lol, nice story, looks like the next part is going to be the best

I hope that dream of her in the auditorium actually happens in one of the future chapters

your killing me... are you ever going to continue the story???

Hey
 

Hey shut up rambler if he has given up he take it down maybe he had something go down and can't post it u saw earlier with the computer plus u would know this if u actually wrote a series instead of wasting yours and everyone's time saying do this do that and says he's killing u with the wait if u feel that way read other stuff for u to get your reading food or whatever u called it but some people including myself takes a break because they lost all feelings for writing or doesn't know what to do for the next part to try and impress ungrateful people like u so we are done I hoped u learned your lesson and get some common sense and hey penance great story just one question in chapter one Katie's bra was tan what was the color of her underwear if u don't mind me asking

Please don't give up on the story...

i'm working on it. i have a job and college and serious creative struggles right now as Katie's already been through so much it's hard to come up with more stuff without being generic. Also shadowwalker is plagerizing me on writing.com with his entrie's on the horrible punishment interactive story, so if you're a member here I'm just letting you know I'm very insulted.

Your story about Katie is great and I hope you continue, but to say Horrible Punishment is plagiarism is stretching it a lot. You might as well say you are plagiarising Surprise Assembly, Katherine's Punishment, Those Pictures or basically half the stories on The Writings of Leviticus.
That said, most of the interactive stories on writing.com are crap. Yours is quite well written, so there is no point even comparing.

Shadow walker directly quoted me and apologized. There are no hard feelings and i wasn't saying horrible punishment was plagiarism rather that his chapters were because they had word for word verses of my story.

dear penance1028,
it would be a great Christmas gift if you posted a new chapter.
if you cant , i hope you still have a great holiday.

great story
 

do you plan to write any more to this great story ,, its been 5 months now,, i hope you are feeling better...