Splotch the story is coming out really good and is a lot of fun to read! I loved Nothing To Hide, but I think this one might end up being evven better!! Congrats on the great writing and I can't wait to see how the story turns out! :)

Does anyone here have any contact details for John Knuckles? I really want to let him know just how much I enjoy his writing.

I think you can contact him on Chyoa.com if you go to his profile.

Thanks! Honestly Nothing to Hide had about run it's course for me. Most of my threads had run themselves into corners. I'm really enjoying coming back to this type of story fresh.

https://chyoa.com/story/Comic-Book-ENF.7919/map

Wanted to post a link to the new Comic Book ENF story Ewong has made. A lot of open chapters, some are starting to get going really well.

It looks it will be fun. I was in the process of adding a chapter only to discover I couldn't: Due to heavy traffic adding to interactive stories is temporary unavailable for guests and free members.

Not sure how long that's been going on because I haven't added anything for a while. Heck maybe it's always been that way all along and I just never saw it, but that's yet another reason why it's such a pain to use Writing.com :mad:

It's only since they began clamping down on us mooching Freemiums (who nonetheless provide the content for their site). It's not even true. I've been reading a chapter in the past and wanted to open both of the following chapters, so I right-clicked each and opened in a new tab. They both opened at the same time, yet one of them was blocked due to heavy traffic. I hit refresh and it loaded no problem.

They just want your money. Don't give it to them.

Oh don't worry. I have absolutely no intention of giving them anything.

Batting an idea around in my head. Something to with snow and a girl caught out in it for a long period of time where she partakes in the traditional cold weather activities more or less against her will. Might be a personal, might do a CYOA, but I can't quite come up with the scenario with which she would be outside, and if she were to get out, why she would stray away from her place.

I'm never good with short stories and usually in the stories I've written to or contributed to, there's quite a bit of backlore as to the reasoning and everything.

Is she alone, with friends, a boyfriend/girlfriend? They could each have a different motivation to get your protagonist into the snow naked, and keep her there.

If she is alone, it could be an accident. A mislabled door or ambiguous signage while she is trying to find her way from the lockers to the sauna. She could be challenging herself to be more dating, and feels like no one would be out in the snow, so no one would see her if she streaked, but things her or of hand. She could be a closet exhibitionist and wants to test it out. She could be an athlete trying to test her endurance in extreme temperatures.

Overall, it's an interesting premise, but the longer you have her out in the snow, the less I'm going to believe she will be ok. Hypothermia is not sexy. Well, most of the time. If it makes her go to the hospital naked, then there can be some sexy fun.