| ewong247 |
06-03-2015 03:05 AM |
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Originally Posted by Anonegg
(Post 2010484)
I'm a little confused by the Two Sisters story. It might just be that Woody guy cocking things up, but it seems like Amber is into exhibitionism and Emily, knowing this, buys her crotchless panties. But when Amber finds out about them, she seems to get really angry about it?
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I just reread the chapters I originally posted, and you're right to be confused. Amber does get aroused by being exposed in public, but she is embarrassed by this fact and doesn't want anyone to know. It's something she fantasizes about, but never acts on. Her sister Emily somehow knows about her kink and decides to give her a push by giving her the crotchless panties. Amber, thinking her kink was a secret, and is ashamed of it, is surprised by her sister's gift, but is turned on by the fact she is only mostly covered under her dress.
It's a complicated idea, but the main idea is that Amber is simultaneously embarrassed and aroused by public nudity. Emily is exploiting it, and once Amber takes revenge by stripping her sister, they end up in a strip war that leaves them constantly underdressed in public, but never get in trouble by the authorities (parents, school principal, police, etc). However, they may be exposed to many of their peers.
This originally began as a story that I wrote, and felt like I wrote myself into a corner. The way I originally wrote it, they would end up partially clothed during school, a bully catches them and makes them do her bidding, which would embarrass both girls, but Amber gets turned on, and Emily is constantly punished for this fact. I couldn't get it to work, obviously, so I hoped turning it into an interactive story would give other writers inspiration to take the original premise and run with it. I think I just didn't make the framework of the story rigid enough so folks knew which way to take the story.
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