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NXT: Proving whose BO$$
With the influx of WWE stories to the fiction section lately, I have been inspired to try and make one myself. Now I have been quite vocal a fan of Paige in these, but there is some very good work on her already being done, and not to over-saturate the board (and also out of fear of being compared to some excellent pieces of work) I have decided not to go down the route of her (although there may or may not make an appearance at some point, you'll have to wait an see :P ). Instead, I have decided to go with an extremely under represented area of WWE; the ladies of NXT. Please give constructive criticism; if it's bad, say it's bad, I'm a big boy I can take it, and help at any point is always useful. So first attempt at a story, hope you all like it. By the way, 1993wwe, I am stealing you're colour coding idea for speech, it's too good a plan for writing. Full credit to you.
P.S-For the sake of the story, I am going to be writing this as if NXT was live. I know it's pre-taped, but just go with it. NXT: Proving whose BO$$. Chapter 1 The Full Sail crowd had been spoiled this evening; the high-flying Lucha Dragon's stormed to victory against the occult powerhouses The Ascension, with a little help from Japans greatest export Hideo "KENTA" Itami, and then seeing the the dynamic duo of the Jersey Shore Enzo and Big Cass once again proved that Sylvester Lefort was SAWFT, then humiliated the BAWLD Marcus Louis. And they still had the excitement of the true international wrestler Sami Zayn fighting "Nattie's Husband" Tyson Kidd for the right to face the Man who Gravity Forgot Adrian Neville for the NXT Championship. Tonight was indeed a good night for the raucous NXT crowd. But up next they were in for a real treat; everybody's favorite hug machine Bayley was about to face the self proclaimed BOSS of NXT Sasha Banks. The camera switched to backstage, to the NXT interviewer Devin Taylor. I would like to welcome my guest at this time, Bayley Almost before she could finish her statement, Devin was quickly huddled into a big, friendly hug from Bayley. Hi Devin! Always good to talk to such a good friend! Devin kept as much composure as she possibly could, but couldn't help but giggle a little bit at the enthusiastic nature of Bayley. OK Bayley, you have a match up next against someone who it is fair to say, has had it out for you for a long time, Sasha Banks. Are you looking to maybe put to bed the rivalry tonight? Sasha is a big meanie, she always snaps my super cool headbands, says nasty things about me, and never lets me hug her. But I don't want to keep fighting someone, I just want to have fun with my friends, and become a real Diva in the WWE, one people will remember forever. So I do hope tonight finally gets Sasha off my back After making this statement, Bayley was joined by her best friend in NXT, the feisty Irishwoman Becky Lynch. Give her hell Bayley. Show that stuck up brat that she can't lord over us any more. Show her that she's not the boss of anyone, she's just a Ratchet Bayley was thrilled to see Beckey, sporting a massive smile upon hearing the words of encouragement from her bestie Thanks Becky. I better get to the match now Good Luck. I'll be watching very intently The camera panned to the side to see where that voice came from. Standing just to the side was the imposing figure of the NXT Woman's champion Charlotte. Bayley seemed quite sheepish towards the statement from another one of her long standing rivals. T...Thanks That was all she could muster before shuffling off to her match. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Back at ringside, Bayley's music started, causing a great cheer from the crowd, eager to see their favorite woman. The inflatable waving tube men which accompanied Bayley's entrance flared into action. Bayley, donning her usual brightly colored pants and top with images of Robots and Dinosaurs practically bounced out to the top of the ramp; still as happy and excited as she was when she first started in NXT. She reached out to her waving tube men in a manner similar to a child enthralled with wonder and curiosity, before heading down to the ring, giving hugs and high fives to any fan at the front who asked for one. When she got into the ring, a large contingent of fans facing the hard camera started imitating the waving tube men, prompting Bayley to do the same. She loved NXT. She loved the fans. She loved almost everything. And the fans loved her because of it. The almost party like atmosphere of Bayley's entrance came to a screeching halt though, when Sasha Bank's music started to blare out, followed by Sasha herself sauntering out with bags of confidence. Almost immediately the fans started to boo and chant "Ratchet" at her. She didn't care what they did, she was better than all of them and by god she knew it. In her Red and Black diamante studded gear, accompanied by a large gold necklace in the shape of the word "BOSS" and her trademark slider sunglasses, Sasha strutted her way to the ring. She entered the ring and looked at Bayley, then removed her necklace and Sunglasses, revealing behind them a look of disgust in her eyes towards the master of the Hug Life. "God, she is so pathetic. I can't wait to crush her tonight. Maybe I'll make her cry, that would be great" was the only thought going through Sasha's cruel mind. With both girls in the ring and ready to go, the referee rang for the bell. The two of them walked to meet each other in the middle of the ring, and got into each other's faces. Sasha quite vigorously mouthed off to Bayley, moving her hands along with her goading words. The crowd responded to this with the chant "Bayley's gonna hug you!", an action which resulted in Bayley taking her attention away from the taunting of Sasha, and to the crowd. This only served to rile up Sasha even further, and instead of just shouting at Bayley, Sasha instead decided to take some more aggressive action, with a swift and hard slap across Bayley's face. There was enough force in it to send Bayley to the ground, clutching at her now red cheek. Not wanting to let up, Sasha immediately pounced on her downed foe with a barrage of kicks and slaps. Bayley could do very little but huddle on the floor and try and protect herself as much as possible. Sasha then went for a pin, but Bayley quickly kicked out at the 1 count. After this, Sasha picked up the battered Bayley, and tossed her out the ring with a thud, before turning and taunting the Full Sail crowd, further displaying her dominance so far in this match. Bayley gingerly crawled back into the ring and raised herself back to her feet. Sasha noticed this, and finally diverted her attention away from the crowd back to her opponent. Sasha ran towards Bayley and attempted to throw a clothesline, but Bayley ducked underneath, bouncing off the ropes, and running back towards Sasha, delivering a shoulder barge of her own. Continuing with her momentum, Bayley quickly hooked her arms around Sasha as she was getting back up, and attempted to roll her up in a small package, but only managed a 2 count. Not to be deterred, Bayley kept up the offense, picked Sasha up, and delivered a vicious snap suplex to her. Bayley was on fire now, and growing in confidence by the second. With this, Bayley decided to go a bit risky, and climbed to the top turnbuckle, and waited for Sasha to get up, intending to deliver a Crossbody. This could not come to fruition however, as Sasha cleverly leaned on the top rope as she was getting up, which was enough to knock Bayley off her balance, and send her crashing hard onto the turnbuckle. Things only got worse for Bayley however, as she fell forward, but her legs were still stuck around the turnbuckle. Bayley found herself stuck hanging upside down in the corner. Something that Sasha had not failed to notice. With a look of cruel intentions on her face, Sasha walked to the trapped Bayley, and raked her hands down her back, eliciting a scream from the poor girl, which only made Sasha laugh even more. Continuing the torturous attack to her helpless enemy, Sasha delivered a flurry of slaps to the already sore back of Bayley, before untangling her legs from the turnbuckle, causing Bayley to fall hard on her neck. Sasha was loving this fight at the moment; she had Bayley exactly where she wanted her, and she was making her suffer majorly. However, Sasha knew this fight couldn't last forever, and decided that now was probably the best time to finish Bayley off; she was almost completely out of it. Picking her nemesis up from the corner, Sasha turned the groggy Bayley around so that she was facing her back. From here, Sasha delivered a brutal Backcracker to Bayley, and then in on swift motion without letting go, used her knees to flip Bayley over, and rolled with her, to turn the move into an expertly applied Facelock. Bayley was in agony in the extremely painful submission hold. This match had really taken a lot out of her; Sasha had been giving out most of the offense, and Bayley could barely take it anymore. She was just ready to tap out, and then she heard the crowd chanting her name. No, how could she give up now. How could she let them down. She wanted to be someone that WWE fans would remember forever as a kind soul, and a great wrestler. If she wanted to be that, how could she give up now. With what little will and strength she had left, Bayley started to desperately crawl to the ring ropes. Sasha saw this, and sintched in the hold even more; the was no way in hell she was losing this now, especially not to a weirdo like Bayley. With the added pressure, Bayley had to dig deeper than she ever had before. She kept dragging and dragging across the ring, desperately reaching out for the rope. She was only inches away now, she was so close. With one final push, Bayley lunged and just managed to grab the ropes, causing a great cheer from the chanting crowd. The referee immediately called for rope break and forced Sasha to release the hold. Sasha was furious. She simply could not believe it. How did Bayley not tap out? How was she not the winner already? It was impossible; she had to win from that. There was no way Bayley could manage that. Sasha instantly got up and argued with the referee, with no real argument in mind other than she should have won with that. Sasha continued to throw her tantrum at the referee, causing the crowd to chant "Ratchet" to her once again. She never usually let this get under her skin, but right now, she was so mad that she couldn't help it. Turning towards the crowd, she screamed at them to shut up. How dare they chant that at her right now. She was the BOSS of NXT. Turning away from the crowd, Sasha was met with a rather unpleasant surprise. Bayley had got up, and stood ready for Sasha, and as soon as Sasha turned to face her, Bayley took her into a massive hug, before throwing her over with the Belly to Belly Hugplex. Bayley quickly covered Sasha after this... 1,2,3 Bayley won! She beat Sasha. She had to dig deeper than she had ever done before, she was hurting all over, and she was completely exhausted, but finally she had won the match. Sasha was thinking much more angry thoughts at this point however. How could she had lost that match? She dominated from the get go and had her locked in her deadly Facelock. So how could she lose, especially to someone as "Special" as Bayley. Now all the women would look at her like a laughing stock. Summer Rae had already left without as much as a goodbye, and she always saw Sasha as a little sidekick anyway. Charlotte also tossed Sasha aside when she was done with her. No one was scared of her. Dammit, she was meant to be the Boss of NXT; all the women were meant to cower at her mere presence. At that moment, Sasha decided she had enough of being constantly walked over by others. She had enough of losing all the time. She was going to show NXT and the world who is BOSS. Bayley was still celebrating in the ring, but could barely stand up after the grueling match. Sasha was going to make sure that she couldn't stand up period. Creeping up from the floor and behind Bayley, Sasha delivered a vicious blow to the back of Bayley's head, sending her crashing to the floor. Following this, Sasha continued to stomp on Bayley with extreme aggression. She then turned and shouted to the crowd. Look at your sweet little Bayley. Whose the Boss now?! She then turned her attention back to Bayley, and took out her hairband, which had a little design with B.M.O from Adventure Time. Sasha scowled at the childish accessory and snapped it in half before tossing it into the crowd. Sasha then grabbed Bayley by her head, and smashed her face first into the turnbuckle, sending Bayley crashing to the ground, where she could barely move. Looking down at the completely helpless Bayley, a twisted idea came into Sasha's head. She had beat Bayley, but now she thought "why not take advantage of this situation even futher? Bayley can literally do nothing to resist, she's completely gone. Yes, I'll use this time now to really humiliate her, put her in her place." Sasha then did something unprecedented for NXT. She grabbed hold of Bayley's colorful top, and began to tug it off. Bayley screamed in humiliation, but was in no fit state to fight back, so soon enough her large breasts in a bright orange bra were revealed. Sasha twirled the garment above her head laughing, then tossed it into the crowd. But she wasn't done yet, oh no. Turning back to Bayley, who had meekly tried to cover her chest by rolling onto her stomach, an action she would soon regret. With Bayley's large ass in the air, Sasha then grabbed on to her pants, and began to bring them down as well. Bayley screamed even more now, her face completely red with shame; she grabbed the front of her pants in an attempt to keep them up. Sasha's pulling had already stretched the back of Bayley's pants quite a bit, creating a whale tail exposing Bayley's orange thong to match her bra to the filming camera's, but she wanted the take it further. She wanted Bayley completely stripped to her Bra and Panties. With even more force, Sasha finally managed to counter Bayley's pulling, sending her pants past her plump ass and around her knees. Bayley's large bottom was now in full view, covered only with a tiny thong; it bounced as Bayley kicked her legs in a futile attempt to shake Sasha off. Bayley had never been this exposed or degraded before in her life, but just maybe if she could get Sasha off now, she could pull her pants back up and at least be able to walk backstage with a tiny bit of dignity. Not on Sasha's watch; disregarding Bayley's pathetic kicking, Sahsa managed to pull the pants past Bayley's ankles, leaving her curvy body completely exposed in her orange Bra and tiny Thong. Bayley was completely red in the face, and she tried to cover up with her hands. But it was no use; she was too exposed there was nothing she could do. Eventually all she did was curl up in a ball and start to cry. She thought to herself "Why would Sasha do such a thing? All I've ever been is kind and friendly. Why would she want to humiliate me so much?" The tears really started to pour out at this point. Sasha noticed this and began to hysterically laugh, before mockingly rubbing her eyes in a crybaby motion. She left the ring with Bayley's pants in her hands, leaving the poor kind hearted Bayley in the ring in complete humiliation, her sexy body completely exposed. |
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Hey wow awesome story is it all nxt or is it just Sasha and will Bayley get revenge in the near future
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Hey ok thank you for anwsering that and I will wait because this could be the best story I have seen in a long time
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Take notes smjimmie. This is an example of a PERFECT story.
The dialogue is not only broken up into different lines but its even color-coated. Its easy to read and easy to tell who is saying what. Dayjib describes everything perfectly. We know exactly where and when this story takes place. We know know exactly what each of the competitors is wearing. Dayjib also describes what both Bayley and Sasha are thinking and keeps those thoughts in tune with their distinct personalities. The match itself isn't even all that long but its broken up into paragraphs every time something big and impactful happens. The action is easy to follow and is so descriptive that I can actually see it happening in my mind. Use this as an example when you write a wrestling story. Dayjib, amazing job! That was an incredible first chapter. I love NxT, I watch it on the Network every week. Since the Total Divas are all over the program on the main brand and the AJ/Paige storyline is being restricted, NxT is the place where I go to see quality women's wrestling. It doesn't even have to be women's wrestling, just great wrestling altogether. I love that you've decided to start a story in NxT. Its a nice departure from all the mainstream WWE storylines. Bayley was the perfect first victim for Sasha. How could she humiliate someone so cute and bubbly? That's like kicking a puppy! You just cemented Sasha as not only the BOSS but also a b*tch. Just what we needed for a first chapter. I'm looking forward to future chapters. You've got a fan here! |
excellent story I can't wait for the next chapter just one question is this going to be a EUF or ENF story ?
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Dayjib, I forgot one tiny thing.
Its really just nitpicking but the green font you used for Bayley was a little too bright. I get what you were doing. It was a bright color and was full of energy just like Bayley. But the brightness of the font made it a little hard to read. Just something to keep in mind. Keep up the great work. |
Wow, thanks for such high praise MickGesitt; I was not expecting such a response. Yeah, that's what I was going for with Sasha; I really want to make her the queen b*tch of NXT, and spoiler alert, but I am obviously using Bayley as the main protagonist of the story.
One thing you did touch on, the match length. I know you weren't knocking it, but that was one thing I was concerned about; is it long enough. Maybe I'm just a perfectionist in a way. I dunno. Anyway, thank you so much for the praise. |
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Really enjoyed your story. I like the idea of using NxT, it's different and it has not been done before. I'm big fans of both Sasha and Bayley, because they both play their characters really well and I can't wait to keep reading this story. I'm excited that we may be getting stories from you and 1993wwe this weekend. Keep it up!
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Yeah, great work Dayjib. Amazing start to your story and an enjoyable read. Excited to see NXT getting some love, especially the consistently underappreciated Bayley. I'm certainly going to be following this story and can't wait to see what you have in mind. :)
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So 1993 and the guys at DoctorRipper all like this story? Seems like you're an immediate success, Dayjib! I really love how you chose something that wasn't being done. Looking forward to see the progression of Bayley and Sasha as well as other characters like Becky Lynch and Charlotte in the future.
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Just heads up, sorry about the claim last time that I could get another chapter out by the weekend, I was punching way above my weight in terms of time; work, uni, and general life stuff sorta got in the way. However, I will most certainly have something written either tonight or tomorrow night; I have pretty much a blank slate of time so I can get it done.
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NXT: Proving whose BO$$. Chapter 2
Last week, the NXT universe was shocked by the actions of Sasha Banks, after she stripped and humiliated her opponent Bayley after losing her match. The NXT locker room and Full Sail crowd have been talking none stop about this act all week; some take the side that the actions of the self proclaimed Boss of NXT were completely unacceptable, some even to the point of calling for her suspension or release, whilst others have stood by the argument that she was simply displaying where she stands, and her actions were a justified showcase of her new attitude aimed at dominating the NXT women's division. One thing is for sure though what Sasha Banks did has sent massive shock waves throughout NXT and the WWE universe at large; NXT became the most watched show on the Network this week by a huge margin, and there is even an indication of a fairly significant increase in Network buys, which certain people have directly attributed to Sasha stripping Bayley, with people watching intently to see what she is going to do next. It is also important to note that as of the start of this weeks NXT, no one has heard or seen from Bayley, with the majority of people backstage being unable to blame her wanting to hide away. The show opens with the major talking point among the crowd still being Sasha Banks leaving Bayley exposed in her Bra and Thong. Nothing like this has ever happened before, and everyone wants to know what is going to happen next; this is truly unknown territory. Would the General Manager William Regal issue any punishment against Sasha? Will Sasha continue in her attempt to exert her dominance over the NXT divas? Will Bayley show her face after her total humiliation? All these questions and more were on the minds of the people of Full Sail university. It is because of this, that the appearance of an old NXT graduate was met with a much more antagonistic response than she would usually receive. To start this weeks episode, Summer Rae's music hits, and is instantly met with extremely loud boo's; more due to the frustration of the crowd possibly not getting an answer to there questions than anything else. The as always picture perfect Summer confidently sauntered out to the ramp, and for a split second was taken aback by the unusually harsh response from the crowd, before brushing it off and continuing her return to the NXT arena. Dressed in a pair of black leggings and a pink WWE Courage, Conquer, Cure crop top, it is quite clear that Summer is not here tonight to wrestle, but instead, has been brought in this week to shill the WWE Network (despite the show being watched via the Network) with the added intention of the people backstage being that her appearance in place of Sasha or Bayley being booked may possibly stem the tide of discussion on last weeks incident. Upon making her way to the ring, Summer Rae was given a microphone to start her promo, however she found herself unable to say a word for a good minute or two, due to the deafening chants of the crowd, crying out "WE WANT BAYLEY!" and a small, but certainly audible section chanting "We Want Sasha!". Summer attempted to wait out the chants, but upon realizing that these chants would not die down however long she waited, decided to just go with her script and hope for the best. Boy we sure have a rowdy crowd tonight. This is what I love about NXT, real quality wrestling fans watching real quality wrestlers... Summer paused anticipating a cheer from the crowd; it was an obvious cheap pop comment which would surely get the crowd on her side. This was not to be, the calls for Bayley were still ringing out across the arena. Summer had to slog on to get the crowd away from Bayley here. Wrestlers like Sami Zayn... Still the crowd chanted for Bayley Hideo Itami... Again the crowd did not respond The Lucha Dragons All the crowd wanted was Bayley, and Summer was starting to get desperate M-Mojo Rawley...Charlotte Flair Summer was really starting to get flustered now; she really needed to get the crowd to stop caring about Sasha and Bayley, she was specifically ordered by William Regal and HHH themselves to divert attention away from last week. If she couldn't manage this, Summer knew she would be in real hot water backstage. She had to bring out the big guns, a phrase which even this vivacious NXT crowd would not be able to resist chanting with her. an..and you can watch all of these wrestlers and so much more on the WWE Network, for...$9.99! Nothing. The crowd did nothing with her. They just kept on chanting "WE WANT BAYLEY!" and "We want Sasha!". Summer was livid, she was given one job to do, and the crowd was giving her no help at all. They didn't even care about her. Did they know what it felt like to go out in front of all these people, only to spectacularly crash and burn? Did they realize how bad this was for Summer's career in WWE? This could bury her completely in the eyes of the WWE and NXT hierarchy. At this point, Summer decided to give up on the script, and just let her frustration out on the crowd; they had already ruined the segment for her, so what other harm could Summer do to herself now. At least she knew what she was about to say next would get a response from the crowd Boy, you guys really want to see Bayley. I would have thought all you perverts saw enough of her last week; her tiny undies left very little to the imagination. That garnered a response from the crowd, a shocked "ooohhh" echoed through the arena. Summer grinned to herself; she had finally gotten their attention, and she wasn't going to let it slip away again. By the way Bayley, super surprised at your choice of underwear; a bra and thong, I really would have expected some 8 year olds pair of My Little Pony panties from someone as "SPECIAL" as you. And as for Sasha, I find it cute that you want to be the Queen Bee around here, my little sidekick, trying to make it up in the world. So yeah, buy the Network, you never know what you'll see here in NXT; you might get to see a rat faced b*tch steal a big crybabies clothes. But remember, when you are done with these silly, ugly little girls, keep tuning into Raw if you want to see a real woman, like me. This triade of abuse from Summer aimed towards Sasha and Bayley left the NXT crowd completely stunned; they didn't know whether to boo or cheer, and ended up in a state of complete silence. A silence which did not last long, as it was broken by the theme music of Sasha Banks. She marched out with authority dressed in her set of White shorts and Black top, decorated with diamante, and her leather coat, with diamante again generously applied, spelling out the letters "SB" in the middle where the two sides of the zip meet, and BO$$ on the back. Sasha was met with what can decisively be named a mixed reaction; a third of the crowd booed her mercilessly for what she did to Bayley, another third cheered her with extreme gumption because of her new attitude, and the final third were caught between the two sides and unable to chose which they agreed with more. In any case, the arrival of the BOSS certainly picked things up to another level. Upon entering the ring, Sasha came face to face with Summer, and aggressively sn*tched the microphone from her hands. Wow, those are some strong words Summer. Where did you get the confidence to speak so abubtlly? Was it when you slept with that Dancer to worm yourself onto Raw? Or when you acted all hot and heavy with that old hag Layla to keep yourself relevant after loverboy dumped you? Or was it when you were filming your stellar performance in the Straight to Discount bin hit "Marine 4"? Oh, and as always, good to see you Summer. Summer responded to this only with a less than subtle fake chuckle, before getting another microphone from the outside area Oh look at you, acting like a big shot. Isn't that adorable? I remember when I took you under my wing, you were a chronic loser, you were a goody two shoes, and absolutely no one knew or cared who you were, on your way to getting the infamous future endeavors quote. And now look at you, thinking you can hang with the big girls because you are something in the minor leagues. Well keep reaching for the stars kid, even though you'll never be good enough for Raw, never stop trying anyway. Hmm, that's funny Summer, I don't remember you doing anything like I did last week; I left Bayley a humiliated crying mess, and gave the whole world a look at her exposed body. Maybe if you would have done the same thing with Paige and Emma you could have been something more than the valet you are today Phhh, Please. You're taking pride in making Bayley cry? Give me a break; Bayley cries when you tell her robots and her little toys are stupid, so forgive me if I don't think humiliating and making her cry is a big achievement The tension at this point was at breaking point, the two former friends were inches away from each others faces, glaring into each others eyes. The crowd anticipated this, and pretty much everyone in the arena was on the edge of there seat, just waiting for the situation to explode. Well, maybe I shouldn't end it at her then... Instantly after saying this, Sasha punched Summer Rae hard across the face, sending her sprawling to the floor. The Trauma Queen then followed suit by unzipping her leather jacket and throwing the garment hard at Summer Rae, before then delivering a flurry of stomps on the downed Summer Rae. Summer had no intention of fighting tonight and was completely unprepared for this assault; all she could do was cover up as best she can, until she finally saw a small opening; a momentary pause in Sasha's attack. Instantly, Summer rolled out of the ring, before attempting to run away. This plan was not the most effectively conceived plan however; Summer was already in a lot of pain, and once she rolled out of the ring, Summer found herself on the floor struggling to get up. She did manage to reach her feet, her body bent over hanging on to the guard rail; unfortunately for Summer, Sasha Banks had caught up to her by this point, and delivered a stiff knee right into her stomach, severely winding Summer Rae, causing her legs to give way, making her crumple back down on the ground. Sasha continued the assault by tugging at Summers luscious golden locks, bringing out a loud screech and forcing her back to her feet; Sasha did not relent however, instead she proceeded to throw Summer face first into the steel ring post, almost completely knocking Summer out. With her new enemy now in a position with very little power to fight, Sasha looked to the crowd with a smug smile across her face, giving them a knowing look and nodding her head. Sasha bent down to Summer Rae, and pulled off her Courage, Conquer, Cure crop top, exposing her white lace bra; a garment suiting the high maintenance nature of Summer Rae. It wasn't going to end there though, and everyone knew it, not after how far Bayley was stripped last week. Sasha picked up the still extremely groggy Summer Rae, who was still oblivious to her current state of partial undress, and unceremoniously bundled her back into the ring. Once both of them were back inside, Sasha again brought the completely spaced out Summer Rae to her feet, before throwing her shoulder first past the middle turnbuckle into the steel post. This left Summer in a rather compromising position; stuck bent over the middle turnbuckle and barely conscious. Not to let this situation get passed her, Sasha immediately moved to Summers behind and grabbed on to her black leggings. Sasha once again nodded to the crowd, who were going wild at this point, having no positive affinity to Summer Rae, and thus more than happy to see her get stripped. Sasha then started pulling at the leggings with such ferocity that they actually ripped in places before they were fully pulled off, exposing Summers tiny white lace g-string, highlighting that she was indeed wearing a matching set of expensive and sexy lingerie. This left Summer Rae in an extremely humiliating position; bent over with her toned backside completely exposed in an extremely small g-string. Summer was still too out of it to notice however; this was not something Sasha could accept. No, Summer had to know right now what Sasha had done to her, and feel this ultimate humiliation. So Sasha delivered an extremely hard slap right to Summer's ass; this served as an effective measure to bring Summer back to reality, as the stinging shot brought her back with a jolt. Reaching back to rub her bum, Summer instantly realized her predicament with her tiny lingerie on display, and responded by screaming, and rather indignantly struggling to get out of the gap between the turnbuckles; a feat she managed relatively quickly, but not without a degrading scramble on her part. Once she was free, all Summer could do was cower in the corner; she stated earlier how much of a crybaby Bayley was after she got stripped, but now that it had happened to her, after the world had seen her exposed in her lace bra and g-string, all Summer wanted to do was cry herself. Sasha had not completed her plan however. Oh no. Bayley was stripped to her Bra and Thong, and that was the start of Sasha's new reign of dominance. If she wanted to let the NXT universe know how serious she was, Sasha knew she had to up the antee. So with this in mind, Sasha grabbed the cowering Summer Rae, before slapping her across the face, and then trapping the distracted woman by wrapping the top and middle ropes around her arms. With Summer know stuck in the ropes, Sasha exited the ring to the other side of the apron, and made her way behind Summer. Once there, Sasha grabbed onto the back of Summer's bra. Summer instantly started to freak out, struggling and shaking her head whilst screaming NO! You said I made a splash in the minor leagues, but that doesn't make me main roster material. Well then, lets see if an even bigger splash will take me to that level. Before Sasha could do anything though, the NXT Woman's Champion Charlotte and Bayley's best friend Becky Lycnh came running down the ramp, causing Sasha to retreat into the ring, picking up her jacket, before baiting the two girls into the ring, so that Sasha could roll back out and run away halfway up the ramp. Summer went immediately up to Charlotte on her knees, hands wrapped around the champions waist giving thanks none stop. Summer then proceded to stand up and tried to hug Charlotte again, but instead was met with an extremely hard punch, knocking the already damaged diva completely out in a very revealing positin; on the floor, legs spread and arms to the side. Don't try and hug me. I didn't do this for a b*tch like you; given half a chance you'd do exactly what Sasha is doing right now. No, I came out now because as NXT Women's Champion, I cannot accept such behavior in my division. Sasha, you seem set on stripping you opponents and enemies at every chance you get; this is meant to be a place of true wrestling, and you are ruining it for us women. So now I am coming after you, for the sake of my division. And trust me when I say I will beat you, and hard, for what you are doing here Once she said this, Becky Lynch, with pure anger, sn*tched the mic straight from Charlottes hands Screw the division, or any pure wrestling crap, this is personal between me and you now Ratchet after what you did to my friend. I already talked to GM Regal, and he's agreed to a match next week; Me vs you Sasha. And I don't care if it gets me on your bad side Charlotte, but as soon as a beat you, I'm going to do to you exactly what you did to Bayley and Summer here. Sasha just looked at the two girls in the ring, her face still showing clear cockiness, before she shouted at them to bring it. Sasha then turned around, and that cocky look turned to one of fear, as if she just saw a ghost. Standing behind her, in casual gear of spandex gym tights and a purple nike top, was the woman she stripped last week, Bayley. Before Sasha could do anything, Bayley had put her in a hug, and then delivered a belly to belly hugplex on the ramp. This was no ordinary hugplex however, as Bayley had held on tight to Sasha's black top, and in the process of completing the hugplex, had pulled the top up. Once she had completed the move, Bayley kept pulling the top despite the struggling Sasha, and eventually managed to pull it off all together. Sasha's purple bra was exposed to the NXT universe, sending the crowd wild. Sasha with a look of pure shock on her face instinctively brought her arms across her chest to hide her bra; this time she was the one humiliated. Not wanting to be seen like this too long, Sasha scrambled to her feet, and quickly put her leather jacket on to cover her top half. All the while Bayley waved the top above her head, before handing it to a young fan in the front row, who she obviously also gave a hug. Sasha looked on at the scene infuriated at being humiliated like this, even for only a few seconds All the while Bayley, Charlotte, and Becky looked on happy at this minor bit of retribution before they could finally defeat and humiliate Sasha, and the crowd goes crazy for such a return from Bayley, chanting a slight variant of there usual favorite chant; tonight chanting "Bayley's gonna STRIP YOU!" |
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Wow awesome chapter man just a few questions if you don't mind
1) why did you have summer wear white 2) why did Bayley come back so early 3) the match with Sasha vs Becky will that be under a stipulation like a bra and panties or what not 4) why didn't Bayley try to strip Sasha of her bottoms |
Hey can say can u do that story for me that smjimme can't please
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Why are you bothering him about this you know he is on a new story that he just started and doesn't hàve time to work on other things besides his story and real life and I want you and you alone to write the aj vs Lita bra and panties match and don't ask anyone else that really is annoying
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The Saga Continues
Ignoring whatever it is those other two are going on about, it's great to see this perfect story continue.
The best thing about this chapter in my eyes is how you made sure to spend time covering the fallout of Sasha's action from the last chapter. You showed the world reacting to the sudden shift in programming with the boost in Network Subscriptions and that NxT had become the most-watched show on the Network. That's what I've always wondered about in stories like these: What everyone's reaction is? How does the outside work suddenly reacts to a PG-13 shift from what was previously a PG show? So great job taking the time to cover that. I loved how you had the fans no-sell Summer and her cookie-cutter promo. You mentioned Triple H and Regal trying to ignore Sasha's actions like the WWE often tries to do with something popular that they didn't create but the Full Sail crowd kept going like it was a Chicago show and kept chanting until Summer was forced to break away from her script and finally acknowledge them. Great stuff. I also really enjoyed Sasha ripping Summer apart on the mic. In addition to the WWE Universe's reactions, you made sure to show the reactions of almost all the NxT Divas' Division. You showed that Sasha was proud of herself for her actions and has decided to keep doing what got her noticed last week so she can finally make a name for herself. Becky and Charlotte were both upset about Sasha's actions but for different reasons. Becky doesn't so much care about the stripping as much as she wants to get revenge for her friend while Charlotte wants to maintain the legitimate image of "her" NxT Divas Division. And of course, Bayley's bounced back and is out to repay Sasha in kind. So now because of her actions Sasha has the majority of the NxT Divas Division gunning for her. Once again, great job giving all the girls a chance to reveal their motivations and develop character. This is better way better writing than the WWE puts out. Also since you asked about it last time, I'll give you my take on the action. This wasn't a match, just a beat down so it didn't need to go on very long. The ending was great, Sasha throwing Summer into a ring post is definitely enough to knock Summer out long enough for Sasha to strip her. However, I don't know if Sasha did enough damaged to Summer in the ring for her to be in so much pain that she couldn't escape when she slipped out of the ring. I've seen both superstars and divas recover from and even turn around beat downs that were way worse. No worries though, we'll just say that Summer couldn't get away because was caught so off guard and unprepared by Sasha's sudden attack. I'm looking forward to next chapter. Sasha's gonna be caught out in the open when she faces Becky in the next chapter so that's the perfect time for Bayley and any of the other divas that she's angered to go after her for revenge. Better watch out Sasha because "BAYLEY'S GONNA STRIP YOU!" |
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2)Again, why not. I didn't want Bayley entirely down and out, she's the main character. I wanted to show that despite what happened to her, she still stood strong 3)No stipulation, but Sasha has made it pretty clear she intends to strip her opponwnts after matches to prove a point, and Becky intends to strip Sasha in retribution. 4)You gotta realise that it was meant to be a very short amount of time described; onpy a few seconds. Sasha had already scrambled away before Bayley had a chance. Also from a storytelling point of view, I don't want to strip Sasha so early. |
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Thanks for your kind words on the character motivation as well, yeah that was totally the mindset I was looking to give each girl. One thing I hope came across alright as well was the mindset of Charlotte; that she has no time for the whole stripping game, and wants no part of it, so when she says she wants to beat Sasha, she doesn't mean beat and strip, she just means battering her. I would also hope that these motivations reflect a piece of each girls personality; I have one in mind for every girl, all distinct from each other, and I would hope that you all could pick up on that. And on the beat down, again thanks for the kind words. On the rolling outside thing, I chalk that down to me not describing the situation good enough; what I was intending to describe was one of those moments you see where a wrestler rolls out the ring, but instead of landing on there feet to run away, they roll straight onto the floor with a thud. After which they need to grab the side to help themselves up, which usually leads to there attacker running out the ring and getting them. All very fast; like 5 seconds or so. So it was less Summer being so beat down she couldn't move, and more she was so hurt/frantic that she couldn't get out the ring with grace, which resulted in her being easy for Sasha to catch. Thanks again, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter (coming pretty soon, I mean it this time, because I want to get it out there before I really start to get snowed under with work) |
Dayjib, another solid episode. I like how you're going for the slow build-those tend to have the best payoffs. Keep up the quality work.
Also, Jimmie and Dylan, you guys need to stop posting off topic stuff in Dayjib and 1993wwe threads. It's disrespectful and annoying. If your comments do not pertain to the story, keep it in your own threads. |
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I was telling him to stop asking writers to do that match for him and I knew that they were busy so I told him to stop asking because its annoying because if I didn't who knows how many people or times he would ask one of us on this forum
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Ok, quick update on this since it seems like I'm neglecting it. I'm not, I'm really not. It's just work caught up with me much quicker than expected. So where does that leave this story? Well my job has given me quite a few days off, and I am not in Uni Monday and Tuesday, so expect a chapter one of those days. That and the week after, I have reading week, so have plenty if time, so to make up for all the time I spent not writing, I plan on getting quite a few chapters done that week.
Just letting you know, I am still thinking on this. |
I feel like a right scumbag for breaking the promise again, but AGAIN work has got in the way. I don't think I've got used to the time-frame involved when studying law (as a former history student) so the amount of free time I say I have is actually inaccurate. Tomorrow if I'm lucky I might get something out.
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NXT: Proving who's Bo$$: Chapter 3
The stripping of Summer Rae and the brief exposure of Sasha Banks on last weeks NXT drove the excitement around Full Sail through the roof. Once again NXT was the most watched show on the WWE network, this time by an even larger margin, and the trend of increased network buys continued, and even escalated rather significantly. And with the announcement of the Sasha Banks vs Becky Lynch match for this week, the buzz was deafening, everyone in NXT and the WWE universe at large did not know what was going to happen, but damn did they want to see it all unfold. Behind the scenes however, the major WWE executives were not as pleased as one would expect with such improved figures. They were seriously worried about the issue of the diva's stripping each other; what if mothers complain? What if one of the diva's files a formal complaint? What if the TV networks refuse to work with a company which may be considered sleazy to continuously strip women. All this resulted in a roster wide speech from General Manager William Regal to all those in development imploring the women to stop, or face the consequences in the future. This was followed by Charlotte talking to all the women in NXT promoting the idea that they should be women of respect and warriors in the ring, instead of acting like catty high-schoolers; putting it frankly that "We got to show those Bimbo's on the main roster what real women's wrestling is. Needless to say, Sasha Banks did not turn up to either talk After the first bout in this week's NXT, a 21 second Baron Corbin squash match, with the Full Sail crowd counting the seconds until the pin down, the feed went to the NXT backstage correspondent, Devin Taylor. Ladies and Gentlemen, please welcome my guest at this time, Becky Lynch The Irish beauty confidently bounces on to the interview set, a huge smile adorning her face Hello Devin, what a great day it is today Wow, you seem to be in a much better mood than I would have expected. You have your match with Sasha Banks tonight, and Sasha has been making a big impact lately, and given that she's been...erm..using some unorthodox tactics Stripping female wrestlers who stand in her way? Come on Devin you can say it, even if the bosses don't like it, everyone knows what you are talking about Devin was caught a bit off guard by the blunt response from Becky; management was very clear, no direct mention of Sasha's stripping. Taking a moment to compose herself, Devin found her word again, retuning to the interview, but still doing it whilst skirting around the "stripping" situation. Ahem...Well...Anyway, with such a big match against such a ... unpredictable opponent, surely there is a little bit of apprehension from you tonight? Absolutely not Devin, you see I know I'm not losing tonight. I know I'm not getting stripped tonight. But someone is, and I think you know who that is. Sasha is going to see a real different side of me tonight, the real aggression I have, and I was hardly known for my calm nature before. Tonight she is going to feel the consequence of her actions stripping Summer and Bayley these past few weeks, and she's not going to come out of that ring the same. Sasha Banks, your time is calling, your little run as the "BO$$" is over. I am going to really punish you tonight. The intensity in Becky's speech created real tension in the backstage area, causing Devin to get a little bit nervous, especially since she was already flustered by Becky's forthright nature before. This tension however was very quickly dispelled with the arrival of the ever so enthusiastic Bayley, with a HUGE hug to her best friend Becky Lynch, and a hyper HIGH TEN to Devin Taylor. I know you can do it Becky, you are one of the strongest, friendliest, most awesomest people I know; if you say you are going to get that bully Sasha, then I completely trust you. And me and Charlotte are going to be right there at ringside to see you beat her, and see Sasha's face when she knows she's finished. And then when you've won, we can all go out an celebrate with all sorts of cool things, like...go-carting, or something, it'll be super-sweet. Becky could only respond to this with a light chuckle, before wrapping her own arms around Bayley's neck in a sot hug Oh Bayley, I am so happy you are going to be at ringside. And I have some celebration plans already for me, you, and ... At this time, the interview was interrupted by the rushing of security personnel and a medical team past the camera into other area's of Full Sail backstage. The look on Becky and Bayley's face went from happiness to one of confusion and concern, until Becky figured it out. They're heading in the direction of the women's...CHARLOTTE! Both Becky and Bayley rushed down the corridors of the NXT backstage area, the camera struggling to keep up with them, until they reached the source of the commotion; the women's locker room. There in the middle of the room lay Charlotte, who hadn't even had a chance to change from her casual clothes into her gear, completely out cold from an unseen attack. The medics huddled around her and demanded that people give them some space, whilst security looked round trying to find anything that would point to who the assailant was. Even William Regal was walking down the corridor to the scene to assess the situation. Bayley and Becky just looked on knowing full well the answers to what and who; Bayey sporting her angriest pout which she still couldn't help but make look cute, and Becky with a full on glare, her fists clenched, the absolute rage in her being abundantly clear. I'm going to absolutely murder that little b*tch for what she's done. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was now time for the match everyone wanted to; Sasha Banks music began to boom through out to the crowd at Full Sail, as the self titled "Trauma Queen" confidently strutted out to the top of the ramp; obviously wearing her trademark slider glasses, her "BO$$" knecklace and ring, and her bejazzled leather coat, with the yellow and green variant on the ring shorts and top underneath all the unnecessary bling. She seemed to sport an even more cocky expression as she made her way to the ring, seemingly unfazed by the wave of boo's from the crowd, or by the aggressive warning from her opponent. Sasha looked like someone who's plan was all falling into place, like she had already won, and just needed the formality of the actual match out the way so she could officially have her victory. Next came Becky Lynch, her heavy music blaring out the speakers, although one could hardly hear it given the huge ovation she got, mainly because the fans wanted to see her destroy, and yes likely strip, Sasha Banks. Becky was popular in NXT yes, but this was mostly because the fans saw this rabid beast of a woman unleashing all her anger on Sasha resulting in only one conclusion, I mean how could Sasha withstand the force of an angry Irishwoman? Becky came running out, sporting her standard plaid punk-style trousers, and a black sports top, and as always, started head banging furiously, before swinging her head back up and letting out what can only be described as a primal scream. After this she just stood at the top of the ramp and stared daggers at Sasha, who was still nonchalantly leaning in a corner of the ring, unaffected by the situation. Bayley came up to Becky and began talking in her ear as a coach would talk to a boxer, before patting Becky on her shoulder, which for Becky, was her sign to get going. Instantly, Becky ran down the ramp, slid into the ring, and Thes-Pressed Sasha. Becky just started pummeling Sasha with punches, not stopping for anything, like a woman possessed. The referee desperately tried to get her off Sasha so he could call for the bell and start the match. He finally managed this and started to push Becky to her corner, whilst also keeping Sasha separated, as she had got up and was instantly looking for a retribution shot at Becky. With both girls now relatively calm, the referee called for the bell and began the match. Both girls started circling the ring, not taking there eyes off each other; Sasha was bad mouthing Becky, whilst Becky just stared at Sasha in anger. They eventually closed the distance between each other, at which point Sasha started the match how she usually likes to, she delivered a hard slap across Becky's face. However, instead of going down as Sasha expected, Becky remained standing, and just turned her head to face Sasha again. The usually cocky look on Sasha's face faded at that point, and before she could do anything, Becky retaliated the slap by grabbing Sasha by the throat, and pulling her close to deliver a flurry of headbutts, then releasing Sasha to stagger away, only to deliver a closed-fist punch straight to her face when Sasha turned to face Becky again, sending her crashing to the ground. Not wanting to let up on her onslaught, Becky went about stomping on the downed Sasha. In desperation, Sasha tried to roll out under the bottom rope, but Becky would not let her; grabbing her from behind and picking her up to a standing position, Becky delivered a harsh German Suplex, but did not release the hold on Sasha, instead opting to get right back up, and deliver another one, this time releasing mid Suplex so Sasha would land quite harshly on her head and neck. And still Becky continued her assault, once again rushing up and picking Sasha up in a headlock position, before kicking her leg back and twisting her own and Sasha's body to deliver an impressive Neckbreaker. Thankfully for Sasha, she could manage to roll out the ring after the Neckbreaker without Becky catching her, giving her just a moments respite, but a moments peace was like heaven in this match for Sasha, however short it was. Becky was truly unrelenting right now, and Sasha was terrified because Becky didn't just want to win, hell she might not have wanted to win at all; what was most important here for Becky was to hurt Sasha. Sasha didn't have time to dwell on her thoughts, as she noticed Bayley coming round to her from outside, which forced Sasha into rolling back into the ring, only to be met straight away with a big boot from Becky. Throwing away any pretenses of going for technical wrestling moves, Becky picked Sasha back up, and then roughly threw her into the nearest corner, then stomped Sasha's ribs repeatedly, to the point that she was in a seated position in the corner, and even then Becky showed no signs of stopping. The referee once again had to intervene to get Becky of Sasha; it took a large amount of effort to get Becky to stop, and all he got in return was Becky turning around and screaming at him for breaking her concentration on Sasha. It was this break in concentration, which gave Sasha her opportunity. Almost instinctively, Sasha grabbed the back of Becky's trousers, and pulled her backwards so that she fell into the corner, hitting her head hard on the bottom turnbuckle. With this slight moment of dominance, Sasha took the time to recompose herself and catch her breath, before turning to Becky, who was already making her way back up, currently on all fours. Sasha went over to her and raked her nails harshly down her back eliciting a scream from the Ireland native. Not content with just that, Sasha then started to stomp down on Becky's back, letting her get on to all fours before stomping her, and repeating this process several times, before finally deciding to kick Becky in the abdomen instead, sending Becky rolling onto her back in pain. Sasha wanted to snub out the aggression in Becky, so brought her to a sitting position, and applied a tight headlock onto her, wanting to choke the life out of her. Becky began flailing desperately trying to get out of the lock, but Sasha had it in strong, and eventually that flailing started to work against Becky, as she quickly lost energy and started to fade. This was brilliant for Sasha, she only hoped to take the sting out of Becky's attacks, but now it seemed like she could even win by knocking her out right here. Bayley noticed her friends plight, and straight away sought to help her out, by clapping her hands and getting the crowd to chant Becky. It started off quietly, but quickly picked up steam until everyone in the arena was chanting "Let's go Becky!" with there full hearts. This chant caused Becky to stir; she was still unclear on everything, but she could feel pressure on her neck, her arm falling to the ground, and she could hear her name being chanted. It took her hand falling down again, for her to realize she was in a match, and it took the crowd chanting to make her realize what match. She felt the referee raise her hand again, before letting go. Becky wasn't going to let it hit the mat, not in this match. She had to win THIS match. Before her hand hit the mat, Becky kept it from doing so, eliciting a huge cheer from the crowd. Becky then went about getting herself out of the hold, as she began to raise to her feet. Sasha couldn't believe it, she was certain Becky was going to pass out; she wasn't going to relent though, as long as she had the headlock held she was in the dominant position. However, Becky soon reached her feet, and began throwing elbows into Sasha's midsection. Sasha tried desperately to keep the hold locked in, but after a few she couldn't do it, and had to let go, doubled over holding her now sore ribs. Becky took full advantage of Sasha's position, and put her arm around Sasha's head, before driving her head first into the mat with a wicked DDT. Now Becky could really feel it, the momentum swinging her way, and the match would soon be over. Not wanting to waste her control, Becky picked Sasha up, put her head under her arm, and delivered a powerful Suplex, then swiveled her hips on the ground while keeping Sasha's head in her grip, allowing Becky to get back up and deliver another Suplex, and then another. With this Three Amigo's Suplex, Becky went to pin Sasha, but somehow despite her great pain, Sasha managed to kick out at 2. Becky really wanted to end this now though, so she took the battered Sasha, and placed her head between her legs, before picking her up for a Crucifix Powerbomb. Becky held Sasha in the crucifix position for a moment, then went to to throw her down, but before she could, Sasha wriggled free, before turning to Becky's back, and swiftly delivering a Backcracker to her. Strangely however, Sasha did not go for the transition into a Facelock as she normally would, instead she just kicked Becky off so that she was lying face down on the canvas. The decision for this became clear however very quickly; Sasha's streak of wanting to strip her opponents seemed to come into play once again, as she gripped Becky's trousers, and started to tug them down. She manage to get them down a little bit, revealing a pair of red lace boyshorts. However, she could not complete her attempt, due to Bayley looking on. At that moment, Bayley remembered how she felt when Sasha stripped her to her Bra and Thong 2 weeks ago, how humiliated she was. She couldn't let Becky go through that, and she couldn't let Sasha get that satisfaction again. At that moment of Sasha tugging at Becky's trousers, Bayley ran into the ring, and jumped Sasha, instantly making the ref call for the DQ finish, not that anyone in the ring or arena cared about the result, they were all just going nuts for Bayley attacking Sasha, before then going to there new chant "Bayley's gonna strip you!". Bayley continued the assault, forcing Sasha into a corner, at which point Sasha threw her hands up in the air, with a look of fear on her face, signalling for mercy from Bayley. Bayley made her way towards Sasha, a look of determination on her face; Sasha continued to plead Bayley not to do anything. That was of course, only until that look of fear turned into a cocky grin, confusing Bayley. Just then, Sasha seemed to look past Bayley, then shouted "NOW!" prompting Bayley to turn around, only to be greeted by a stiff superkick. The origin of the kick, was from none other than Becky Lynch, to whom Sasha Banks ran over to laughing, and embraced strongly. Sasha then raised the hand of Becky, as the two girls posed to the stunned crowd; they were so surprised at the turn from Becky, they were so convinced by that match of her anger at Sasha, that everyone at the Full Sail arena was silenced by the two women's deception. Sasha bowed to Becky for her stellar performance fooling everyone, as both girls giggled on at the success of there ruse. They then turned there attention at Bayley who was beginning to stir. Like a pack of wolves, the two girls pounced on the downed girl, hitting her with an array of kicks, stomps, and punches, putting Bayley though intense pain. Sasha had more plans than pain though, Sasha wanted to humiliate Bayley again. Sasha and Becky picked Bayley up, and on Sasha's direction, dangled her over the second rope, so that her head and arms were hanging out the ring, and her legs were kneeling inside. At this point, Sasha ordered Becky to the outside to hold Bayleys arms, whilst Sasha got a microphone. Well, well, well, Bayley. Looks like you've had a bit of trust issues again, seems like all your friends turn on you in the end; maybe it's your kindergarten nature, maybe it's because your weak, or maybe it's me, and people can't help but love me. Who knows? All that matter's right now, is that you are in a precarious position in my ring; your big booty up in the air, no way out for you either with your "Best Friend" holding you in place. Do you remember last week Bayley? You took my shirt off; you tried to humiliate The BO$$. And just now you tried to attack me, you made Becky lose by DQ, and you ruined a match everyone here wanted to see. I really think you should be punished, don't you Becky? Becky started nodding frantically in agreement, whilst Bayley stared at her with a mixture of genuine hurt and pure anger; how could her best friend betray her like this and join her biggest rival, especially given what Sasha was doing. This look however, turned into a scream of fear and shame, as she felt Sasha grab onto her tights, and pull them down to her knee's, revealing Bayley's black thong. Bayley's face became completely red; she was utterly shamed, for the second time in 3 weeks she had been stripped to her thong in front of the entire NXT arena, and now, a large portion of the WWE Network owners. A thong again from Bayley, I would never have imagined. Maybe she isn't as innocent as she makes out to be, maybe she's just a little sl*t acting all nice to fool these fans. All the more reason for what comes next, but because of that fact, maybe we should take it up a notch, that sound good Becky? At this stage, Sasha most certainly takes it up a notch, as she grabs Bayleys thong, and also pulls that down to her knees. Bayley instantly screams out, and clamps her legs together, trying desperately to not show her lower lips to the world. Tears start to flow down Bayley's face as she takes in her predicament; trapped in the ring, live on air, with hundreds watching live and hundreds of thousands watching at home. The humiliation doesn't end there though, as Sasha, staying true to her word to punish Bayley, starts to spank Bayley's naked ass, alternating between the big cheeks. Bayley yelps at every slap, yet still tries to keep her legs together. That is until Sasha really starts to unleash on Bayley, at which point Bayley starts bawling like a little kid, causing her ass to quickly turn a deep red. This completely steal Bayley of all dignity, as she starts to kick her legs out wildy, thus revealing her shaved vagina to the whole world in the most undignified way possible; even worse, the live camera got a direct view behind, getting a perfect shot of Bayley inadvertently spreading her legs to reveal her bald pussy and very red bottom. This embarrassing discipline continues until Regal and the security team come running down the ramp, having been taking away from the Charlotte situation when Renee Young rushed from the commentary table to inform them of the situation. Upon there arrival, Sasha and Becky quickly stop and rush into the crowd and out of the arena. Bayley is a complete wreck in the ring, tears streaming down her face as she pathetically attempts to soothe her bottom and cover her crotch; Renee enters the ring with a blanket to cover Bayley, before trying to comfort her. Regal marches straight to the barrier that Sasha and Becky jumped to escape, a look of pure anger on his face; he then turns to the camera man who got the major shot of Bayley, and screams right in his face for getting it. He then joins Renee in attempting to console Bayley, as much help that will be. There is to be major consequences from this night, that much is clear from Regal's reaction, but at this time, Sasha got of scott free, whilst Bayley was left crying in the ring betrayed, completely revealed, and robbed of all dignity. |
I'm up to date on NxT so I kind of saw the Becky heel-turn coming. However, what I didn't see coming was you having one of your women show her pussy this early in the story. You're not pulling any punches with this one. The on screen and backstage powers aren't going to be happy with a vagina being shown on their programming. BUT I SURE WAS! Poor Bayley but happy fans! Great job as usual!
I'm curious though. Do you have time frame for when this is all taking place? I'm wondering if you're building up to big match between Sasha and Bayley for NxT Takeover III or something. Anyway, I said during the preparation for the conclusion of DoctorRipper's Paige/AJ story that this was going to be the Best Halloween Ever and it really has been. I still consider this 'Halloween Weekend'. Not one, not two, but THREE awesome wrestling story updates. We've got a reboot of Grover Paradise. Two other updates that I follow on other sites. I had an unorthodox date and I got to fully enjoy my costume this year. Thank you for adding to what has made this the best Halloween in recent memory. |
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Awesome story man just 2 questions I wanna ask you
1) wouldn't wwe want more subscribers to the network because as of right now subscription is free for November or that's what I heard And 2) yes how I love Bayley and was sad to see both times when Becky turned on Bayley , but she's such a happy person why do you have her wear thongs. |
@MickGesitt- Thanks for the kind words mate, I really appreciate it; actually being classed in the same league as 1993wwe and DoctorRipper's stories is massive to me given how great their work is.
Yeah it was something of a curve ball I was planning from the start the early nudity; it will slow back down a little bit now, but by the end the ENF will be full throttle, trust me. And yeah it is taking place in the build up to Takeover III. Also glad you continue to like the backstage stuff I'm writing along with it; lets just say that in the next 3 chapters, that area is going to play an even more major role. smjimmie- Thanks for the praise and on your questions: 1) They don't mind the spike in numbers to the network, but the balance of the numbers vs the reason for the numbers has caused some concern; this stripping thing can get them in a lot of trouble, it hasn't yet so that's why they haven't clamped down so hard (although they still refuse to acknowledge it) but there is very rel concerns that they can get into some serious hot water with the stripping, even if the Network numbers are favourable. 2) Why is Bayley wearing a thong? Well I can give you the cop-out answer and then the real one. Cop-out answer; all wrestling women wear thongs under there gear, even Bayley (there's a "famous" shot of her with a very noticeable VTL, and there is a admittedly dodgy source saying she's going to slip her thong on this weeks NXT). And wearing a thong doesn't necessarily mean you aren't nice. Now for the real answer-personal choice from myself, I have a bit of a affinity to thongs, especially with someone like Bayley with such a brilliant ass. This is going to happen quite a bit in the story, I'll try to add a bit of variety to the underwear choices, but I must be honest there is going to be a good chance I just revert back to thongs because of personal taste. |
Amazing chapter added to an amazing story set the tone really nicely for the next chapter can't wait.
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I am pretty curious as to what this is leading to between Bayley and Sasha as well. On a side note, I would personally add a key for the start of every chapter in regards to your coloring scheme. It gets quite confusing when new characters are introduced or simply when the episodes are so far apart. Maybe I'm the only one who feels this way?
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Thanks for the kind replies guys. And yeah maybe you are right DoctorOhno, especially given that I myself was a little unsure when I wrote it and had to look back over to get the right color scheme, which is also all thrown into disarray with Bayley, with whom I changed the color (to make it more visible).
Anyway, next chapter, expect it sooner rather than later ;) |
Good stuff, Dayjib. Looking forward to see where you go with this series.
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Hey dayjib I have a question if you don't mind I know you said that you love thongs , but was Bayley in her ring gear or street clothes for that match between Sasha Banks and Becky Lynch?
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Also while I'm here may as well let you know how everything is going; slowly this week. I have already noticed that this next one will be the longest chapter yet, and there will be a substantially longer match this chapter. Also, there won't be anything as dramatic as the end of the last one, but there will be a fair bit of stripping and humiliated girls. However this week I am absolutely swamped with work (both uni and part time) so whatever time I have I'll chisel out a few paragraphs, but it will be tough, so I can't say for definite when something will come out; hopefully this week, but I'm not that confident. Also as a teaser spoiler, I can reveal that this chapter will have a main roster diva in it. I'll leave the who and why to your imagination for now. |
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It's cool glad I could help and thnx for anwsering the question and its fine take your time I found out the hard way when I rush things so just take a break and when you finally have time and you want to post that's fine because I know we will enjoy your work later then right now just to have something put up
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I believe it's Paige because last time you had summer and she was in nxt and Paige was the nxt women's champion till she went to the main roster and became a 2 time divas champion
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