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Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion
First time writing an ENF story. Constructive criticism always appreciated. I do know that divalover95 is doing an AJ Lee/Paige story and I don't intend to compete it with that. It just made sense to start with AJ since it is the current RL rivalry going on.
Backstory: Paige has won back the WWE Championship from AJ Lee at Summerslam. AJ Lee has earned a number one contender match and it has been a usual build leading to their match at Night of Champions. __________________________________________________ ____________________________ AJ Lee starts her skip to the ring, wearing her "Love Bites" t-shirt cut slightly below her breast and her traditional short jean shorts. AJ enters the ring and waits for her opponent as her music dies down. The scream hits and Paige starts down the ramp. She is wearing a leather jacket and her red wrestling shorts. She climbs up onto the apron and lets out a large scream. She removes her jacket, revealing her red top and enters the ring. She holds the WWE Divas Championship up towards AJ, who eyes her with anger. Paige returns her stare with a glare of her own as she passes the title to the ref. The bell rings and AJ rushes forward like a hell cat. She leaps at Paige and hits a Lou Thesz press. She grabs Paige by the hair and thrashes her head repeatedly against the mat. Paige turns it around so that she is on top of AJ and starts smacking her repeatedly across the face. AJ pulls her arms up to cover her face and kicks Paige slightly back. AJ turns around and tries to get back up but Paige yanks AJ Lee back by the shorts, showing a slight hint of a black thong before Paige rolls her up. 1! KICKOUT! Paige pops back up and AJ is quick to rise too. Paige goes to throw a punch only for AJ Lee to block it and respond with a right of her own. Lee hits a second shot. A third is followed by a fourth. AJ Lee's repeated punches knock Paige back into the corner. AJ climbs up onto the second rope and raises her fist into the air as the crowd cheers. The crowd counts along as AJ starts the ten punches in the corner. As AJ reaches the 7th punch, Paige hoists her up in the air in powerbomb position and walks out of the corner. Paige stands with AJ up in the air in the middle of the ring and AJ desperately punches her to try to break free. AJ finally reaches and pulls on Paige's hair causing her to scream loudly in pain and fall backwards with AJ still on top of her! 1! 2! PAIGE PUSHES HER OFF! Both divas rise up and AJ Lee throws a punch, only for it to be caught by Paige. Paige pulls AJ's hand close by her mouth and bites AJ's finger! The crowd pops and AJ screams in pain and pulls her hand back, holding it in pain. Paige lunges forward and hits a huge lariat sending Punk's wife crashing to the mat. Paige has a sick smile on her face and looks at AJ's shirt. She suddenly starts tugging and pulls it off of AJ's body! The crowd is cheering out of surprise. AJ is still knocked out but Paige holds the shirt in the air and faces it towards the hard camera before yelling "LOVE DOESN'T BITE! I BITE!" Paige tosses the shirt out of the ring and finally goes for the pinfall. 1! 2! KICKOUT! Paige rises and AJ starts to before realizing her current wardrobe situation. AJ frantically covers her black bra and backpedals into the corner. Paige rushes forward as AJ cowers in the bottom of the corner. Paige pushes her boot against AJ's throat and Lee has no choice but to take her hands off of her chest and trying to push the champion's boot away. The ref's count hits four before Paige backs up. AJ Lee reluctantly rises, clearly uncomfortable with her current situation but having no desire to lose the match. Paige flashes her evil smile again as she starts forward. AJ Lee quickly kicks her in the thigh causing Paige to grab it in pain. Another thigh kick drops Paige to a knee. AJ Lee runs backwards and bounces off the ropes. She returns and hits a Shining Wizard! Paige is down and AJ quickly goes for a cover, hooking the legs! 1! 2! KICKOUT! AJ gets to her knees, shocked. She is shaking her head while looking at the ref and holding up 3 fingers. The ref holds up two fingers up in response and AJ just puts her head down. AJ turns and notices that Paige is starting to rise. AJ backs up and waits for Paige to get to her feet. AJ charges forward at Paige with the headscissors! She hooks it and turns it into the Octopus Hold! The crowd is cheering loudly as AJ has it locked in! Paige falls to a knee and is frantically screaming. AJ has Paige's right arm cranked backwards while Paige's left arm is currently on AJ's waist. Paige's hand hovers, looking like she is about to tap. Suddenly Paige's left arm shoots up and her hand grabs the back of AJ's bra! She quickly unclips it! The crowd pops loudly and AJ immediately breaks the hold and quickly covers up, holding the unstrapped bra over her chest. Before she can react, Paige grabs her by the shorts and rolls her up again! 1! 2! 3! DING! DING! DING! Paige quickly rolls out of the ring and grabs her WWE Divas Championship. As she rushes towards the stage, she scoops up the Love Bites t-shirt. AJ is still in the middle of the ring, covering herself up while looking humiliated by her rival. The camera cuts to Paige on the top of the ramp with her championship in one hand and AJ Lee's shirt in the other with a large evil smile on her face. __________________________________________________ ___________________________ And that's defense number one. I didn't want to go too ridiculous because this has just begun but didn't want it to be too tame where it was just a normal match. Can't promise that this will be a weekly updated thing but I can say that more often than not I'll try to put up a new defense each week. |
I thought it was really good myself; you have a good descriptive nature of writing, one can really paint a picture of the events in their mind. I am also a fan on the "realistic" aspect of this story to start off with; nothing too crazy to start with, but it gives scope to expand and increase in the future.
Also as I stated in Doctor Ripper's brilliant developing story, I am always a fan of more Paige enf stories. If I was going to have some constructive criticism, I would maybe have a bit more description in the big enf moment of the chapter (in this case the Bra unclipping), maybe make it a bit more of a big deal, really drive home the humiliation of the situation (although you did just that brilliantly with the minor enf, the top removal to be fair). However this is merely a minor gripe, and I also understand the need to rush that moment given how the story progressed. Yeah, so for me, great work, and good to see another promising story looking to be developed on this board, can't wait for the next chapter. |
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I agree the Paige vs aj saga is awesome whoever may write it because they are what's best for business
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Wow, I can't wait to see if you plan to continue this. This is a great start and a superb first post!
I agree that you should keep the current approach to it, and like Dayjib says, drive home the ENF moments really good. You're a very talented writer, the ENF community welcomes you with open arms! :D |
It's doctorripper doing the aj/Paige feud story. As for your story I think it's fucking brilliant keep up the good work, any new end work is allway's a good thing especially when it's this quality.
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Hey I know I was just saying if aj tried to get her revenge it more likely will turn into a fued but great story anyway and we all cane wait to see what brilliance u come up with next
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Thank you for the kind words everyone. And yeah, I meant DoctorRipper not Divalover95. I was looking at "last post" rather than "thread starter".
I've mapped this out and plan to make it a nine chapter story. Like I said, I'm going to try for one new chapter each weekend but mostly it just depends on my schedule. This weekend has been pretty easy luckily, so I'm actually going to shoot for a second chapter tonight. |
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Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion Chapter 2
Notable moments since Night of Champions:
The WWE has released an official statement regarding the AJ Lee/Paige Divas Championship match wardrobe malfunction stating on wwe.com that "while WWE tries their hardest to maintain a positive pg kid friendly environment on all of their programming, the pay per views are meant to be considered a separate entity where the rules are more lax. Instances such as blood, foul language, and yes, sexual content is not as major of a concern to us at these events as long as the fans enjoy what they see. While we here at the WWE do not approve of Paige's motives, we do consider her Night of Champions actions completely within her right. Thank you and if you'd like to see more of the over the top action, please buy the WWE Network for the low price of $9.99". Paige has stood by her actions pointing out on Raw "AJ Lee was more concerned with her chest, than her waist. She was the one who decided covering up was more important than winning the gold. It's her fault that she lost our match." Paige did not answer when asked if we should expect to see similar actions in the future. Naomi has won a WWE Divas Title Shot at Hell in a Cell by defeating Cameron and Eva Marie in a triple threat match. Rosa Mendes has joined Stardust and Goldust, now proclaiming herself Rosedust. Brie and Nikki Bella continue to feud. __________________________________________________ ________________ Hell in a Cell "Funk is on a Roll" blasts from the speakers of the jam packed arena as Naomi starts her way to the ring. She is doing her signature dance on top of the stage while shaking blue pom poms that match her blue top and blue booty shorts. Naomi starts the walk down the ramp, highfiving people in the crowd. Naomi enters the ring and tosses her pom poms aside and finishes her dancing in the ring. The music slowly dies until the piercing scream that is the start of Paige's music begins. Paige is wearing the same attire as the last pay per view, which is her red top and shorts, her black leather jacket and the WWE Divas Championship around her waist. Paige quickly removes her jacket and prepares for competitive action. The bell rings and the two divas start circling the ring. They lock up and Paige quickly backs Naomi up into the corner. The ref attempts to separate the two, but Paige shoves Naomi in the face before backing up. Naomi has an angry look on her face and she pushes the ref aside to get to Paige. With the ref momentarily distracted, Paige rakes at Naomi's eyes and throws her to the mat by her hair. Naomi hits the ring and Paige goes for a quick elbow drop. Naomi rolls out of the way and Paige hits the mat. Both divas rise but Naomi is up a split second faster. She thrashes Paige with a forearm to the head, causing Paige to stumble backwards into the ropes. Naomi grabs her and irish whips her across the ring. Paige bounces off of the ropes and returns, only to be hit with the rear view! Naomi turned around and jumped into the air, allowing Paige to collide head first into her large booty. Paige hits the mat, stunned. Naomi does a quick little dance before lifting her right leg into the air, showing off her stretching ability, before dropping it across Paige's chest with a split legged legdrop. Naomi quickly covers Paige. 1! 2! KICKOUT! The challenger is in control and rises confidently. She looks at Paige and pulls her up by her hair. She drags Paige towards the corner, only for Paige to push her backwards into the corner. Paige charges forward as Naomi turns around, back facing towards Paige, and climbs onto the top rope. Paige can't stop her momentum and Naomi hooks her legs around the champion's head. Naomi uses her legs to pull Paige in close and shakes her ass right in Paige's face with her bootylicious move. She eventually releases Paige who immediately wipes at her face in disgust. While distracted Naomi hits a spinning heel kick, downing Paige. Naomi goes for another cover and hooks the legs. 1! 2! KICKOUT! Naomi rises and smiles as the crowd's applause. Paige backpedals into the corner in an attempt to regroup. Naomi turns back towards her competitor and charges forward. She lays the boots into Paige who attempts to cover up but is not able to stop all of them. Naomi backs up and with the champion slightly dazed, a smirk grows on her face. She looks to the crowd before yanking up her shorts and giving herself a wedgie. Naomi backs herself up towards her opponent who is too hurt to do anything to stop it. Naomi shoves her ass straight in Paige's face and wiggles it all around, being sure to rub it all around Paige's face. For the second time, Paige has been humiliated by Naomi but this time, she responds with an uppercut downstairs. The fun times end for Naomi as she falls to the ground, holding her crotch in pain. Paige quickly crawls forward and goes for the cover. 1! 2! KICKOUT BY NAOMI! Paige bites her lip in anger as she rises. She starts kicking at Naomi repeatedly, who is still stuck with the wedgie in her shorts. Paige pulls her up by the hair and calls for the Paige-Turner. Before she can hit it, Naomi breaks free. She grabs Paige and hits a quick snap suplex. Naomi rises and finally brings her hands down and digs her shorts free. By then, Paige has risen. The two divas start trading blows in the middle of the ring. Neither diva gives up an inch as they fire right hand after right hand. Finally, Naomi ducks a right by Paige. As Paige spins around, Naomi grabs her from behind for a German Suplex. Naomi tries to lift Paige, but Paige blocks it. Naomi tries again, but is blocked again. Paige hits a back elbow to Naomi's head and transitions herself behind Naomi. Instead of going for a German Suplex, Paige suddenly drops down and tugs Naomi's shorts down while going for a school boy. The camera catches Naomi's skimpy blue thong in all its glory as Naomi desperately attempt to wiggle free from the school boy pin. 1! 2! 3! DING! DING! DING! Paige rises to her knees with her evil smile very present as Naomi immediately rises up and pulls her shorts back up, clearly both embarrassed and enraged. Paige's music hits as Naomi is arguing with the ref about the obvious cheating. With Naomi distracted, Paige rushes up from behind and hits the Paige-Turner! Naomi's head hits with a thud as she crashes to the mat. Paige reaches down and once again, pulls down the shorts of Naomi revealing her small blue thong which struggles to cover anything. Paige sways her own hips as she fully removes the shorts off of Naomi and waves them in the air. Paige rolls out of the ring and is handed her WWE Divas Championship. She starts up the stage and Naomi starts to come to. She rises up as the camera focuses on her backside. Only with the crowd hooting and hollering does Naomi realize what has happened. She desperately attempts to use her hands to cover herself, alternating between protecting her front and back. Naomi eventually uses her right hand to try to cover her crotch while putting her left hand behind her back and attempting to cover her rear, unsuccessfully. She backpedals and drops down into a corner, keeping her legs close together and bent trying to hide as much as she can of herself to the WWE Universe. Paige watches all of this from the stage. She smiles and exits with the booty shorts in her left hand and the title on her shoulder. |
Wow, more excellent work mate, really just great.
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Hey I agree that was awesome and I loved how u gave Naomi a chance to win the divas title unlike some promotion we know and love
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TLC 2012 vs Eve Torres. Night of Champions 2013 vs AJ Lee vs Brie Bella vs Natalya. Naomi's orbital bone injury prevented her Elimination Chamber 2014 championship match vs AJ Lee. WrestleMania XXX vs AJ Lee and everyone else. Money in the Bank 2014 vs Paige. Plenty of chances, the issue is that the promotion we know and love isn't comfortable with her as an actual champion yet. The real thing to take away here is that the EUF moment focused on Naomi's great ass. And to address 1993wwe, great story so far. I'm loving that my pale princess Paige is getting some more attention on this board. One thing I really like about this story specifically is that you show the PG WWE reacting to the PG-13 moment. Also, I'm fine with you skipping through the lead up to the big PPV matches since you're summarizing everything. But when you get to the big matches at the PPV make sure to play up the EUF/ENF moments. Like Dayjib said after the first chapter, you could use some more description in those moments. In this chapter, you paid more attention to the moment itself and that Naomi had been stripped to her thong. But I think you really failed to describe anything. You had Naomi's big ass out there in almost all its glory but you never really mentioned what it actually looked like. I know there are always pictures online to help with that but this is a written story things so should have a proper written description. You should especially consider this when Paige gets to the point where she's removing the other divas' underwear for full on ENF moments. Out of curiosity, what does Rosedust look like? Gold and black with a rose design like Cody's star one? Or is she a more 'rose-like' color and is pink and black instead of gold? |
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Well I knew she had plenty of chances but that injury really hurt her chances because I thought if It wasn't for that she prob would have been champion it might not be as a long reign like aj trust me I love aj and I love Paige but what are they going to do if aj decides to leave have Paige defeat everybody and keep her title before the next nxt call ups which I think is going to be Charlotte and maybe Bayley I'm pretty sure everybody here or in the world wants to see Naomi as champion for even a month just to get her divas title but going back to the story I agree with them yeah u could use a little bit more description but its your story if u like doing it the way u are doing it then do it that way and if they want to do it their way they can write a story as well
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Thanks for the kind words again. Really does help me grow more confident.
As a quick reply to Gesitt- In regards to Naomi's reveal lacking some description: That's a fair point to make, and looking back, it's pretty accurate. I tried to put a bit more of a spotlight on the actual euf moment but yeah, description could've used a bit more. I hate to say it was because I rushed to get a second chapter in for the first weekend, but I doubt that helped matters. But I agree that I'd rather have 9 solid chapters posted over nine weeks than 9 okay ones that were posted over six weeks. I'll definitely keep your point about description in mind for the future chapters because I'd like to be pretty confident that these moments are already living up to their full potential before we get to the bigger ones. In regards to the skipping through: I'm definitely going to keep to that format because I'd like to have a big pay per view in each chapter. As we get further along, especially towards the end, there will definitely be more detail spent on the week by week developments leading to the match. But each chapter would include the big ppv match. Rosedust: Rosedust will be covered more in a future chapter, but she is Rosa Mendes with her blonde hair and a singlet very similarly designed to Stardust and Goldust that is black and gold. And as a very minor spoiler: The next chapter will be at Survivor Series and will feature Paige defending her championship against Calgary's finest, Natalya Neidhart. |
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Hey u are very welcome if u want I could do a bra and panties match between 2 people that u choose and I know if u are somewhat playing into the promotion that we all know and love will we end up seeing Brie or nikki bella in this story not rushing just asking if so I can wait if not that's fine it is up to u anyway I'm prettu sure u already got the chapter formats all u have to do is write them but yeah I love how u are thinking of taking your time and producing good quality readable content than to rush and mess up but like I said its your story and I can't wait to hear from u whenever u feel ready
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Third chapter is written.
I've attempted to follow the advice given to me and try to ensure that there is a bit more description in this chapter but to be safe, I'm going to save what I have and review/revise it over the weekend to try to guarantee the best quality. I'd rather catch these mistakes myself before posting, than realize them after the fact. Expect Chapter Three to be posted sometime Sunday. |
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Hey that's fine with us you know what they say longer you wait the better its be and if you didn't catch my comment earlier if the promotion we all know and love decided to have a fatal 4 way bra and panties match for the divas title who would win who would you want to win who would be stripped and what color bra and panties will she be wearing since I asked the question I will be the first to anwser I think Paige would win it but I would love to see aj win it and Brie stripped down to her pink bra and black granny panties making her quit for the second time then that ends that fued and aj realizing there could be more of these matches in the future decides to take some time off as well so that leaves nikki vs Paige and nikki wins the title and keeps it until Charlotte comes and defeats her cleanly and wins her very first divas championship then it will be Charlotte vs Paige and Brie vs nikki and aj vs Stephanie
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Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion Chapter 3
Notable moments since Hell in a Cell:
Following Paige's repeated actions of using wardrobe malfunctions to her advantage, Stephanie McMahon has created an interim "Wardrobe Malfunction" rule stating that if a competitor is suffering from a wardrobe malfunction revealing some amount of nudity, the ref is to temporarily stop the match to allow the wrestler/diva to fix their outfit. Natalya won a number one contender match by defeating Tamina. After the match, she took a microphone and called out Paige. Paige did not answer the challenge. The following week Natalya talked about the upcoming match and stated Paige is breaking a code amongst divas. We are wrestlers sure, but we are women who don't want our personal parts out for display. If Paige wants to embarrass AJ and Naomi, she better know that what goes around, comes around. At Survivor Series, I don't just want to beat Paige. I want that pale face of hers to be redder than Sheamus' hair! It's about time that someone taught her a lesson and us Harts are known for putting people in their place. At Survivor Series, I'm taking your title and I'm taking your dignity. Paige is starting to gain a bit of a cult following from fans due to her risque actions. In addition to the stripping at pay per views, she has now been starting out matches on Raw and Smackdown by giving her opponents the "kiss of death". Goldust/Stardust/Rosedust are currently feuding with Rybaxel and their new manager, Alicia Fox. The Brie/Nikki rivalry is still ongoing and continued earlier in the pay per view with a match during the kickoff that went to a double dq. __________________________________________________ _______________ Survivor Series The familiar screech that is the start of the classic Hart music begins and out comes the Queen of Harts. Natalya Neidhart makes her way to the ring wearing her recently created gear which is a pink and white top with black hearts scattered throughout and black short shorts with various white and pink designs throughout. Natalya enters the ring to a mixed response from the crowd. She waves before starting to bounce up and down, waiting for the champion. A loud scream enters the arena as Paige's theme begins. The champion starts down the ramp wearing her same dark red traditional attire and her black leather jacket. Paige soaks in a fair share of boos and cheers as she has the usual scowl on her face. She climbs up onto the apron and enters the ring. Paige whips off her jacket and tosses it aside before passing her WWE Divas Championship to the referee. Referee Charles Robinson shows it to Natalya before handing it outside the ring and calling for the bell. The champion and challenger get face to face and chest to chest, staring each other down and breathing heavy. Natalya says some words and Paige responds, but the camera fails to pick them up. Natalya turns around and points at the Divas Championship outside of the ring. She turns back to her opponent and Paige suddenly pulls her in close and locks lips. Paige presses her lips firmly against Natalya's and wraps her arms around Natalya's head, keeping her from pulling away. Paige's eyes stare straight into Neidhart's as Nattie is freaking out and trying to get away. Natalya finally break free and immediately wipes at her face, utterly embarrassed. She turns back towards Paige, who has a smirk showing. Neidhart charges and Paige quickly pulls her hands up to defend. Natalya surprises Paige by going low and punching her in the ribs. The champion bends over for a second and that's all Nattie needs to grab her by the hair. Natalya pulls at Paige's jet black hair and the Anti-Diva lets out a scream in pain. Neidhart doesn't let go and instead whips her across the ring by her dark locks. Paige flies across the ring and lands face first on the mat, immediately grabbing at her head in pain. Paige turns around and starts to try to crawl out of the ring for a chance to regroup but Natalya is now the one smirking as she shakes her head saying no. Paige starts to slip out underneath the bottom rope but Natalya grabs hold of her by the back of her shorts and starts trying to pull her back in the ring. The quick yank stretches Paige's shorts and momentarily reveals a bit of Paige's lace black panties underneath and a tiny bit of her pale cheeks. The yank also pulls Paige back into the ring, fixing the minor malfunction. Paige kicks Nattie to push her away and starts to her feet. She rises and charges at Natalya, only to be dropped by a drop toe hold. Paige hits the mat hard and holds her face in pain while on all fours. Nattie notices this and looks to the crowd before dropping down to a knee. Paige is distracted and unprepared for Natalya, who suddenly pulls Paige up and across her knee. Paige's head is down and her ass is up and Neidhart looks to the crowd once again as she raises her right hand way into the air. The crowd cheers, figuring out what is coming next. WHAM! Natalya smacks her right hand down, right on Paige's right cheek. Paige screams in pain and moves her right arm back, trying to cover her butt. Natalya laughs and moves Paige's arm out of the way before bringing her right hand down again! Another scream from a helpless Paige. Natalya screams out One more time! to the crowd before smashing her right hand upside the British diva's bottom. This smack sends Paige rolling off of the challenger's knee and desperately rubbing her butt in massive pain from Natalya's smacks. The camera zooms in and can see that the very bottom of her cheeks, not covered by the shorts, are a bit redder than her normal pale complexion. Natalya doesn't care about Paige's pain and quickly rolls her over going for a cover. 1! KICKOUT! Paige's booty problems weren't enough to distract her from her main goal, retaining her Divas championship. Both divas rise and Paige desperately rakes at Natalya's eyes. Natalya puts her hands over her face, in pain, and doesn't see Paige taking off for the ropes. She returns and viciously spears Neidhart! Natalya hits the mat hard, with the back of her head thrashing straight into the ring at full speed. Paige stands up and mocks Bret Hart by doing his signature taunt towards the crowd before turning her attention back to Nattie. Paige goes for a cover, making sure to lift Nattie's muscular leg in the air and hooks it. 1! 2! KICKOUT! Paige's arrogance may have cost her and her anger isn't doing her any benefits either. She rises up, yelling at the ref that it was a three count. He insists it was two, but Paige is having none of that and backs him into the corner while yelling in his face. With all this going on, Natalya is starting to rise. Paige turns around as Nattie is nearly back to her feet. Paige rushes forward and grabs Natalya by the back of her top. The crowd cheers, excited for what is about to happen. However the queen of harts is too smart and suddenly hooks her arms around the champion and hits a belly to belly suplex, ending whatever thoughts Paige may have had of stripping her. Instead Natalya reaches down and grabs Paige by her dark red top. Paige desperately fights as Natalya attempts to pull it off of her. Slowly, it is sliding up and off of Paige. First, the very bottom of the black bra starts peeking out from under the top. Soon most of it is out and showing as Paige and Natalya continue their desperate tug of war. Finally, with one strong pull, Natalya Neidhart pulls Paige's top straight off of her body! Paige's black lace bra is fully revealed as well as a healthy dose of Paige's cleavage. The champion immediately throws her hands over her chest and attempts to cover her shame while backing up. Paige desperately yells to the ref for a "Wardrobe Malfunction" break but he denies it due to the fact that no actual nudity is being shown. That, and the fact that she was just verbally abusing him moments ago probably doesn't help her case. Natalya is swinging Paige's top in the air, round and round like a trophy. This only infuriates the Anti-Diva who quickly forgets about her predicament and rises in anger. She starts towards Natalya, who is still swinging the top around. Paige grabs the challenger by the back of the head and throws it towards the corner. Natalya's head smashes against the top turnbuckle pad in the bottom right of the ring and Paige's top falls to the outside. Paige grabs her by the back of the head and starts repeatedly slamming her face first straight into the turnbuckle pad. Five, six, seven. Ten times, Nattie's head hits the unforgiving turnbuckle pad before Paige finally stops and grabs Neidhart from behind. German Suplex... and she holds on for the pin. 1! 2! KICKOUT BY NATTIE! The crowd pops and Paige is even angrier. She rises quickly and starts stomping away at Natalya's head and body. Nattie attempts to cover up but Paige's anger makes her shots that much more deadly. Paige's breasts jiggle wildly in her lace bra but that appears to be the last thing on her mind right this moment. She continues her stomps and bends over to yell in Nattie's face. YOU'RE IN MY HOUSE NOW! Paige grabs Natalya by the hair and starts to pull her up. Neidhart suddenly grabs Paige by her legs and takes the champion down. Natalya has both legs and the crowd cheers again. Natalya puts her one leg through and locks in the sharpshooter! Paige is in immense pain and her title reign is in serious jeopardy. She pushes her arms down against the mat and attempts to push herself up to alleviate the stress/pain. By doing so, she is inadvertently showing the WWE Universe a great view of her breasts hanging in the air, barely covered by her bra. She slams her fist on the mat in pain, but refuses to tap as Natalya keeps the hold applied and continues to inflict pain. Paige desperately reaches for the ropes, but is too far away. She attempts to crawl towards them, and is getting closer and closer. Soon Paige is mere inches away from reaching the ropes but Nattie quickly drags her back to the center of the ring. Paige slams on the mat in frustration. The champion's right hand hovers above the mat. She's looking like she is going to tap. Paige shakes her head no when the ref asks if she gives up but her obvious pain seems to say otherwise. Paige slams on the mat again before reaching towards her shoulder. With her right hand she suddenly gives a large tug at her own bra and her left strap snaps from the force! Paige quickly drops down to the mat and uses her bra strap pulling hand to cover herself before any of her boob is visible but the ref quickly calls for the bell. Natalya stands up, celebrating while the ref is talking with the ring announcer. Natalya climbs up on the top rope and raises her arms in victory as Paige has rolled out of the ring and picked up her dark red top. Paige covers her left breast with her hand as the broken strap has caused that side of her black lace bra to start to slip. She quickly slides on her top, being mindful to not let her broken side of her bra expose any of her goodies underneath as she does so. With herself covered again, Paige unclips the back of her bra and tosses it aside so that the broken strap doesn't interfere with her again. Natalya is raising her arms in victory but the ref finally notices and signifies no. Natalya looks confused and steps off the corner as the ring announcer speaks up. Ladies and Gentlemen, this match has been temporarily paused due to a wardrobe malfunction. Once the issue is resolved, the match will continue! The crowd boos loudly at this and Natalya is equally irate. Natalya is talking with the ref as Paige enters the ring and motions towards the timekeeper. The bell rings while Nattie is still focused on the ref! Paige-Turner to the Queen of Harts! QUICK COVER! 1! 2! ...the ref seems reluctant but finally hits the mat a third time. 3! DING DING DING! Paige Wins! The champion quickly rolls out of the ring, no thoughts of stripping Natalya tonight. The champion is just lucky to have escaped with the title and without revealing too much of herself. She quickly starts up the ramp, until a familiar song starts to play. Welcome to the Queendom blasts from the speakers and Stephanie McMahon comes out with a microphone. Paige turns around towards Stephanie, confused. Paige. You're starting to become quite a bit of a problem for me. You nearly exposed AJ Lee's breasts and we gave you the benefit of the doubt that it was a one time thing. Then at Hell in a Cell, you expose poor Naomi's blue thong and you made us create a Wardrobe Malfunction rule. And now, here at Survivor Series, at the first chance possible you've abused this new rule as well. Well Paige, as far as I'm concerned, you've gotten on my bad side. And because of that, I'm going to make you pay. First off, I guess you've proven that this rule can be exploited so I need to officially abolish the Wardrobe Malfunction rule. If something is exposed, the diva will just have to deal with it because the match will go on. No breaks, no interruptions. But don't think you can just go back to your old tricks and get away with it because I have something else in mind. I want YOU to have to suffer from the very same actions you've been causing to others recently. If you think Natalya's actions tonight were the worst you had to deal with... well prepare to become my b*tch! Next month, you're going to face a personal hand picked contender of mine. A smart woman that knows how to get in other diva's heads. An experienced veteran not afraid to show skin to get what she wants. That's right Paige, you're going up against Layla! The crowd cheers. Paige doesn't look amused, yet not very frightened. And that's not all. Since you apparently like stripping the other divas so much, I think I'm going to now add a stipulation to your match. You know what, its a stipulation for all your title matches from now on. Whenever you defend your WWE Diva's Championship... It'll be a Bra and Panties match! The crowd cheers loudly. Paige shakes her head violently, shouting NO! You can't make me! Stephanie hears it, even though the WWE Universe may not have. Oh yes I can, Paige. And I just did. 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Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion Chapter 3
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love this new chapter and can't wait to see paige take on layla in a bra and panties match!!!
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Great stuff again mate; plot development, smart story with Paige abusing the rules to win, a change of pace with Paige getting humiliated just a little bit for once, and of course the all Bra and Panties match rule. A much more descriptive chapter as well which I am really appreciative of; I would raise the point of maybe describing the humiliated mindset of the female suffering the malfunction a little bit more, but that wasn't really applicable here given that Paige did it to herself without shame to win.
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Hey I agree but I would love for Paige to defeat Layla in a bra and panties match and keeping her title just so Brie or aj can strip Paige and win the title in the future and I loved how you let Natalya of all people strip Paige of her shirt for that I thank you and we all can't wait to hear from u soon
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Nicely done!
Great to see that you put more description into this chapter and paid a lot more attention to Paige's EUF moment. Paige's pale bra-clad chest is definitely something worth paying attention to.
I also really liked the match itself. It showed that even though Paige is a very talented wrestler, Nattie's a byproduct of THE Dungeon and is on a completely different technical level so my Pale Princess had to change her game around to defeat a better opponent. Layla may have "experience" but her best days were when she was Michelle McCool's bratty sidekick. She's no Natalya so I'm expecting Paige to have a strong showing at TLC. I love the way that the 'Wardrobe Malfunction' rule was put into place because of Paige and its main purpose was to prevent her from using wardrobe malfunctions to win matches but it didn't even take her for a full month to bend the rule to her favor by creating her own wardrobe malfunction and using it to her advantage to win a match and keep her title. Also, the style that you write your matches in has grown on me. In the first chapter, it seemed a little silly to have the counts breaking up the action. But now I find that they really help. Your styles takes a long series of paragraphs that can sometimes be a daunting read and breaks them up so the reader doesn't get overwhelmed and can easily follow what's going on in the match. I noticed that in this chapter you started color-coding the dialogue. Interesting choice. If each character speaks in a specific color it certainly makes it easier for the reader to follow who is saying what. I think its a good idea but I'm afraid I have to nitpick. Paige's ring gear is purple and I think that her signature color should be purple as well. Natalya and the Hart family have been rocking pink for generations. Rosedust should probably be gold or yellow as long as its not too hard on the eyes. The other divas don't really matter. But I feel like some of them already have a signature color that you should stick with from a purely aesthetic standpoint. I'd also like to state how glad I am to see high quality wrestling stories like this and DoctorRipper's 'A Tale of Two Adversaries' on this site. I had a crappy day at work today, so it was really nice to have a quality story waiting for me when I got home. Thank you for all the time and effort that you put into entertaining us with your writing. Keep up the great work. I'm really enjoying watching as you come into your own and improve as a writer. |
I agree that's what is wrong with me and my stories no spaces no punctuation and no idea how to fix it if I do learn how to fix it I would like to do a story similar to this but instead of the lovely pale anti diva Paige I will use the lovable crazy and talented aj lee if its ok with you and doctor ripper and all of the fans here and I can't wait to hear from u soon
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Thank you Mick, glad to have helped out with your day. Personally, I'm enjoying writing these stories a lot more than I thought I would and I'm really pleasantly surprised to see just how much the experienced writers on this site are enjoying the chapters and giving helpful suggestions to improve it.
Definitely agree about the colors. Didn't think that one through when I first assigned Magenta to Paige but I wasn't sure whether to fix it or just deal with the choice I made. I think it makes sense to switch, so probably starting next chapter Paige will be Purple. And smjimmie, if you want to write a story of your own, I think a lot of us would be interested in reading it. The grammar may not be perfect but I'm pretty sure people would prefer a good story with some slight grammar issues and a few punctuation mistakes rather than no story at all. |
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Hey 1993wwe thnx for the kind words I hope u find the time in your busy life to go to my story and read it and tell me how good it was or vice versa but I would love to hear from u real soon
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Finally made an account so I can comment on all the wonderful stories on this board and this is one on the rise, I'm very much on the edge of my seat waiting to see what else you have to offer.
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Chapter 4 has been completely written and reviewed. I'll give it one final look over in a little bit and either post it late tonight or early tomorrow.
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Paige: The Unstoppable WWE Divas Champion Chapter 4
META NOTES: This is Paige's new voice color. This is Stephanie's new voice color.
Layla has been known for getting slightly inappropriate with divas in the past during matches. Notable moments since Survivor Series: In addition to the bra and panties stipulation, it was decided that a second stipulation would be added to the match and it'd be chosen in a tag match. Both Paige and Layla had to find a partner. Layla had very little trouble finding a partner and chose Natalya. Paige on the other hand, burning a lot of her bridges in the back, had to find someone and the only two people who agreed were Cameron and Eva Marie. Paige chose Cameron. Layla's team won when Natalya locked Cameron in the Sharpshooter until she tapped. For her stipulation, Layla has decided this match will be a paddle on a pole, meaning that the winner must strip their opponent to their bra and panties and then retrieve a paddle hanging off of a pole. Once the paddle is retrieved and pulled down, the match is over and the winner gets to celebrate by spanking the loser with the paddle. Layla and Stephanie McMahon were caught by cameras talking through WWE.com. Stephanie was heard saying Victory is guaranteed, Layla. You do what I say and you'll not only be champion but no one will even dare try to face you. Your orders are simple. Embarrass Paige. Humiliate her. I don't want her to just lose her title, I want her to leave this company. She is embarrassing me and my family when she purposely skirts around our rules and makes us look like fools. I'm a McMahon and I will not put up with that. I know your history of wandering hands with divas and that's the reason I picked you for this one. If she loses her title, she'll be just as big of a pain. If she is humiliated... that'll be the last we ever have to worry about her. During the TLC kickoff match, Rosedust and Brie Bella defeated Alicia Fox and Nikki Bella, earning both women a WWE Divas Championship match sometime in the future. ____________________________________ TLC BACKSTAGE Paige is stretching backstage, wearing a white tank top and blue jeans. She is dressed more for a street fight than a bra and panties match as she has taped up hands and tough looking black boots on. As Paige stretches, Stephanie walks into the shot. Can I ask what the hell you're wearing right now? Paige turns around at Steph's voice and looks confused. What? It's a tank top and jeans. What is the big deal? I don't remember giving you any sort of clearance to wear an outfit like that. An outfit like that? It's just normal clothes and since when do you need to consent on what I wear? I just couldn't keep wearing those skimpy shorts and flimsy top if I'm going to be competing in bra and panties matches. I've had enough trouble keeping them on in a normal match, let alone one like this. But Steph, I don't even get why you're being so pissy about this. I'm "pissy" as you referred to it, because you're cheating again. Cheating? I'm just being smart. Well I'm not putting up with that. You're competing with Layla in a Bra and Panties match and you will dress accordingly. You have permission to wear a normal top and your usual shorts. I don't care if you wear the red ones, the purple ones, hell even your old NXT gear if you want. But if you go out there wearing this, I'll strip you of your precious title immediately. This is such crap. If you have such a vendetta against me, why not strip me of the gold now? Because you're on my bad side, Paige. And if my father taught me anything, firing people is the easy way out. No, what I'm going to do, is make you wish that you could just quit after everything I do to you. Change now, your match is next. Paige and Stephanie stare each other down. Neither diva says anything... until Paige sighs and starts untaping her fists. Steph smirks. Good luck out there... champ. It'd sure be a shame if Layla were to reveal that behind the dark brooding demeanor of the "Anti-Diva" is a scared little girl afraid of being exposed. Steph lets out a quick laugh and exits. ____________________________________ TLC Match The camera focuses on the ring as the crew is finishing preparations for the match. The pole is hooked up to the top right corner, and hanging from a string is a large wooden paddle. The song "Insatiable" starts up and Layla begins to make her way to the ring. She is all smiles as she walks, wearing a sparkly purple hooded jacket that cuts off slightly below her breasts. Underneath that is a similarly colored purple top which matches Layla's short purple shorts with a white belt. Her shorts barely reach her thigh but Layla doesn't seem to care as she continues her walk to the ring. To the surprise of the commentators, Layla is receiving more than her fair share of boos as she enters the ring. Layla poses in the ring and removes her hood. She takes off the jacket and tosses it aside. Stars in the Night begins with the usual popular scream. The crowd pops and Paige makes her appearance. She has switched it up and gone to the black/gray attire she used to wear on NXT. Along with that is her usual leather jacket. As she walks to the ring, the crowd is clearly behind her, which even seems to catch Paige off guard at first as she quickly glances into the audience. She quickly focuses on the match in front of her again as she climbs onto the apron and removes her jacket. Paige enters the ring as Layla bounces up and down, keeping her eye on the champion. Paige passes her WWE Divas Championship to the ref who shows it to Layla before holding it in the air. He passes it to the timekeeper and calls for the bell. The match begins and the two divas walk to the center of the ring. The crowd is starting to buzz, catching on to Paige's recent "kisses of deaths" to start the match. Layla doesn't appear afraid though, and is even puckering up as Paige walks closer. Paige doesn't think anything of it, or at least doesn't show any doubt on the outside, as she continues her walk. The two are face to face and Paige grabs Layla's head with both of her hands. She pulls Layla in close and plants a kiss on her lips. Before she can pull away however, Layla has now wrapped her arms around Paige's head as well. Layla suddenly shoves her tongue down Paige's throat and the mindgames have been reversed. Paige is now frantically attempting to pull away but struggles as Layla continues to hold her in close while darting her tongue around the champion's mouth. Paige finally pushes Layla off but can't even get a moment to recover before Layla hits a kick to the midsection and follows it with a ddt. Paige's head bounces off of the mat and Layla mounts her immediately. Layla thrashes Paige's head against the mat several times. She finally finishes and Paige holds her head in pain. Layla grabs at Paige's top, but the Anti-Diva pushes her off before she can even attempt to pull it off. Both divas rise and start to trade punches. Paige quickly gets the better of the exchanges and finally wraps her arm around Layla's head in a headlock. Paige cranks on Layla's neck, hoping to soften up the diva. What she wasn't prepared for was Layla's perverted side. Instead of worrying about the pain, Layla softly nuzzles her head against Paige's chest, rubbing her face across the top of Paige's breast and the black top that covers the rest. Paige freaks out and frantically hip tosses Layla away. Layla rises to her knees with a smile on her face. The smile doesn't last long as Paige darts forward and hits a diving dropkick to the opponent. Layla falls backwards to the mat but quickly recovers as Paige rushes back to her feet. Layla starts to rise soon after and Paige goes to rake at her eyes. Before she can, Layla quickly grabs Paige's hand and bites at Paige's finger. Paige screams, but Layla keeps the finger in her mouth. Instead of continuing the biting, Layla starts slowly sucking on Paige's finger. Paige immediately pulls her hand away and is again disgusted by the actions of her opponent. Once again though, Layla has taken Paige off of her game and this time flips her over into a seated position with a snapmare. Paige lands squarely on her ass and isn't able to react as Layla follows it up with a stiff kick right to the champion's back. Paige rolls on the mat in pain, holding her back. Layla drops down and turns Paige so that she if face first on the mat. Layla then works her hands down and grabs hold of Paige's shorts from both sides. She starts tugging down on Paige's shorts but they're very tight and hard to easily yank off. Slowly they inch further down, revealing a bit of Paige's black lace panties. Paige starts to try to kick herself free from Layla, but Layla suddenly lunges upward with a vicious forearm strike that hits the champion in the back of the head and knocks her out momentarily. That time is all Layla needs though to rise to her feet and start desperately pulling at Paige's shorts. They continue their slow slide off of Paige's pale lower body eventually fully revealing Paige's black lace panties. They are nowhere near 100% see through but some of Paige's round bottom can be seen through them and the fact that they only cover the upper half of her ass leaves a lot less to the imagination as the bottom half of Paige's cheeks are out for the world to see. As Paige is still knocked out at this moment, Layla takes a moment to admire her handiwork and pantomimes "shining up" Paige's ass and staring at it while fixing her hair as if it were a mirror. Layla finishes the mocking by planting a quick peck on the exposed portion of Paige's booty, nearly instantly waking her up. Paige coils away immediately just to get away from Layla, but quickly realizes her situation and tries to hide her butt from view. The champion had dealt with stinkfaces from Naomi and a very small moment of her underwear showing during a match with Natalya, but she had never been this vulnerable at the hands of someone else before. In her mind, Paige felt powerless and instantly very aware of all the eyes currently focused on her. There was no time for reflecting on the moment though, as Layla was already starting to make her way over towards the champion. Paige could not worry about covering up, her title was on the line and that's all that matters. Paige quickly rises, seemingly catching Layla off guard. She wraps her arms around Layla for a belly to belly suplex but Layla has a different idea. She reaches down behind Paige and grabs two handfuls of the champion's ass. Paige screams as Layla squeezes her cheeks. Paige lets go of her belly to belly and Layla quickly raises her arms slightly and hits a belly to belly of her own. Paige hits the mat hard and holds her back as she rolls around in pain. Layla rushes forward and hops on Paige. She starts yanking at Paige's top, stretching it with all her might. Paige's top is very tight though and is not easy to slip off. While Layla's hands are on her top, Paige throws her hands forward and claws at Layla's face. Layla rolls off and holds her face. Paige rises to her feet and the crowd cheers for her. The camera shot shows Layla in the background still recovering with the pole in the corner behind her as the foreground shows the back of Paige and her skimpy black lace panties. The camera cuts to a more appropriate shot of Paige's eyes, which are set on Layla. Layla rushes forward straight into a vicious spinebuster by Paige! Paige climbs onto Layla and wraps her pale hands around the former Miami Heat dancer's throat. Paige starts shaking her hands violently, attempting to choke the life out of Layla. Layla desperately tries to get her hands in between her own throat and Paige's strangle but Paige is not allowing any wiggle room. The ref has no choice but look on as the only way this match can end is with a stripping and a paddle being grabbed. Paige finally lets go and rises up, screaming into the air. The crowd cheers louder than before! Layla turns around and gets to her hands and knees, choking and trying to get air back in her system. With her dealing with that, Paige easily slips behind her and grabs the back of her top. Paige rips at the sparkly purple top and pulls it up closer to Layla's head. The back of a similar purple colored bra is visible and Paige shows no signs of stopping as she continues to tug as Layla's top. Layla tries to stop her but Paige quickly has the top caught around Layla's neck. Layla's DD breasts are more out than ever, only covered by a small purple bra that is struggling to hold the diva's large boobs. Paige pulls on Layla's top, not trying to take it off, but to pull it against her neck and start choking her again. Layla is helpless to stop it as Paige shakes her back and forth in the choke, inadvertently leading to Layla's breast bouncing up and down repeatedly, constantly teasing falling out of her bra. Paige finishes the second choke and finally takes the top off of Layla. The crowd cheers and Paige holds it in the air before tossing it out of the ring. Layla quickly covers herself up. The diva loved humiliating others and using sexual taboos to get in their head, but she still was very uncomfortable. This was HER breasts and they're one wrong step from being exposed to the world. Layla suddenly wished she has picked a more conservative bra but her cockiness had gotten the best of her earlier in the day when she made her choice. Layla wanted to match colors and chose the much skimpier underwear that was a similar shade of purple. Style however no longer seemed important to her. What was important was that Paige had turned her attention towards her again. Layla rises and ultimately, stops covering her chest. She was embarrassed, sure. But if she kept her hands there, she'd be a sitting duck and lose her shorts in a split second. The two divas lock up and Paige instantly seems to have the advantage, locking Layla in another headlock. Layla, without her top, is much less worried about headgames and tries to power her way out of the headlock. That proves unsuccessful and Paige irish whips her across the ring. Layla bounces off the ropes, and that isn't the only thing bouncing. Layla returns and is lifted into the air by Paige. Paige drops Layla stomach first against the top rope. Layla's gut is hurting but even worse, she is in a terrible predicament. Her upper body is hanging outside of the ring and once again, her breasts are testing her skimpy purple bra's limits. Even worse, Layla's lower body is hanging inside the ring and Paige has both her hands on the short purple shorts of the challenger. Paige pulls as Layla desperately tries to kick her off. Paige ignores the weak shots as she starts exposing Layla's plump booty, covered only by her Purple tanga style panties. Layla's kicking is only exciting the crowd as her butt is shaking side to side as Paige slips her shorts down by her knees. Paige can't help but humiliate her opponent some more by giving Layla a hard smack on her right cheek. Layla yells out in pain and Paige finishes the stripping by slipping off the shorts. Paige tosses it aside and has officially stripped her opponent to her bra and panties! A normal title defense, the match would be over but not tonight. The paddle still loomed in the background on the pole and Paige has now turned her attention to it, leaving her opponent still straddling the top rope. Layla quickly gets her upper body back into the ring and attempts to cover up using her hands. This was not what Stephanie had promised her. Stephanie told Layla that she would be champion and probably not even lose a single article of clothing. Well Stephanie's words were useless now as they certainly help hide Layla's large cheeks from the camera flashes. But still, Layla needed to fight on. She was humiliated, but she could still pull out the victory. And if she didn't... that paddle would be even more humiliating than what she is dealing with now. Layla rushes towards Paige who is starting to climb the turnbuckle. Before she can reach the top turnbuckle, Layla shoves the champion. Paige hits the corner hard and slips off of the ropes. She is now leaned against the turnbuckle, with her back facing towards her opponent. If Layla had been in control, this could have been another opportunity for some humiliating Paige assplay. But now, Layla couldn't waste her time. She pulls at the back of Paige's top but the champion is not going to lose her protection that easily. Paige is able to turn around and is facing her opponent. Layla attempts a few knife edge chops, but Paige no-sells them. Paige grabs Layla by the head and reverses the situation, tossing her into the corner. Paige fires away with knife edge chop after knife edge chop to the upper portion of Layla's breasts. With no protection or cover, Layla's boobs are starting to turn bright red as Paige continues her chops of pain. Layla finally falls to her knees, seemingly overwhelmed with pain. Paige smirks and steps over Layla to climb onto the second rope. Paige steps up onto the top rope and stretches upwards, trying to grab the paddle. Layla rises back up, her head sandwiched between Paige's crotch and the top turnbuckle. Layla scoops her hands underneath Paige's legs, in powerbomb position. Paige pays it no mind, knowing she is only a few inches away from victory. If she could just reach a little bit further, she would win. Layla, out of sheer desperation, hooks her hands around Paige's black lace panties. Instead of trying to pull Paige away from the corner for a possible powerbomb, Layla pulls with all her might at Paige's panties. The Anti-Diva lets out a scream as Layla has exposed Paige's tiny black thong which was under her panties. Layla slips out from her awkward location and is now behind Paige, who dropped down to the middle rope with her focus back on Layla. Paige's pale butt cheeks are heavily visible with her only protection being a very small thong which is only covering her crack and barely anything else. Layla pulls the panties down even further. Paige tries to hop off of the corner to try to save her panties but Layla yanks at the same time, causing Paige to lose her balance and hit the mat back first. Paige's legs are still up due to Layla who finally slips the panties off of the champion. The camera catches a great shot of Paige's legs together in the air, revealing her firm butt cheeks and very minor protection before cutting to a shot of Layla holding the panties in the air. Layla bites at them and holds them in her mouth, seemingly starting to grow more confident again. Layla tosses them aside and smiles as Paige cowers in the corner. In Paige's head, it was very conflicting emotions. On the one hand, massive anger at Layla. This was a bra and panties match and Layla had already stripped off her shorts! Pulling down her panties didn't accomplish anything except distracting her and revealing way too much of her. I mean, maybe its a bit hypocritical given what she had done to AJ and Naomi... but those were just quick moments! Only a split second of embarrassment. Layla stole her panties and just threw them outside of the ring. She was going to have to fight the rest of the match like this. Besides the anger, Paige was extremely embarrassed. Her pale face looked much more red as she was flustered by the situation. She knew when she put it on that her thong didn't cover a lot but it was meant to be under her panties. It was meant as an insurance policy in case they tore or got pulled too far or something like that. The world wasn't supposed to see it! No one was supposed to see it! All those thoughts popped in her head over the course of a split second but ultimately Paige knew that she needed to win this match and win it quick. Because every second she was in the ring with Layla was clearly a liability. Slightly distracted in her thought/fear, Layla takes advantage and pulls Paige by the head and shoves her between her legs, in jackknife powerbomb position. Layla sways her hips, causing Paige's body to swivel as well. Paige's hip sway left and right and Layla's smile is starting to return as she could only imagine how embarrassed Paige must be feeling right now. Layla gets so caught up in shaking Paige, the champion is starting to recover and snap out of her fearful state. Before Layla can lift the Anti Diva for the powerbomb, Paige back body drops her. Layla quickly gets back to her feet... PAIGE TURNER! Layla is down and Paige is in control. Paige quickly turns back towards the pole. She rushes towards the corner and climbs up to the top rope. She reaches and again is mere inches away from grabbing the pole. But with one final stretch, Paige retrieves the paddle and drops off the turnbuckle back into the ring. DING! DING! DING! Paige quickly rolls out of the ring and turns towards the fans. She asks a young adult male for his Paige "Think Again" shirt and to the surprise and disappointment of others, he takes it off and gives it to her. Paige throws it over her top, and has created a makeshift dress for herself out of the shirt. Now that she was covered again, Paige could enjoy herself. She may have lost her shorts, she may have lost her panties, and she may have nearly revealed her most precious parts but she kept her gold. And she had a paddle. Layla finally starts stirring and upon waking, hears Paige's music playing and grows incredibly worried. Thoughts raced in her head. She had chosen the stipulation only because Stephanie had assured her victory. Where was Stephanie now? She'd send someone out to save her, wouldn't she? Well if she was planning on it, she better do it soon. All she was wearing was her skimpy sparkly purple bra and similar colored tanga panties. Layla would pay anything to be backstage in the locker room and not in the middle of the ring surrounded by an audience cheering Layla's crushing humiliation. Layla couldn't handle that thought any longer and decided, stipulation or not, she's leaving. Layla rolls out of the ring by the ramp but Paige quickly runs across to that side. She pulls Layla by the hair and bends her over the steel steps. Paige raises the paddle and the crowd cheers. Layla yells in fear. Paige brings the paddle down with a hard smack, hitting Layla right on her exposed cheeks. Layla tries to crawl off of the stairs but Paige grabs a hold of her by the tanga panties. Layla doesn't dare move again, as she knows that if she falls off the stairs, she'll be more exposed than ever. The Anti Diva repeatedly smacks the paddle across Layla's large booty as the former Miami Heat dancer screams out in pain and sheer embarrassment. She never imagined being in this situation and for this young brat to be humiliating her so badly was too much to handle. Paige smiles as she winds up and gives one large final smack with the paddle to Layla's butt before letting the diva go. Layla rubs her reddened butt in pain as Paige turns towards the crowd and raises the paddle in victory. Starting to regain her bearings, Layla is furious over what is happened and isn't going to let tonight end this way. She may not be champion, but Layla would be damned if Paige gets the last laugh tonight. Layla rises up and turns towards Paige. She spins the champion around and throws a shot but Paige ducks and swings the paddle at Layla's head! It hits with a sick thud and Layla collapses to the ground, falling spread eagle by the stairs. Everything essential is covered however, just barely. The fans are cheering at the visual of Layla's open legs as they're getting a great glimpse at her inner thighs and above. Paige smirks at Layla's situation and is given her Divas Championship. Paige starts putting the title underneath her shirt. Strangely, she is putting it on the wrong way, with the main plate on the back and the buckles on the front. Paige gives one final laugh at Layla and turns to exit. As she walks she lifts up her shirt slightly, teasing the WWE Universe by showing that her pale cheeks are covered by her championship. |
Aaaaweeesooooommeeeee!
Awesome. Simply awesome.
Your matches keep getting better and better. This is your best one yet. Paige is really starting to come into her own as a champion. The fact that she keeps winning against a variety of different opponents really gives this story something extra special. I don't remember Layla being grabby during her matches. Maybe if I did I'd actually like her. I remember Mickie James grabbing Trish's crotch at WrestleMania 22. But all I remember about Layla is Extreme Expose, Flawless, and the Piggy James stuff. So your representation of Layla was way better than what's on TV. Bra and Panties Matches are great. Paddle on a Pole Matches are fun. Too bad no one ever really sticks around to get properly paddled afterward. I love your concept of having Paige being a cheater and rule breaker but still being cheered and supported by the fans. Because in the end, no matter who she's facing in the ring, she's really going up against Stephanie. Stephanie McMahon generates amazing heat and as a result anyone that goes up against her gets cheered loudly. People actually cheered for Brie Bella when she went up against her. And let's not forget about Vickie Guerrero's classic send off. I really can't wait to see what happens next. Brie and Rosa have their upcoming title shots so I guess Paige is booked for the Royal Rumble and Elimination Chamber. Now that's you've raised the stakes with this AWESOME bra and panties match/paddle on a pole match, something tells me that Paige's unforgettable upcoming matches are going to be on a completely different level. *Bows Nature Boy Style* Keep up the great work. |
Oh wow! This chapter was just incredible. I mean you last stuff was really fantastic, but this just blows them away, your best work to date by quite a distance, which is really saying something given your quality before. Just, WOW.
Descriptive, intriguing, you can get a real idea of how humiliated the women are feeling (describing their mindset, which I absolutely love) and as the episodes go on the humiliation is slowly but certainly increasing. That Stephanie dynamic has really interested me in the future, as well as the increased exposure of Paige with her getting stripped to a tiny thong here; it has me asking whether she is going to be completely stripped and humiliated by the end, or is she going to have the last laugh on Stephanie (now that she is seemingly the good guy; also a brilliant touch, that the crowd reaction to her has organically turned her face, a small detail which you really didn't have to do, but doing so makes the story seem all the more real). That's the other thing, the rolling counter of the events, and the mention of camera details again make it all the more real; just incredible attention to detail. I am gushing here, and I just can't praise this enough; 10/10, one of the best chapters on this site. I don't think you would mind me saying that whilst I loved your work, DoctorRipper's AJ/Paige story was always just one step ahead. Not anymore, this chapter has pulled you right up to his incredibly high standards in my estimation. The duel of the Paige stories has really begun, and it is between two stories which could easily end up being the two best on the site. Speaking of best of the site, have you been reading and taking notes from Power Hungry GM? Because this last chapter read a lot like that, in an excellent way. I literally can not wait for next Sunday. I know you need the week to truely form these great stories, but I am going to be a huge spoiled baby and say I need this next chapter now! hahahahaha. p.s-just stuff that I loved that I missed out: -Paige getting more and more into her character; first the kiss, then the showboating when stripping (it's not just about winning the title anymore, she has to do it in style) and obviously that last sentance showing her exhibitionist side come out, teasing the fans. -The fact that from your first post, I have now realized that we still have 5 more chapters of this to come. |
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Hmmm really amazing story here mate keep up the good work,
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Thank you for the very kind words guys.
@MickGesitt - Dayjib pretty much explained the Layla thing for me. Its never been a storyline, but she has had notable sexual moments with Kaitlyn (rubbing her face against her breast when going for a pin), AJ (squeezing her ass after tapping to the Black Widow), and others. And yeah, Stephanie is great at getting the crowd to hate her. That seems like something passed down to her by Vince and makes me very excited for the future of the WWE. @Dayjib - Thank you for the overwhelming praise and noticing some of the more minor details. Funny enough, the Power Hungry GM story was probably the first long/major story I read here. I was hooked from the first post with the "over the top, off with the top" match returning. So saying that this chapter read like that is a highly appreciated compliment. @DrVillian - Glad you're enjoying it, dude. Next Chapter will be the Royal Rumble ppv, where Paige will be defending her WWE Divas Championship against Brie Bella and Rosedust in the first ever triple threat bra and panties match. And yeah, we've reached about the halfway point of the chapters, as the next one will be chapter 5 of 9. Barring any unforeseen circumstances, it will be posted one week from today and I'll keep you in the loop if anything were to happen that may need to delay it. One personal pet peeve of mine, since I've read quite a few of the WWE stories on here now, is when stories end abruptly because the writer disappears or has RL issues come up. It's completely understandable, sure, but kind of sucks for the viewer/reader who was hooked. So I just want to assure you guys that this story will be seen all the way to the end. |
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