunch of their classmates! They all gather in the empty classroom waiting for Natalie's return (with cameras loaded and ready).

4) Natalie gets back, bursts into the classromm and..... SURPRISE!!!!!
She freaks out and runs out of the classroom into the hallway naked, which is now crowded with students... I don't know where it goes from there... maybe she even runs out of the school and down the street naked.

-- a couple of caps from it.. this second one is incomplete (Natalie stripping in the classroom before her streak). I didn't even clean up the photoshop edges yet.

I think that Morgan said he didn't want revenge stories... BUT it's still a grade A+ idea... AND it can be easily be turned... One of the girls decide to do the run on their will for some thrill... While gone a random person finds the clothes so she/he takes it to the lost and found.... Maybe instead of a classroom it's the school hall... and the teachers come in to prepare a surprise assembly... you get where I'm going? the teacher puts the clothes in the lost and found and then she comes back to the hall... and the bell rings for an assembly.


God just thinking about it...

Personally I think Mcskyy's story entitled "The Swim Lesson." Was a great example of the bikini thing mentioned earlier.

To Elvis
 

I like your photoshop work. When can we see more. Would love to see her in the hallway very embarrassed and everybody laughing at her. LOL!

I think the comic you're making is the pal one and if that's the case you should make an aging potion or something to make them more ahem developed.

Or if you want fast forward X years later where they are more developed and then they can have flashback episodes and skip back between the present and past (like the zelda games ... sort of).

The PPG: a life of misery and woe and more importantly embarrassment.

Consider this....
 

I think that you may all be crazy and/or sexually deprived. And then take all her cloths off!!! 8===|) ~