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Found a pretty good story line. Some of the branches become circular, but there really are some good chapters.
http://editthis.info/create_your_own...You%27re_Naked! |
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That is because the link is missing the last exclamation mark.
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Also on the same site, I've been able to find two more ENF-ish stories. I haven't explored them fully myself so I'm not sure if they're pure ENF or if they're going to involve sex at some point:
http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Pi_Pi_Pi (Pi Pi Pi - seems to be a story about a college sorority. There are a couple of nude scenes from what I can see.) http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Work_Attire (Work Attire - seems to be about two women who decide what the other is going to wear each day to work. There are forfeits involved if either woman refuses to wear an outfit or adds anything to the outfit.) |
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Found one more story on the website (genuine ENF) called The Humiliation of Kate:
http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ation_of_Katie Just to let you know; I trawled through some of the adult stories on the site and tried a few which seemed to have ENF / exhibitionist potential, and... after reading a story about a girl whose clothes get stolen at the beach, but is then ****d and impregnated by a giant mutant spider only for thousands of spiders to hatch out of her crotch when she goes to school... I'm done with the site. They can create their own damned stories, I'm just... Nope. Nope nope nope nope nope... *opens the door, goes outside. All that can be heard is my gradually diminishing 'nopes' as I walk far, far away* |
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Well personally what get to me the most about that site is that the typical weaknesses of interactive adult stories are all a lot more present.
Weakness 1: Dead thread. It's hard enough to deal it with it on sites like writing.com but at least writing.com has is a decent story map that can visually work even for bigger stories. On that site there is nothing to give you an idea. Of the stories I tried on that site about 75% of all choices lead to dead end and you just have to go blindly. Not a fun reading experience. Weakness 2: One thread wonder. It happen on writing.com. An "interactive" story will have just one thread with 50 chapters in succession. On that site if you find such a thread you consider yourself lucky. Weakness 3: More choices than actual chapters. There are tons of stories over there that are just one landing page with a choice of about 20 different characters. And then after you chose a character you are presented with as many choices of age/settings. And that's about as far as the story goes. At least on writing.com there is a enforced limit on the number of options. Weakness 4: Lack of focus. I don't think that site has any kind of chapter filtering at all. Stories change subject and theme so much there is no point even looking at the original blurb. |
#3 is generally inevitable in interactive stories.
Boring math: even with just two options (wrting.com allows 3 for paid members), if writers don't end their threads often there are 2^level threads. 2 levels in that's 4 paths (e.g. after choosing a character) 3 levels in that 8 (e.g. after choosing an age or situation) 4 levels in that 16 (e.g. the introduction to the story) So the story hasn't even kicked off yet and there are already 16 different threads started. If a good story requires a minimum of 3 more levels before wrapping up, that's 2^7 live story threads or 128 different paths. That's a lot of writing and I've seen plenty of stories with more levels. |
Yeah I know. I think it's really important to have as little paths as possible at the start and only offer choices when appropriate and for story changing, pertinent choices.
Every time you ask the reader the color of the character's panties or such little detail you exponentially augment the numbers of chapters in the story and dilute it. The earlier that choice is the worse the effect. People have to understand that an option is not just a cosmetic choice. It is a whole new story. Do you really want to start a whole new story about the color of the character's panties in that one short scene? Or about if she take her bike or car? Well that car better be the center of your new story because there are a finite number of writers and energy and the more chapters that get added the less chances there are that a coherent, interesting story will grow somewhere in there. Sure, in a perfect world more people would contribute to stories and you could just make a game of posting choices. But that is not how it work in reality. Authors have to beg and sometimes offer points to get people to contribute. If a reader opens a story and just finds broken fragments of a story he won't stick around long enough to want to contribute to it. |
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Let's say I write a chapter in "Nothing to Hide", and then challenge Afterthefall are Splotch to make an addition afterward. Writing is fun, but often it seems that it's a thankless task and making it into something where we're actively acknowledging eachother's additions could certainly bring in some energy. Merely tossing out ideas. |
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That would be a great idea. There are so many stories I wish were continued. I'd try myself, but I don't think I could do them justice.
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Secondly, we need a list of stories, as I think the best thing would be to do one story a week. I've quite a few in my favorites, but it's understandable some people don't like some stories (I personally don't like the story about the Ditzy Blonde who can't keep her clothes on), but it'll be a team practice. As I'm honestly pulling this out of my ass, we'll officially begin in March to allow some things to be hammered into detail. If you have any suggestions, please state them here! I might've suggested it, but by no means am I the quasi-leader. tl;dr If you're a writer and you're getting bored with the limited stream on Writing.com material; we're fixing it. If you want to volunteer, post your name and I'll get you. Two things I need. Author names Story names We do one story a week in an alternating fashion. |
Count me in
Count me in :)
Nothing to hide. |
Can put me on the list :)
Back in the thread I posted this list of stories (haven't checked if all are still working but should give a good starting point? HERE |
Count me in on this!
ENF Prone Isabel. |
add Splotch and Nothing to Hide to the list.
Also, here's some stories I like: http://www.writing.com/main/interact...026-Im-not-her http://www.writing.com/main/interact...of-Humiliation http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline |
Boozle2222 is in! Great idea.
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Zelten/Zendle is all for this idea.
-Sara the Exhibitionist -Naked Adventures of Lilly and/or June and Mimi |
just for the list Ive changed my username from 1234567891011
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Afterthefall - 2 MysteriousOne - 3 Hanskumoek - 4 Splotch - 5 Boozle - 6 Zelten - 7 cwkmiller - 9 (if they wants to participate) Anonegg - 10 Seargent - 11 Naivul - 12 ---------------------------------------------------- Nothing to Hide - 1 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...othing-to-Hide Yuki's Horrible Day - 2 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...s-Horrible-Day Pokemon ENF - 3 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...28-Pokemon-ENF The Neverending Stripping Story - 4 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...tripping-Story Horrible Punishment - 5 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ble-Punishment I'm not her! - 6 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...026-Im-not-her Public Exposure - 7 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ublic-Exposure The Track Team - 8 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...The-Track-Team Evil Sister - 9 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...64-Evil-Sister Most Humiliating Day Ever - 10 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ating-day-ever Laundry Day - 11 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...56-Laundry-Day Campclear Water ENF - 12 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...CLEARWATER-ENF Naked Part-Time - 13 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...aked-Part-Time Naked School - 14 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...aked-in-school Mackenzie's Misadventures - 15 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-Misadventures ENF Prone Isabel - 16 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...F-Prone-Isabel She Just Can't Help It - 17 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...t-cant-help-it Sara the Exhibitionist - 18 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-Exhibitionist Naked Adventures of Lilly and/or June and Mimi - 19 (Couldn't Find link) A New Dawn... of Humiliation - 20 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...of-Humiliation Comic Book ENF - 21 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...--AND-MORE-ENF Embarrassing Revenge - 22 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...assing-Revenge Heather's Naked Adventure - 23 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...aked-Adventure Kelsey's ENF Adventure - 24 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-ENF-Adventure Kate's Naked Hotel Adventure - 25 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...otel-Adventure Stripped by Magic! - 26 http://www.writing.com/main/interact...ipped-by-Magic -------------------------------------------------------------------- Authors and story. Authors should only the definites participate. MysteriousOne - 3 Hanskumoek - 4 Zelten - 7 Splotch - 5 Boozle - 6 Afterthefall - 2 Seuern - 1 Authors should all listed participate. MysteriousOne - 3 Zelten - 7 Seargent - 11 cwkmiller - 9 (if they wants to participate) Anonegg - 10 Hanskumoek - 4 Afterthefall - 2 Naivul - 12 Boozle - 6 Seuern - 1 Splotch - 5 *Sorry Mysterious, looks like the generator didn't like you either time. Stories we will be doing. As there are too many, we will try to for two a week. The two will be... Yuki's Horrible Day Embarrassing Revenge Notes: These two will be removed for next weeks drawing unless there's popular support. If I'm away, this is the site I used to randomize: https://www.random.org/ Now this is still barebones and I have no idea what's going on, so an order is for if anyone's simply not interested, but please, everyone go about adding a chapter. I'll get one up today or tomorrow. Feel free to pick which one you like to do this one, or both. |
wait, am I supposed to add to Horrible Punishment because my number corresponds with it or do we all add to Yuki's Horrible Day and Embarrassing Revenge? Are we supposed to add in some particular order?
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Tried doing it for if people got lazy. That's the order if no one feels like posting in those stories.
We're posting in Embarrassing Revenge and Yuki's this week. Sorry for the confusion. Again, not too good at this so there will be erros. |
Since you couldn't find the links:
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...orgetful-Lilly http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-June-and-Mimi |
im confused as to what the plan is now? Am I starting something? What do you mean generator didn't like me?
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I'm so confused.
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The idea is great, but I'm not sure what to do either.
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Actually, I should have said this earlier; I'm not really able to commit to this. If I see the opportunity to help out then I will, but I can't say for sure when I have the time / energy to write so it's best if I sit it out.
This isn't anything to do with the current confusion; I didn't put my name forward when the idea first arose so I assumed I wouldn't be included. |
could we just say everyone post in those two stories this week? Take weeks highlighting certain stories?
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I think I get what to do. I'm familiar with most of these, but not super crazy on some. I'd be cheating actual fans if I bullshited, I think.
Any qualms about just adding where able to story lines I/we like? I have a number that I'm ready to see progress. |
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I would love to partake in this idea of adding to random ENF stories, but unfortunately I've had a bit of writer's block for a while now. I wish I could come up with fun stuff to add to your story "Sara the Exhibitionist" :) |
Welp, looks like my attempt was a failure.
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Only if you give up that easily. We're just initially confused, I'm sure this will be a good thing when we're all on the same page! :D |
I think understand what you want to happen. Correct me if I'm mistaken
-A story is chosen each week. -You roll that online dice and decide which of us goes first -The author chooses a story thread to start and at the end fo each chapter challenges another author to continue it. Am I wrong? |
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