Hey
 

Yea if you want but there's only one part between Brie and kelly right now you know what I will do both what was part 1 of the Brie vs kelly fued

Strip till naked

Name the saga whatever

Hey
 

Ok part 1 is typed and reviewed
And the strip till naked match is typed and reviewed

I'm just going to ask bluntly. Is English your first language? Your continuous errors are of those even a ten year old is taught not to make, and even with tutoring you don't improve. By all means if English is not your native tongue I give you props for trying to write, but if you were born and raised in an English country, these issues are just depressingly bad.

Hey
 

What are you talking about just because I post different than in my stories then I do when I post stuff like this and I have improved on the stories I have typed on my phone that I am currently writing on paper as of right now

Jimmie yes English is my language this just preview of how good Of story i can do next chapter will be better but I not posting, till u post something of Brie vs Kelly

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Just start on it and I will try and post it tommorrow or tommorrow night