Doctor Who Fanfiction
 

Hi. I wrote this in honor of the Doctor Who 50th anniversary. Its my 1st fiction story so suggestions would be helpful. I hope you guys like it.

It was an average day for the 10th Doctor and his companion Martha Jones. They had just finished having dinner with Winston Churchill in 1944 and were back in the TARDIS, ready for their next great adventure. "So where do you feel like going next?" asked The Doctor. Martha replied, "How about we go to the 45th moon of Jupiter?" "Ok, Jupited it is!" he replied. He set the TARDIS for the correct coordinate and pressed the launch button. But nothing was happening! "Doctor, is there a problem?" Martha inquired, with a hint of concern in her voice. "I don't know whats happening, I think there might be some sort of disturbance, interfering with the TARDIS" No sooner did those words leave his mouth, light erupted from the center of the room and the entire place began to shake violently. "Martha hold on!" yelled the doctor. Unfortunately, the tremor was too great and both found themselves knocked unconscious.

When the Doctor came to, the TARDIS was completely trashed. Their was smoke coming from the control panel and debris was scattered around everywhere. He immediately got up and went to check up on Martha, who was laying underneath the staircase which had collapsed during the accident. "Martha, Martha! Are you alright?" the Doctor asked, concerned, shaking her body in an effort to bring back her consciousness. She slowly opened her eye and saw the Doctor standing over her. "What happened Doctor?" Martha inquired. Doctor replied "I don't know exactly, but it appears that the TARDIS malfunctioned somehow and now we seem to be trapped inside." Their was smoke coming from everywhere and even the door of the vehicle had broken down in the explosion. For a few seconds they were both quiet while they attempted to absorb everything that had just happened. Suddenly, a groan broke the silence. "uuhh, I feel like I was hit over the head with a brick, where am I" said a voice coming from somewhere in the room. The Doctor and Martha both begin looking around, attempting to figure out where the voice had come from. Then a head covered in bright blonde hair popped out of a pile of debris.

"Rose? How and when did you get into the TARDIS?" shouted Doctor in surprise. "I'm not sure exactly. One minute I was sitting around in my house. Next thing I know where was a bright light and I found myself here." "Martha, this is Rose, the one that I told you about. Rose, this is Martha, my new traveling companion." said the Doctor, introducing the two to each other. "Well all three of us seem to be trapped in the TARDIS. Its currently fixing itself but its gonna take a while. Anyone got any ideas to pass the time?" Rose replied, "do you have a deck of cards lying around?" The Doctor went to the living room to look and came back with an ancient looking deck of cards. "Found one, it was a gift from George Washington, I helped him out a little with an incident a while back and he gave it to me as a thank you present." Martha inquired, "What game did you have in mind?" "How about strip poker?" suggested Rose.

"You can't seriously be suggesting we play strip poker?" said the Doctor, nervously. "Why not, unless you, a Time Lord who has lived hundreds of years and gone toe to toe against filthiest of vermins in all of world, don't think you can beat two little girls in a game of poker?" replied Rose, with enough tease in her voice to push the Doctor's buttons. "I'm not too sure about this either" said Martha, on the fence about actually playing strip poker. Rose took Martha to the side and whispered, "Come on Martha, haven't you ever fantasized about what the Doctor looks like under his trademark trouser and blazer?" This was enough to push Martha over the fence, "I'm in"

They spent the next 15 minutes agreeing on the rules. Everyone will start out with the same number of clothes. Shoes and socks count as one item. The person with the lowest hand of the three strips. No covering is allowed. First person to lose has to serve as waiter while the other two finish the game; when not obeying orders they must be standing up, displaying everything for the other two

Doctor
-Shoes+socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Tie
-Pants
-underwear

Rose
-Shoes+Socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Pants
-Bra
-Panties

Martha
-Shoes+Socks
-Jacket
-Shirt
-Pants
-Bra
-Panties

With great tension in the air, Martha dealt the cards for round 1

Round 1
Cards were dealt for the 1st round. Doctor found himself sweating, partially because of his horrible hand of nothing, and partially because of the situation. He always fancied Rose and Martha was definitely attractive. While he could end up winner, with the girls naked, bare in front of him, other scenario was he could find himself naked and embarrassed. He discarded his four lowest cards, hoping for a pair. Unfortunately, he found himself with nothing yet again. Martha discarded 3 of her cards while Rose discarded 4 like the Doctor. After last card was dealt to Rose, everyone put their cards on the table. Martha won the 1st round with three 2s and Doctor found himself last, beaten by Rose's pair of kings against his nothing. He took of his shoes and socks

Round 2
Next round begin. Rose couldn't believe that it was so easy to convince the Doctor and Martha into the game. She was an experienced poker player, even won a few games of strip poker in her younger high school and college days. And lost once, she added to the end of her thoughts. Her mind still goes red remembering that game of strip poker in college between her, mickey, and 2 other girls and 4 other guys. The three girls found themselves butt naked, masturbating for the boys. But it won't happen this time! Rose also wanted to embarrass Martha, who she was as a rival for Doctor's affection. Rose was dealt a pair of 4s right off the bat. Excellent! She discarded her other three cards and found herself with two pair, pair of 4s and pair of 8s. Martha discarded one of her cards, which made her a little nervous. Everyone showed their hands. Surprisingly, Martha beat Rose's two pair with a full house, Aces over 5s. Doctor was clearly hoping his pair of Queen would save him from last this time. Unfortunately, he lost the round and his jacket.

Round 3
Martha had never played any kind of stripping game before, but the chance to see the Doctor naked and to embarrass Rose was too great to pass up. Besides, despite no strip poker experience, she had played poker plenty of times. She was dealt no matches, but 3 clubs. Martha decided to take the risk and discarded her two non-clubs. Her bold action was rewarded with a flush! When it came time to show hands, Martha won yet again and Doctor lost yet again, having nothing while Rose had 3 Aces. With increased sense of nervousness, Doctor removed his tie.

"How about we make this more interesting?" said Rose. "Not only does first person to lose have to be maid for the rest of the game, both losers have to be slaves until the TARDIS repairs itself" Doctor and Martha were both nervous, Doctor especially considering the rotten losing streak he was on. But both were too proud to back down and agreed. Despite agreeing to it, Doctor found himself thinking, how did i get myself into this situation? He was down to three pieces of clothing while both girls were fully dressed and he just agreed that the losers have to be slaves until the TARDIS is fixed. And who knows how long that is gonna take?

Round 4
Doctor dealt this round of cards. He once again found himself with absolutely nothing and decided to go for a hail marry, discarding all 5 cards. Rose discarded 3 cards while Martha discarded 4. When he got his new hand, his eyes widened! He couldn't believe his luck, he was just dealt two pairs, Kings and Aces. Rose had only a pair of 3s. Fortunately, Martha had nothing. Martha took off her shoes and socks. Doctors losing streak was finally over!

Round 5
Next round of cards were dealt. Rose found herself with a pair of three yet again and discarded her other three cards. Unfortunately, she got nothing. Doctor showed his pair of 8s and Martha flashed her pair of Jack, with a smirk on her face, happy that her rival for Doctor's affection finally lost. Rose took off her shoes and socks

At the end of round 5, Rose and Martha both have 5 pieces of clothes left while Doctor only has his shirt, pants, and boxers.

Round 6
Martha was not too confident with the pair of Kings she was dealt, but she was certain someone had to have lower. However, its seemed Lady Luck was determined to go against Martha. Doctor showed his three 5s. Then Rose flipped her hand, displaying an identical pair of Kings. Everyone momentarily froze. "well the rule was the person with the lowest hand has to strip" the Doctor pointed out "and as both of your hands are the lowest, its only fair both of you strip." Martha and Rose agreed and both took off their jackets

Round 7
Doctor was feeling lot better about his chances. He could feel himself getting aroused at the possibility of having both Rose and Martha as slaves. With the pair of Aces he was just dealt, he was pretty confident that he's win streak would not end here. Unfortunately, Rose's losing streak continued as she found herself for the 3rd time in a row, at the bottom with her hand of nothing. Martha came in second with a pair of 6s. With a deep breathe, Rose stood up and took off her shirt, displaying a flat stomach and a cute pink frilly bra like the one here
http://weheartit.com/entry/33571545

Round 8
Rose was determined to win this time. She had already lost her shirt and she wasn't going to lose her pants. Unfortunately, Lady Luck had other plans. Despite getting 2 pairs, 3s and 10s, it wasn't enough to beat Martha's three 2s and the Doctor's flush. Rose could feel her face getting warm and red as she stood up and slowly pulled her pants down, displaying a matching pink panties. Her face still blushing, she sat down and prepared herself for the next round

At the end of 8 rounds, Martha was winning, still having both her pants and shirt as well as her underwear. The Doctor had 3 pieces of clothing, his pants shirt and underwear. Rose was in last place in her pink bra and panties

what do people think so far, should i continue? Any pointers?

Well...

I like it! You've got at least one avid reader here, my friend :)

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So far so good, I would like to see where this story goes.

i like it looking forward to more

If you're looking for suggestions...

I think it would be cool if the characters had a few british-isms in their speech. Or you know how Rose always says her th's like f's... stuff like "I like my chips better with ketchup in. What do you fink?" :p

Don't distract from what you're doing though, because I love it. Just an idea.

I love your idea of incorporating British, unfortuantely I don't know anything about British manerism and speech. I'll try my best. All goes according to plan I should have new chapters out by tomorrow night.

agree with the above post about the british mannerisims us limeys dont get enough recongition from the yanks :p:p

Round 9
Martha was starting to feel pretty good about her chances. But she knew it was dangerous to get over confident; that's part of how Rose went from first to last. She was dealt nothing, so she discarded everything but her ace. Unfortunately, she still only had an ace high. Lucky for Martha, Doctor had nothing too and only a Jack high. Nervously, he stood up and took off his shirt revealing his toned chest that can only come from centuries of battles and adventures. "Its about time someone else showed some skin. I been sitting here in my knickers freezing my bums off for the past few rounds." Said rose teasingly.

Round 10
The Doctor was now back at bottom only wearing two clothes, same as Rose. But he knew that he still had a chance. He just had to start a lucky streak like he did earlier. And it looked like faith decided to be kind to him as he was dealt two pair right off the bet. He didn't get anything useful replacing his last card, but it didn't matter. He was confident two pairs would be good enough to at least guarantee that he wouldn't end up in last place. And the Doctor was right. The honor of last place went to Martha. Martha displayed a shock on her face when she realized Doctor's two pairs and Rose's three of a kind beat he pair of aces. She had gotten so far in the game without losing anything that would reveal too much, but her luck finally seemed to have run out. Trying not to look at the Doctor, Martha stood up and took off her shirt revealing a very thin black bra. Rose and the Doctor were both surprised that she, who always dressed so conservatively, would be wearing an undergarment like that. "Jeez Doctor, how long are you going to keep on staring at my chest. Your acting like you never seen one before." Said Martha, trying to put on a braver face then she actually felt. The Doctor muttered sorry and turned his heads away, his face turning red.

Round 11.
Things were looking up for Rose. She was now only 1 win away from first place. However, she couldn't afford to take any chances. Although she hated to cheat, with only 2 losses away from being not only completely naked, but a slave to either Martha or Doctor for the rest of the night (and frankly she didn't know which would be worse) she decided to cement her win for the round. While the other two were checking out their cards for the round, She discretely took out a pair of aces she was hiding in her bra and replaced it two of her cards, which, with her ace of spade that was already in her hand, gave her a three of a kind. Martha ended up in last place with a pair of twos. Not pleased at the outcome, but at least little less embarrassed since she already had to show something, she stood up and took off her pants revealing a matching black thong and a great behind.

Round 12
Martha knew that she had to be very careful now. There stood only 2 bad hands between her and complete humiliation. She was given 4 diamonds. If this had been one of the earlier games, she would have taken her chances and gone for a flush. But with so much at risk, she decided it would be safer to go for a pair and discarded everything but her Queen of Diamond. It appeared though, that she would have been better of taking a risk as her draw yielded nothing of use.

Rose, while she was feeling pretty confident now that the playing field was even, decided to give herself just a little bit of an insurance. Luckily, she had a 8 and a 5 in her hand; conveniently 8 and 5 were the cards that she had tucked into her bra earlier. She reached in when she thought neither of them were looking and slowly, and discretely, begin to take them out when, "Rose!" yelled the Doctor "Blimy! I am astounded! I mean really, resorting to cheating and keeping cards in your knickers?" "Uhm, this isn't what it, I mean, I don't, um" Rose was trying desperately to try and come up with some sort of excuse but she was caught red handed. "I think its only fair that she be disqualified from this game". Doctor agreed "Its only fair Rose, you shouldn't have tried to cheat your way into a win". Rose knew that both of them had a point. She slowly stood up and not daring to look at either of them directly and with a face as red as can be, she removed her bra revealing a perky set of breasts. Then she stuck her finger into her waistband, and trying hard to preserve her last few seconds of dignity, removed her knickers. Rose instinctively tried to cover herself with her hands only to have it be pointed out by both the Doctor and Martha that it was agreed that no covering was allowed. Martha and Doctor then ordered her to stand next to them so that they can enjoy a nice view while they finish the game. Now they were down to two, both wearing only two articles of clothing.

not enough description in the tits and pussy for my liking i was exxpecting you to really describe from your description of the bra and knickers but it kind of felt a bit flat