New interactive ENF Story
 

I'm still working on my two interactive ENF stories. Comic book ENF http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline just started.
Nothing to hide http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline is still going strong, but honestly it's starting to fill up. Want it to continue but I like the idea of starting something new. I thought I'd check here and see if any potential contributor's might have any thoughts.

Just a note, it'll probably have a small breast humiliation aspect, my personal favorite kind of ENF story. What I was possibly thinking was maybe a group of camp counselor's at a summer camp getting exposed, each girl being designed by someone else. Anyone interested?

Just wanted to say i really love your stuff, please keep it up!

Yes, splotch, you are top notch in quality and dedication! Your "Nothing to Hide" tale is an excellent success. I don't know why, but I've never been interested in comic book settings, but I know there are plenty of people who do love it. I'm sure it will do well too!

Your summer camp idea sounds great!

For one of the counselors, I'd like her to be rather short with nice D-cup breasts. However, she doesn't shave her pussy, leaving a nice triangle of curls. She's proud of her tits but self-conscious about her pussy. When the humiliation starts, she would prefer to have her big breasts exposed, but much to her horror, her tormentors know about her "weakness". The counselor's big bosom is sometimes purposefully ignored just to draw more attention to what she has going on between her legs.

That's what I'd like to see. :)

I really like the summer camp idea. I've always liked adding chapters to your stories when the mood hits me

stuffed bras ftw!
 

I'm also a great fan of small breast humiliation, in particular when it comes in the form of a stuffed or padded bra being exposed, which is one reason I've always particularly enjoyed your stories Splotch. Personally I'm hoping for an attractive but bossy, arrogant and condescending counsellor - late teens - with an apparently large bust - say DD cup - who is exposed as actually being the flattest girl in the camp (including the campers).:eek:

splotch will take good care of you, man. ;)

Honestly, I don't mind if my hairy pussy girl also had a majorly stuffed chest, but it seemed kinda strange to have 2 of such girls in the same story. I mean, I suppose they could have conspired together to keep their stuffed bras a secret. But, that might lead to too much duplication.

I'm all for variety.:) Much as I enjoy the flat chested girls it means nothing if that description applies to everyone. Having any source of self conciousness (such as your girl's hairy pussy) is always good, as is any other ENF of course - some more than others. Having everything rolled into one woman/girl seems too limiting to the story.

I don't know how you were imagining her but I find it's always more enjoyable if the exposed hair is not the colour everyone expected; a blonde who turns out not to be so blonde after all? More of my preference for artifice exposed I guess.:D

A dirty blonde with dark brown pubes? I could go for that! More options for humiliating comments!

I really like the sound of the camp counselors idea. I'd be happy to design one of them once that gets off the ground. :D

Story's started!
 

Here's the story!

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...CLEARWATER-ENF

Started describing some of the counselor's, the rest are up to you entirely. Hope everyone adds and enjoys!

Hi Splotch, the padded bra is also my favorite type of humiliation and I can see where things are going with May very early on already. I'm just wondering if it's possible to get everyone to give her a few close shaves, make the characters in the story think she's real for awhile and makes May more cocky and then give her a big exposure in the end?

It's really a way of building tension in a story but I don't know if it can be done in an interactive story...

Thank you for getting this started!

However, I fear that since there are so many girls mentioned at the start, this story might become paralyzed by excessive choices. I don't mean to sound negative here. Do you think we could/should pare it down to 3 starting girls?

The point of this story was to leave it open so others could design their own girls. So, for now at least, I'll leave all these pathways open. None of the other's should interfere with what any one person wants to do, being seperate.

Jim, I like your idea of dragging out May's exposure. You're welcome to take a thread and make it happen there, saving up for one big exposure then ending it.

Okay!

Well, if I can get moving quick enough, the cheerleader seems perfect. :)

oh yeah, I kind of made her for you.

good additon derelict, btw

Thanks, it's a start!

Unfortunately, the "good stuff" can't come soon enough! :)

Wish I had the writing skills mate... :o

I tried! My first time, so please be kind with your comments :o .
And yes, I managed to keep May's bra on... already have an idea for next chapter...

Got a bit of mental Diarrhea.
Please be kind - take it as a long first attempt, broken into a few parts.

Do your best! That's all anyone can ask! :)

jm6379, your chapters are great! Like the pacing you got going on, hard to do in a ENF story, let alone a interactive one. keep it up, drag it out as long as you want

Thanks for the compliments Splotch.

I've got a couple of ideas to keep May's secret going for another few chapters but I was hoping someone can take up one of the other girls first so I can also write towards that to try and keep the whole story congruent. Otherwise May's chapters are going to look like something on it's own, unrelated to the rest of the story.

Basically going forward I was going to build up May's paranoia and ego to the point where everyone on the camp will revel in her humiliation later.

I'd like to use one of your other characters if possible to aid towards that end.

Hi Splotch,

I was hoping someone could take up one of the other girls so I can also write towards that end. Otherwise May's chapters would seem to be on their own and not congruent with the rest of the story.

Going forward I was going to build up May's paranoia and ego to the point everyone will revel in her ultimate humiliation.

Now, some people might disagree with me, but I don't think you should worry much about the other paths. Each path is an "alternate dimension", so each girl will have her own "reality". You could add the other girls in and make them act however you want, I'd think.

OK, I've used the other girls in very minor supporting roles.

Was just wondering if I could use one of them in a pivotal way to strip May in the end.

I've added two versions of a new chapter. On one, May goes crazy and is determined to use her powers to find out who entered her cabin. He ego grows bigger and makes lots of enemies until she is finally taken down.

In the other, she is slowly becoming a nervous wreck (paranoid).

Feedback appreciated.

both story lines are great. I wrote a Diane chapter, she coud be used.

Hi guys,

I'm having a hard time thinking of how to finish off the May nervous wreck chapter. For some reason it's easier to take down ego b*tches than nervous wrecks.

Appreciate any ideas.

Also like the Dianne and Melony chapters. May wait awhile and see how those stories unfold.

Yes, it is a challenge...

Maybe, in her anxious state, she could start making some very questionable decisions or oversights? She could trust her secret with the wrong person and find herself blackmailed by them. She might mess up her bra stuffing and raise a few eyebrows.

I was thinking about it in my travels today. I thought out two ways besides yours actually:

1.) She is stripped through a series of accidents or 'unfortunate events'. This is the easier way.

2.) She is reduced to such a state where something triggers her to come clean. The others don't actually know, but in her mind she thinks they are blackmailing her. This is my preferred "psychological thriller" finish but I don't have the skill to write it.

Almost got the ego b*tch finale ready. About 5 1/2 pages long in Word. May want to hold it a bit and do tweaks as the other story lines develop?

no, post it when ready!

Hahah - done!

Actually turned into a 2 part finale as each chapter had a 10k character limit? I clocked about 13k.

Hope you guys find it an enjoyable Sunday read. I'm sure I made some conti mistakes and typos so please be kind.

great set of stories :)

No updates after a week? :(

Is it too late for me to take up "Britney, a nerdy computer expert" or is that someone else's project?

Nobody has touched that girl yet, so I hope you can add something! :)
Somebody also added a new character who is May's sister. Wish he came on board earlier. Could have written some stuff using the new character too...

you still can, it's fine to right on threads started by other people. Keeps it interesting.

okay I started Britney

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ER-ENF/map/151

it's a little different from a standard ENF But you guys have covered most of the typical ones.

And I wanted to be original!

I was the one who started the June (May's sister) thread jm. By all means add to it or use her somewhere else. I'm certainly not up to writing a whole thread myself like you did (great work by the way) and I don't claim any ownership just because I wrote the first chapter.:) Imo one of the best things about these type of stories is that people can just chip in a chapter wherever they want as and when they have the time and inclination.

Brittany Chapter 2
 

Okay guys here it is;

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...R-ENF/map/1511

I'm getting May involved Hopefully Brittany Can guest star in the last couple May chapters