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Anonegg 05-28-2014 01:10 PM

Sorry to disrupt the flow, but... does anyone know what happened to Unfortunate Problems? It's still in my Writing.com favourites list, but when I click on it I get a 'cannot find' message. Has it been deleted?

Phantompen 05-28-2014 02:11 PM

I can't remember if Unfortunate Problems was a SergeantC story or not, but if so he has apparently shut down his account on that site. As such, all of his stories would now be gone, I do believe.

ewong247 05-30-2014 07:58 AM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1787038)
Sorry to disrupt the flow, but... does anyone know what happened to Unfortunate Problems? It's still in my Writing.com favourites list, but when I click on it I get a 'cannot find' message. Has it been deleted?

Unfortunately, Writing.com deleted the author's (Uman) profile. In its wake, he created another interactive story at another site:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ation_of_Katie

You have to join in order to post and edit chapters. The author and I have been adding to it, so it now has 174 chapters. It follows a similar theme to unfortunate problems, but since it's a different site, the way you post and make options are different. You can make as many options you want per chapter, which is nice. There are drawbacks, but if you're interested, you can email me at my writing.com email address.

I believe it's just my username, ewong247 (at) writing.com

boozle2222 06-01-2014 05:56 PM

I have been posting in the "Sara the Exhibitionist" interactive story under the "retail job" track. Got to love how you can put the characters of these stories in public ;)

Sara the Exhibitionist

Retail part of the story

Anonegg 06-01-2014 07:01 PM

I've tried to re-introduce some of the 'scifi' into the latest Naked Gamer Girls (Rez theme song playing on the radio) although I'm not sure where I'm going with it.

An idea occurs that Kerri plays a handheld version of the game on her phone while she's waiting for Zoe (Did Zoe mention something about Rez before we crashed? Man, that was a great game. I wonder if it's in the iStore...) and maybe it affects Zoe in the same way the Trance Vibrator did (eg. causes orgasm or sexual arousal?)

hanskumoekk 06-02-2014 09:06 AM

I have started a slow burner of an ENF story in one of the branches in the "ENF Prone Isabel" interactive story that I made.

It starts when you click "Police woman/Spy" in this link: http://www.writing.com/main/interact/cid/1773265

Like I said, it's sort of a slow burner, but I'm trying some new things that I'm not very used to in this one. Hope you enjoy it! Also feel free to contribute in other places in the Isabel story! :D

Zelten 06-02-2014 05:11 PM

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Originally Posted by boozle2222 (Post 1789551)
I have been posting in the "Sara the Exhibitionist" interactive story under the "retail job" track. Got to love how you can put the characters of these stories in public ;)

Sara the Exhibitionist

Retail part of the story

As creator of said interactive I thank you for your contributions, and greatly enjoyed reading them.
I'd provide you with some Gift Points on the site but I'm trying to save mine up.

boozle2222 06-03-2014 12:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 1790146)
As creator of said interactive I thank you for your contributions, and greatly enjoyed reading them.
I'd provide you with some Gift Points on the site but I'm trying to save mine up.

Hey thanks! I'll be adding more once I can sit down at the computer again. I was considering starting my own the other day, but the baby sitter story was so good that I had to add to get in on the writing!

boozle2222 06-04-2014 12:59 AM

Added 10 more chapters to Sara the Exhibitionist. Feel free to add on, and I may not be able to do so until the weekend. This part is under the "yoga" story map. Enjoy!

Zelten 06-07-2014 12:52 AM

So writing.com just forcefully changed Sara the Exhibitionist's rating from +18 to GC most likely due to the recent chapters.
I ain't mad at boozle but this does mean I'll have to pay closer attention to new additions.

hello712 06-12-2014 10:55 PM

Hey, what ever happened to the story The Life of Oblivious Sheree? I had it favorited, and it still shows up in my favorites list, but whenever I click on it writing.com just says that they don't have anything by that name or under the reference number. I even checked their archives and it's not there either.

Phantompen 06-12-2014 11:45 PM

The author of the story either closed their account or had it banned from the site. Sadly, this has happened with a number of the ENF interactives, including a few I quite liked.

boozle2222 06-21-2014 07:17 PM

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Originally Posted by hello712 (Post 1796951)
Hey, what ever happened to the story The Life of Oblivious Sheree? I had it favorited, and it still shows up in my favorites list, but whenever I click on it writing.com just says that they don't have anything by that name or under the reference number. I even checked their archives and it's not there either.

Ha. Glad to hear you liked it. I wrote that story about a year and a half ago, but someone kept adding chapters (mr. woodson) and it was not only deleted soon after, but they suspended my account. I started writing in the "Sara" story and will pick up again soon, but I am concerned they will just delete it again. Once again, very happy to hear you liked that one! I really enjoyed doing it.

Zelten 06-22-2014 02:24 AM

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Originally Posted by boozle2222 (Post 1802458)
Ha. Glad to hear you liked it. I wrote that story about a year and a half ago, but someone kept adding chapters (mr. woodson) and it was not only deleted soon after, but they suspended my account. I started writing in the "Sara" story and will pick up again soon, but I am concerned they will just delete it again. Once again, very happy to hear you liked that one! I really enjoyed doing it.

Did they ever give a reason for deleting it? You know, just so I don't accidentally make the same mistake.

boozle2222 06-22-2014 04:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 1802617)
Did they ever give a reason for deleting it? You know, just so I don't accidentally make the same mistake.

Never did. It was 18+ and had no sex/****/crudeness and I just didn't fight it. I honestly don't know what to recommend to stop it. It was no different than the content in the "Forgetful Lily" series.

Derelict 06-23-2014 05:18 PM

Different moderators probably have different opinions about whatever content they come across over there.

Also, if your account has an obviously fake name or only initials, they will delete it. I was warned about that right after setting up my account, so I couldn't just use my initials.

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Originally Posted by boozle2222 (Post 1803061)
Never did. It was 18+ and had no sex/****/crudeness and I just didn't fight it. I honestly don't know what to recommend to stop it. It was no different than the content in the "Forgetful Lily" series.


Anonegg 06-30-2014 01:42 PM

Hey guys,

Just wanted to apologise for ignoring the Naked Gamer Girls story. In my free time I'm editing my nearly-finished fantasy novel (it's not ENF I'm afraid) and I've been finding that when I contribute to writing.com all of my creative energy goes towards it. I find that instead of thinking about my own plot I'm thinking up ways to advance the stories here and that's not what I want.

I hope to have it Kindle-fied by the end of August and once I start work on the sequel I'll be able to spend some more time on ENF stories, but for now I need to try and focus.


On the subject of Kindle, has anyone ever tried one of the ENF stories on Amazon? I bought "The Only One Naked" as the preview seemed promising but in the end it was a bit of a bland exhibitionist story that didn't really go anywhere. Considering it is a premium story it was nowhere near the quality we produce on writing.com. Since getting burned on that I've been reading only the free samples, but by and large they seem pretty uninspiring.

Seuern 06-30-2014 02:15 PM

Added Chapters to both the Most Humiliating Day Ever and Horrible Punishment. That latters been dead for almost six months before I added anything to it, and there's still plenty of options, so anyone think they want to take a crack at it? (Can't link them, still too new)

Also, not sure if anyone's been keeping up with the ASN, but I've got quite a few chapters in "Just One of the Guys Complete" finished but I'm not sure if I'm in any mood to share it over there. I thoroughly enjoy what I'm writing, but I'm not too fond of all the 'advice' I'm getting or even the praise. I've been thinking of turning it into a writing.com story and adding branches to most of the decisions I've made so far until I get to my current point, but I'd hate my protagonist turned into some sl*t as someone always jumps straight into sexual favors in these stories with no real basis. Any opinions?

hanskumoekk 06-30-2014 08:53 PM

Hey everyone,

I've been adding new chapters to the Isabel ENF story quite often lately. Just wanted to let you all know.

You can find it here: http://www.writing.com/main/interact...F-Prone-Isabel

I really hope to see more contributors, which is why I'm posting it here too. I really, really like the style of many writers on here, and it would be awesome to see where you could take some of the branches. As of this moment, there has been 272 chapters written and I will continue to add more relatively often. I hope to see many of you joining this too! :)

Anonegg 07-05-2014 06:01 PM

Great - not only is that Woodson guy ruining our stories, now this amsis guy is spamming chapters in broken English. Ungh *rubs eyes in frustration*

boozle2222 07-05-2014 08:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1811094)
Great - not only is that Woodson guy ruining our stories, now this amsis guy is spamming chapters in broken English. Ungh *rubs eyes in frustration*

Which one?

hanskumoekk 07-06-2014 02:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1811094)
Great - not only is that Woodson guy ruining our stories, now this amsis guy is spamming chapters in broken English. Ungh *rubs eyes in frustration*

Yes, he's been writing a lot of bad chapters in the Isabel story. I've tried to contact him and asked him to please tighten up his language (and stop using "HIS" and "HIM" about females!), but all he's replying is "I must finish them!" It seems he just wants to finish branches off as quickly as possible.

I've decided to delete all of them because they were unreadable. Things should be back to normal, and if he continues to write bad chapters, I'll continue to delete.

Naivul 07-06-2014 03:28 AM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1808131)
On the subject of Kindle, has anyone ever tried one of the ENF stories on Amazon? I bought "The Only One Naked" as the preview seemed promising but in the end it was a bit of a bland exhibitionist story that didn't really go anywhere. Considering it is a premium story it was nowhere near the quality we produce on writing.com. Since getting burned on that I've been reading only the free samples, but by and large they seem pretty uninspiring.

Yes I have bought about 20 ENF books/stories from both Amazon and Smashwords. None of them have been to the level I expect from a premium story. They are usually too short, or they quickly drop the ENF theme for typical romance novel sex.

I think the writers publishing there are limiting themselves to the patterns of romance novels. Maybe they are afraid to appear too out of norms for print media.

It's not just the ENF genre either. I tried a couple of BDSM stories that seemed to have an ENF theme and those were as lackluster. They definitely don't want to appear too far from what would be acceptable in print media. Hint: there aren't really any ENF stories in print media.

Anonegg 07-06-2014 09:25 AM

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Originally Posted by hanskumoekk (Post 1811255)
Yes, he's been writing a lot of bad chapters in the Isabel story. I've tried to contact him and asked him to please tighten up his language (and stop using "HIS" and "HIM" about females!), but all he's replying is "I must finish them!" It seems he just wants to finish branches off as quickly as possible.

I've decided to delete all of them because they were unreadable. Things should be back to normal, and if he continues to write bad chapters, I'll continue to delete.

Nice one; good to see he's being nipped in the bud.

Phantompen 07-15-2014 05:40 PM

I'm considering adding a new story to writing.com starring Mackenzie. Basically, this would allow for new settings for an ENF story with her rather than just her neighborhood and the surrounding areas. Before I do this, however, I'd be quite interested in hearing some ideas for the options for starting locations for the story.

Seuern 07-16-2014 12:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1817101)
I'm considering adding a new story to writing.com starring Mackenzie. Basically, this would allow for new settings for an ENF story with her rather than just her neighborhood and the surrounding areas. Before I do this, however, I'd be quite interested in hearing some ideas for the options for starting locations for the story.

Ah, yes. That's one of the stories I don't have in my favorites due to how limited it is. She's naked in her neighborhood, and that forces everyone through a bottle-neck and it somewhat limits the further chapters.

Areas I usually enjoy are work, school, public venues, or public transit. With her naked just outside her house, it'd be somewhat of a stretch to get her to any of these places without disregarding reality more than we already do.

Something I'd be excited to see is an employee who is forced to work naked and a situation where she finds herself on either a city bus or a Greyhound bus.

Phantompen 07-16-2014 01:15 AM

Alright, I'm getting started on adding the story, but an unfortunate side effect is that I can only have 5 interactive stories with basic membership. I've deleted my largely dead or unsuccessful stories, but am now narrowed down to 5, and all are difficult choices to make.

The original Mackenzie's Big Mistake as well as Yuki's Horrible Day are definitely going to stay, as they're both original works (and Yuki's story is my very first interactive). So that leaves me with a choice between the Final Fantasy, Persona 3, and Sailor Moon stories. It's a difficult choice to make, as all have a fairly strong number of contributions and still see fairly regular updates.

boozle2222 07-16-2014 03:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1817256)
Alright, I'm getting started on adding the story, but an unfortunate side effect is that I can only have 5 interactive stories with basic membership. I've deleted my largely dead or unsuccessful stories, but am now narrowed down to 5, and all are difficult choices to make.

The original Mackenzie's Big Mistake as well as Yuki's Horrible Day are definitely going to stay, as they're both original works (and Yuki's story is my very first interactive). So that leaves me with a choice between the Final Fantasy, Persona 3, and Sailor Moon stories. It's a difficult choice to make, as all have a fairly strong number of contributions and still see fairly regular updates.

Always loved the Yuki story

Phantompen 07-16-2014 06:40 PM

Alright, the story is now live. Here's a link for any interested in reading/contributing. (Not too much of a read at the moment, of course.)

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-Misadventures

literallynot 07-18-2014 10:51 AM

Welp, hiya, I'm a big user of this site, as well as writing.com but I decided today it might to use an account so I thought I'd introduce myself.

I plan on adding a lot to both Mackenzie's Misadventures as I have a branch here:
writing(dot)com/main/interact/item_id/2000666-Mackenzies-Misadventures/map/131111121

I also hope to add to Ditzy Miss Lizzie as I recently discovered it and fell in love with the idea, after seeing it hadn't been added to recently, and then it was by the dreaded mrwoodson I think I might start a story in it as I am a massive ENF lover:
writing(dot)com/main/interact/item_id/1933148-Ditzy-Miss-Lizzie/map/1251211

So yeah, nice to finally be in this site and hopefully I can find a spot in the ENF writing.com community to fit me well :)

(Sorry about the weird links, the site won't let me post proper urls so early on)

Anonegg 07-18-2014 02:39 PM

Hi guys,

Randomly came across a dead ENF story on writing.com:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...-Wishing/map/1

It looks like somebody is making updates to it (they're not very good), but the magnetism and naked wish threads seem pretty interesting.

Anonegg 07-18-2014 02:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1817256)
Alright, I'm getting started on adding the story, but an unfortunate side effect is that I can only have 5 interactive stories with basic membership. I've deleted my largely dead or unsuccessful stories, but am now narrowed down to 5, and all are difficult choices to make.

The original Mackenzie's Big Mistake as well as Yuki's Horrible Day are definitely going to stay, as they're both original works (and Yuki's story is my very first interactive). So that leaves me with a choice between the Final Fantasy, Persona 3, and Sailor Moon stories. It's a difficult choice to make, as all have a fairly strong number of contributions and still see fairly regular updates.

I'm probably a bit late now, but couldn't you have created an second writing.com account, set up the first chapter of McKenzie and then switched back to your regular account to carry it on?

Zelten 07-18-2014 03:25 PM

In non-ENF writing.com news it seems like they finally got rid of that ant-adblocker function that makes you wait five seconds before viewing a story. No more constant clicks and frustrating waits!

Anonegg 07-18-2014 06:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 1818620)
In non-ENF writing.com news it seems like they finally got rid of that ant-adblocker function that makes you wait five seconds before viewing a story. No more constant clicks and frustrating waits!

Hurrah!

I have been encountering a few more fake Adobe updates, though.

Phantompen 07-19-2014 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1818599)
I'm probably a bit late now, but couldn't you have created an second writing.com account, set up the first chapter of McKenzie and then switched back to your regular account to carry it on?

Indeed, it is too late to do so, but I'm not entirely sure how much simpler that would have been. Aside from creating a new account for the sake of a single story, I'd also need to pay for its basic membership. Then there'd be the issue of creating a new email account for the new account, and while not difficult it is tedious.

Besides all that, I do rather like being able to read a new contribution directly off the notification. Also, I'd need to hop between accounts to check on things and make edits or deletions to the story if necessary.

SPLOTCH11 07-19-2014 06:54 PM

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline

Added a lot of new paths on the Comic Book ENF story. For fans of the live action movies there's a Maria Hill (Cobie Smulders) and Peggy Carter (Hayley Atwell) path.

jimmythehand 07-19-2014 11:21 PM

A Sister's Blackmail by Iggy
 
Not sure why I've never added this one to the thread before as it's one of my all time favourites; a great enf blackmail story. I originally came across it on the old askjolene site and luckily it was stored elsewhere too. I won't spoil the story for you but here's the synopsis the author provides:

Synopsis: Sarah's younger sister takes some pictures of her in a compromising position and compels her to do some embarrassing things.

It can be found here in two parts: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/s...p?storyid=5671

Enjoy!

torretxt 07-22-2014 08:46 PM

You really need to
 
Thanks for the story link. Now that you have everyone's interest you really need to continue this story and bring it to a logical conclusion. Here's my vote for you to do just that. I'd love to read more

Torre

jimmythehand 07-23-2014 08:02 PM

^^ Well much as I'd also love to see a continuation (and am glad you enjoyed it too) it's not actually my story. I did attempt to contact Iggy (the author) through askjolene when that site was still in existence, to ask about this story and any others he may have in a similar vein, but I received no response and didn't want to press the issue if he/she doesn't want to be disturbed. This story was posted back in 2007 and the only other story on his BDSM Library account is 'The Color of Danger' from 2012, so it doesn't look like they'll be any more to it.

With that said, I think the story as it is, while it certainly COULD be expanded on, works well and is brought to a reasonably satisfying conclusion; it's certainly not left open ended, as happens to so many great long running stories when the author loses interest or otherwise can't continue so we can be grateful for that at least.

Of course if anyone has any connection with Iggy - or indeed is Iggy - then I'd love to hear his/her thoughts on a continuation and/or to know if there's anything similar in the pipeline.

Z678Vash 07-26-2014 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 1818620)
In non-ENF writing.com news it seems like they finally got rid of that ant-adblocker function that makes you wait five seconds before viewing a story. No more constant clicks and frustrating waits!

Unfortunately, it seems they just now reactivated it. Or at least it's doing it on my browser. It's really weird because I was just using it about an hour ago and it was fine. :mad: :confused:


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