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Anonegg 04-01-2013 04:02 PM

At the moment I've been adding a few chapters here or there (mostly Jenny's Nude Life and Adventures of a Chubby Naked Woman) but Writing.com has gone really quiet lately.

Just a small vent as well, but it annoys me when I see a new chapter posted, open it up, only for it to be a "Here are some more options, not actual writing" chapter. It's like wow, you're letting me choose what I write for you? That's just fantastic; thanks for your input -_-

Phantompen 04-04-2013 12:56 PM

Figured I'd go ahead and put this update here, rather than dredge up the original thread that's long since buried. Yuki's Horrible Day has had a slight alteration to the first chapter- a fifth option has been added to start Yuki's adventure at her workplace. Looking forward to see how this new variable might play out.

Deleted225 04-04-2013 04:23 PM

Yeah, I've actually been busy working on posting chapters to Horrible Punishment and Public Exposure myself. I too hate that momentary thrill of seeing someone else add something, especially to a chapter of your own, only to be a sentence asking for an option choice that doesn't wholly effect the situation or was just unneeded.

Zelten 04-05-2013 06:26 PM

Writing.com has been really slow for updates, I think me and Voltros are the only ones who update the "Naked adventures" stories.

Phantompen 04-05-2013 07:23 PM

The site hits little activity slumps from time to time. The creative spark can be rather fickle, and some authors prefer to stay in a comfort zone of a few stories. Give it time and a resurgence of activity should show up.

Naivul 04-07-2013 02:30 AM

I don't think the real problem is really so much that people are lacking creative juices for chapters. I think the real problem is that stories are too broad to begin with. Often I see stories that seem really interesting. But I'll open it and I'll be presented with the choice of 3 - 4 different main characters. And then each of those characters will have the choice of 4 different locations each in the second chapter. Don't those writers realize they just started 20 completely different, concurrent stories? And then if the third choice is about something cosmetic like clothes or hair color we'll be at about 80 different stories before we even get started...

To be successful an interactive story need focus and meaningful choices, especially at the beginning when each choice is so exponential. Create the character and the setting. Focus the story on one theme and get it started. If you really want to talk about another character or theme then start another story. Stories that are too aimless never get close to meaningful.

I wrote this on my phone so sorry for any typos. It's been a pain.

Zelten 04-07-2013 11:28 AM

Another problem (one that I'm partially to blame for) is that the ENF stories becoming incredibly repetitive and boring. A girl going to the beach and 'accidentally' losing her bikini was funny and sexy the first time but but got irritating the fifty times I read it after that. The lighter ENF stuff needs some more 'spice' to it (which is why I'm doing that mass-clothes thief mystery in the Lilly story).

Blunderman 04-08-2013 06:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 1475258)
Another problem (one that I'm partially to blame for) is that the ENF stories becoming incredibly repetitive and boring. A girl going to the beach and 'accidentally' losing her bikini was funny and sexy the first time but but got irritating the fifty times I read it after that. The lighter ENF stuff needs some more 'spice' to it (which is why I'm doing that mass-clothes thief mystery in the Lilly story).

If you could point me to those bikini stories I would be more than happy.

mdot 04-09-2013 05:21 PM

Worst Summer Camp Ever!
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...mmer-Camp-Ever

Derelict 04-11-2013 12:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Naivul (Post 1474954)
I don't think the real problem is really so much that people are lacking creative juices for chapters. I think the real problem is that stories are too broad to begin with. Often I see stories that seem really interesting. But I'll open it and I'll be presented with the choice of 3 - 4 different main characters. And then each of those characters will have the choice of 4 different locations each in the second chapter. Don't those writers realize they just started 20 completely different, concurrent stories? And then if the third choice is about something cosmetic like clothes or hair color we'll be at about 80 different stories before we even get started...

To be successful an interactive story need focus and meaningful choices, especially at the beginning when each choice is so exponential. Create the character and the setting. Focus the story on one theme and get it started. If you really want to talk about another character or theme then start another story. Stories that are too aimless never get close to meaningful.

I wrote this on my phone so sorry for any typos. It's been a pain.

I am totally guilty of this. However, if the community loves the story, they will expand dozens of branches into hundreds of chapters. If the story sparks no interest, well, you get a giant parking lot.

Good advice, though!

Phantompen 04-11-2013 07:25 PM

Well, in response to one of the points made above, I've disabled one of my previous Interactive Stories, re-releasing two of the choices as stand-alone Interactives of their own.

The first is Crystal's Total Breakdown.
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...otal-Breakdown

The other is Mackenzie's Big Mistake.
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...es-Big-Mistake

I might re-release the other choices as their own stories if interest is expressed.

Naivul 04-11-2013 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1478576)
Well, in response to one of the points made above, I've disabled one of my previous Interactive Stories, re-releasing two of the choices as stand-alone Interactives of their own.

The first is Crystal's Total Breakdown.

The other is Mackenzie's Big Mistake.

I might re-release the other choices as their own stories if interest is expressed.

They sound really interesting! I'll give them a look when I get some time off work. :)

killcode 04-16-2013 12:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1472856)
Figured I'd go ahead and put this update here, rather than dredge up the original thread that's long since buried. Yuki's Horrible Day has had a slight alteration to the first chapter- a fifth option has been added to start Yuki's adventure at her workplace. Looking forward to see how this new variable might play out.

I was just reading that, and i thought it would be awesome if someone could edit that for the vacation

Phantompen 04-16-2013 02:02 PM

I'd be more than happy to edit one of those core chapters to change the untouched options. If you'd like and have any ideas, go ahead and message me with your suggestions and I'll go about editing the chapter when I can.

Anonegg 04-17-2013 02:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phantompen (Post 1478576)
Well, in response to one of the points made above, I've disabled one of my previous Interactive Stories, re-releasing two of the choices as stand-alone Interactives of their own.

The first is Crystal's Total Breakdown.

The other is Mackenzie's Big Mistake.

I might re-release the other choices as their own stories if interest is expressed.

I think it was a smart move to make. I remember - vaguely - reading Crystal's story, but because it was part of a larger interactive it was difficult to keep track of (updates etc). On their own I think they're really strong stories - I'm taking a much greater interest in Crystal now, and MacKenzie sounds like a total babe.

Phantompen 04-19-2013 06:09 PM

Well, thanks for the kind words. I'm happy to say that this did seem to be a wise idea, and I hope these stories continue to grow and flourish.

On a side note, while some of Mackenzie's physical description is thanks to Apollo, who wrote the original opening chapter for her back when it was a part of a larger interactive, the person I know that she may-or-may-not be based on is most certainly a pleasing sight.

Phantompen 04-19-2013 06:41 PM

Okay, either I can't edit my posts, or I'm blind and didn't see the option. Just want to add that, as is the norm, I'm open to suggestions for ideas or paths for the girls of my stories to follow. While I can't necessarily promise I'll be able to pull them off, they will most certainly be put into consideration.

Don't be shy, if you've got a suggestion, shoot me a message. If you don't see any of your suggestions added, it's nothing against you, it's more likely that I simply couldn't figure out a way to write it out that I'm comfortable with. (I'm notoriously hard on my own writing.)

Zelten 04-26-2013 06:27 PM

Since we're asking for contributors, it would be nice if somebody other than myself (Zendle on Writing.com) and Voltros would contribute to the Naked Adventures of Forgetful Lilly(and its spin off) stories. I sometimes feel like I'm hogging some of the plot lines and I don't like doing that.
Plus I'm not that great at actually stripping the girls, I'm better attuned to set-ups.

Z678Vash 05-05-2013 05:12 PM

Thank You Zendle and everyone else
 
Thank you very much for advertizing my stories, Zendle. You are an excellent writing and I greatly appreciate your contributions. And of course another big thank you to Anonegg and anyone else who have added to my stories, except for mrwoodman. I really don't like that guy/girl. All he/she does is put down one sentence and doesn't leave any options to continue. The first time he/she did that in my story I automatically deleted it. I don't know why other authors put up with him/her. Trust me when I say that I hate deleting chapters. I have only done it twice and I don't want to do it anymore. Anyway I'm trying to keep my stories fresh, but I do apologize if some of the stuff comes off as repetitive.

mdot 05-06-2013 12:50 PM

Unfortunate Problems - College Days.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...--College-Days

She just can't help it.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...t-cant-help-it

worlddominator 05-12-2013 08:24 AM

I came up with another interactive story on writing. Its about girls in a realistic virtual reality mmo getting in embarrassing situations.
Its called Virtual Embarrassment.
Also check out and add to my other stories, The Track Team and Invisible ENF

mdot 05-14-2013 10:30 AM

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Originally Posted by worlddominator (Post 1501625)
I came up with another interactive story on writing. Its about girls in a realistic virtual reality mmo getting in embarrassing situations.
Its called Virtual Embarrassment.
Also check out and add to my other stories, The Track Team and Invisible ENF

Virtual Embarrassment
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...l-Embarassment

The Track Team
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...The-Track-Team

Anonegg 05-17-2013 12:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Murperfleem (Post 1503508)
Maybe it's an epidemic that spreads between girls where they can't wear clothes? The Nude Flu?

There's actually a manga like that. Unfortunately I'm unable to post links until I've reached 10 posts - I must be close now, surely - but if you go to the g.e hentai website and type in "Suehirogari TAG English" it should bring it up.

It's about a group of hypnotists who force girls to stay naked until they kiss a specific female target. The 'curse' is then passed to the girl who she kissed. Good stuff, although in the later chapters the hypnotists start forcing the girls to do sexual things, so if that's not your cup of tea then be warned. If you're just after ENF, then stop reading once the main character kisses her target.

----

As for me, I'm feeling a little burned out at the moment. I've put a lot of work into the Unfortunate Problems / Swimming Pool Exhibitionist section, and I think I need a little break from writing.com.

I'm sure it won't last long :)

hanskumoekk 05-18-2013 01:53 PM

Another story, posted in another thread:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...gina-Hendricks

It's based on a true story, and the main goal is to teach Ms. Hendricks a lesson through ENF. Let yourself loose on her ass! :D

Anonegg 05-27-2013 12:03 PM

I've just added a chapter to Naked Gamer Girls. I know the creator of the story didn't want us to add scenes for any of the other characters, but considering the story has been abandoned for some time now I think it's okay for me to claim Zoe as my own.

I think focusing too much on one story (Unfortunate Problems) was a bit too intense for me. I'll probably just drift around stories now, adding a chapter here or there.

Anonegg 06-01-2013 05:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Murperfleem (Post 1517798)
It's okay. I'm the author and I actually really appreciate your addition. The only concern I have is that it will drift too far from ENF and into sexual themes. That's what happened to another one of my stories. I really appreciate your way of working that style in, but letting it be what it is. A part of things, not the whole deal.

Not a problem mate. I was trying to think of why a girl would want to game naked, and so I went with the trance vibrator (which proves that fact is stranger than fiction; the trance vibrator is actually a real thing). Everything after that is going to be ENF.

I was also considering using one of the other character choices; maybe something involving a Kinect which can't register a girl's movement if she's wearing clothes, although I'm not sure where the story would go from there. I wouldn't want a roommate bursting in, because that option already exists for Zoe and would essentially be no different. Perhaps her mother instead? That would be different because the mother would have the ability to punish her daughter. Or perhaps a hacker takes a picture of her via the Kinect and blackmails her? Hmm... any ideas anyone?

Also, I'm working on two stories of my own at the minute. I've got them set as private while I'm working on them. One of them is an interactive story about a girl who leaves her house naked without realising it, and another is a static piece which is a comedy ENF.

Zechs195 06-01-2013 06:27 PM

i added chapters to horrible punishments under the pen name potatoman hope you guys enjoy.

Zelten 06-02-2013 01:35 AM

Currently I'm trying to think of a good way to continue the 'naked bandits' story line in Forgetful Lilly. Part of me wants to go super crazy and involve some weird conspiracy against clothes but another part of me wants to keep it grounded in reality (well, reality as defined by the wacky universe of this story).
So much stripping, so little space :P

Anonegg 06-09-2013 04:55 PM

Welp, my first ENF Interactive is open to the public, but unfortunately I cannot post links. It is called "She doesn't know! (ENF)".

It's about an 18 year old girl who leaves her house without getting dressed because she's too tired to notice. Each chapter is going to end with "She knows" or "She doesn't know", although I'm not sure how restrictive that is going to be.

Anonegg 06-09-2013 04:55 PM

Aha! 10 posts! I think I can link now:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...action/outline

Naivul 06-15-2013 12:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Murperfleem (Post 1527670)
How about a story about a contest held on an island, which is engineered to strip girls and keep them naked. By the end, they are unable to clothe themselves and don't want to go out into public, but a contract says that they can now live their lives naked!

Sounds interesting! You should write it. :)

cerindclvr 06-15-2013 02:43 PM

Great start to an interactive story, anonegg! Sexy, funny, and well written sir.

DarrinStanley 06-20-2013 01:07 AM

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Originally Posted by cerindclvr (Post 1017993)
The story is up and has some flesh to it! please join me and knock yourselves out..!

Though I've left room for other girls, the four 'default' girls you can choose to experience the story from the perspective of are as follows:

Janna is an elven ranger girl hailing from the Western Woods. Upon arriving in Enferia she found herself subject to made up fines and taxes, which she suspected had something to do with the fact that she was an attractive young girl of some talent. When she was unable to pay, she was given the convenient option to work several years of hard labor in the notoriously harsh prison system, or, as it was put to her: "compete in a series of arena games involving your archery and the magical skills you possess." Later she would find out what exactly that meant -- stripping another duelist completely naked. She's not entirely comfortable with the idea; though she's suspected she might fancy girls for some time, she's sexually inexperienced and generally withdrawn. Given that she's also fairly modest, like many elves, and doesn't take too well to the idea of showing her body to thousands of strangers, so she reluctantly decided to try the arena.
Janna is petite and lithe, with large, bright blue eyes and short, almost feathery blond hair. With a wide, charming smile and an innocent demeanor, she's bound to be a hit with the arena fans. The teenage elf typically wears light fitting, mottled blue and green clothing that she used to favor in the mild woods of her homeland. Pale thighs show from beneath the bottom of her tunic, and her dark blue-green boots protect her slender calves and delicate feet from the hot arena sand. She's known to fight with bow and arrow, her hunting knife, and a small selection of magical talents that typically have to do with manipulating nature or enchanting her arrows. Janna shoots arrows of blazing fire, or sometimes arrows that split into ten different arrows mid-flight, and occasionally arrows that will curve and fly in circles around foes until they find their garments completely shredded.

Selena the Wicked probably deserves to be in the arena. She was accused of stealing vast amounts of jewelry from the nobility, and she in fact did. Before that she was mugging people in the streets and abusing her magic powers to humiliate people that crossed her. A noblewoman once nearly trampled her on horseback, oblivious to the 'peasantry' that was Selena in her path. Not long after that the noblewoman was found riding at a breakneck pace through the streets on a suddenly wild horse, totally nude and magically bound to her runaway steed with glowing enchanted shackles, screaming "heeelp meee!" in a most ridiculous fashion as her plump ass bounced up and down in the saddle.
Selena the Wicked favors black clothes to contrast with her fair skin, and. though she's hard and has seen her share of both real and arena combat, is quite exotically beautiful to behold. Her silky black hair is seen in a variety of styles that changes from match to match -- one day its spiky and boyish, the next day she has flowing braids down to her curvaceous ass. Selena's tattoos are similar in that they shift and change, even though they're usually black and resemble tribal tattoos; she has some intricate markings that highlight her cheekbones and exotic, almond shaped eyes. From the stands, those kohl lined eyes seem black as night, though in truth they're a deep, rich brown. Their almond shape makes it hard to determine Selena's origins -- she was in fact an orphan. Often she's forced to wear sl*tty and revealing black clothing that would get a woman stoned to death in some small medieval towns -- not that she's particularly easily embarrassed by a bit of tit popping out, but being laughed at and being a stark naked loser are things she REALLY doesn't like, and bitterly recalls a few rather humiliating losses in her past.
Selena is a practiced sorceress in a variety of ways, but her specialties are stealth, illusion, and trickery. She prefers to lead her opponents into magical traps rather than attack them outright, though she has been known to simply knock her foe down with a shove from time to time and yank their bottoms off of their kicking feet.

Rose is a common girl, a tavern wench. Characteristically clumsy, Rose had the misfortune of serving one of the Queen's agents when they were slumming it at the small bar in which she worked. She was nervous, as she often gets, when she gathered that some very important people were trying to have a discreet meeting, and she was serving them! Naturally, the poor girl spilled an entire tray of ale upon the table and down the shirt of a hooded, raven haired woman. Despite her profuse apologies and begging, thought she was going to be fired or humiliated right there. The truth was far worse. Until she has suffered "one hundred times the insult" she committed to the table of spies, she must fight in the arena. While Rose's fights tend to be one-sided, she's a fan favorite and has gotten astoundingly lucky a time or two in her handful of fights.
Rose is an adorably bumbling red head with long hair often found in a ponytail or two. Curvaceous to an almost 'healthy' degree, Rose has a very voluptuous, supple figure for a girl of five feet, and is often dressed in horrible revealing parodies of peasant girl or tavern wench dress. Flimsy, sheer skirts with no panties... overly tight peasant blouses with pre-weakened stitching... and one time all she was given nothing but a set of serving trays and some belts with which to try and secure them to her body. The arena managers do not take it easy on Rose and make a point of placing her up against far better opponents. As a modest common girl, every competition horrifies her still, and she is mortified of being naked. This is unfortunate because it's practically inevitable every match -- Rose knows no magical spells or abilities and is only given a bread knife with which to fight. The one time she got lucky, she tripped as she was charging her foe and cleaved the woman's robe off from collar to crotch in one clumsy swipe. Needless to say, the crowd was elated, despite the fact that they usually come to see her lose her clothing.

Christie the "Grey" is a witch of profound magical power and another arena favorite. A mysterious, supposedly ancient witch and a true veteran of the pit, she's only been disrobed on a few noteworthy occasions when her curse kicks in. Her fights tend to be one sided in her favor, unless her weakness takes hold. Christie is cursed to always find herself wearing the same dress, after a long enough time. The dress resembles a gauzy, tattered and dirty wedding gown that only comes down to the middle of her toned, thick thighs. She's tried to repair the garment since she seems to be stuck with it, so that it doesn't look like someone took time to deliberately shred it and reveal slightly tan, taut skin beneath, or maybe so that part of her hard, dark pink nipple wasn't sticking out. Unfortunately for her and fortunately for everyone else, she always seems to end back up in that flimsy dress. The exact reasons are unknown to the crowd, adding to her mystery, but the fact that it seems to be a wedding dress, shredded up by the silvery metal claws she sometimes brings into the arena, leads to any number of speculations. Anything from "I hear she was to be wed to a beautiful princess in secret, they'd fallen in love y'see, but when Christie didn't show up to the wedding, the fates cursed her to forever remember the wedding day and the shame the scorned princess had felt," to "nah, it's just a style thing -- Christie's powerful enough not to be duped by no curse! She's bloody ancient!" to "the dress is the source of her power -- if she gets rid of it forever, she'll turn into just a normal woman!"
She truly is one of the more striking arena veterans and currently has the best record of wins. Commonly appearing in a flurrying cyclone of sand, Christie's mane of dark blond curls come into view first, followed by smooth bare shoulders lightly kissed by the sun. Her features are near angelic from high cheekbones to full, dark lips. But not her eyes, which seem to have dark gold-grey irises that dance with mischief and lust. Her body, as showcased by the revealing dress, is perfect. Her figure is hourglass with a hint of athleticism in her thighs and tummy, her hips are supple and grippable, her breasts ample and perky but not too large, with easily aroused nipples, and her bottom is tight but full and bubbly.
Christie uses every manner of spell, being creative when she feels like it, and occasionally just using the metal claws strapped to the backs of her hands to strip her opponents. She is the epitome of whimsy with a twisted sense of justice -- she'll let her opponents know if she respects them or not and take their time in tormenting the haughty. By all accounts she is an ancient sorceress and her power reflects this, although her dress itself is very susceptible to damage and will often betray her in subtle ways -- snagging on a bush or unraveling slowly over the course of the match. This has happened a few times to reveal a lacy white thong underneath and nothing else. Besides her scandalous undergarment, dress, and claws, she wears nothing save for simple leather sandals that lace up her exquisite calves.

two of the girls don't have much to work with yet, but the story format is really accessible -- I dont care much where you take it thought naturally i prefer if the story focuses on the girls stripping each other in the arena. The other girls (Christie in particular) probably give the best idea of how the fights tend to go... though once again it's a free-form story, so go crazy

tl; dr

the PoV girls are as follows
janna - innocent elven ranger girl, uses magic arrows
selena - trickery and magic using rogue, dark and smoky hot
rose - hapless and innocent, clumsy tavern girl, no magic powers, pretty much exists to be stripped
christie - sexy, blond, powerful, mysterious witch with the cursed dress, an arena favorite

go nuts and enjoy!

I like these stories and you have shared some good ones.. Do you have more such stories.. Please share the link:):)

Zelten 06-23-2013 08:44 PM

I want to thank Ewong and Voltros for giving the Naked adventures of June and Mimi the shot in the arm it needed. That one off Emma Watson scene I wrote was always intended to be a random, unconnected scene but you guys made it work :p.
Let's keep a hot streak going.

Anonegg 06-24-2013 01:07 PM

Does anyone know if there's a way of tracking story updates in-site? At the moment I have most of the ENF stories in my Internet Explorer favourites, and I have to check them one at a time. I've noticed there's a "Favourites" tab on writing.com but I'm not sure how to use it.

Any thoughts?

Zelten 06-24-2013 05:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1536174)
Does anyone know if there's a way of tracking story updates in-site? At the moment I have most of the ENF stories in my Internet Explorer favourites, and I have to check them one at a time. I've noticed there's a "Favourites" tab on writing.com but I'm not sure how to use it.

Any thoughts?

When you favorite a story, they show up on a list on the right hand side and it says when they were last updated. The most recently updated stories always go to the top of the list.
Hope that helps.

SergeantC 06-25-2013 10:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 1536174)
Does anyone know if there's a way of tracking story updates in-site? At the moment I have most of the ENF stories in my Internet Explorer favourites, and I have to check them one at a time. I've noticed there's a "Favourites" tab on writing.com but I'm not sure how to use it.

Any thoughts?

At the top right of any story, just above the stars that rate it, are a group of icons. One of them is a plus ("+") sign. If you click on the "+" sign, it will turn into an image of a hand with a piece of string wrapped around one finger. This will show that you have added it to your favorites.

Then you will see notice of updates in your favorites folder. You will also be able to manage them.

Hope this helps.

Anonegg 06-27-2013 03:27 PM

Thanks guys, that really helped. It was getting annoying scanning each story, looking for updates :D

Zelten 06-27-2013 06:14 PM

Also, not sure if you know this but that the bottom of each chapter (and to the side of each favorite in that menu) there's a link that goes to the last 15 additions and another that gives a story outline (listing each brank, give a scope of how big the story is).

Phantompen 06-30-2013 08:08 PM

I've gone ahead and made a new Interactive story, based on one of my favorite games of all time.

Persona 3: Undressed
http://www.writing.com/main/interact...na-3-Undressed

As with my previous stories, I'm open to ideas and suggestions from people here too shy/unwilling to go ahead and add to the story themselves. In fact, since it's based in an established world with developed characters, it'd actually be theoretically easier for me to implement ideas. In any case, I sincerely hope you all enjoy the story as it grows!


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