Thanks I love the development and the way you described how she desperately tried to cover her self up.

10/10

Thank you for the feedback! ;)

That's exactly what I want to reflect in this story; her desperation. The fact that she's exposed and can do little about it is what this story is about.

Next part will take a while to come along, but I'll try to post it as soon as possible.

Great story, and the way you described the details of her panty, the '90s style high cut and how it looked on her, was great!

Thank you!

I think that describing the underwear is a must-have for any EUF story. And I personally find 90's high cut panties to be the sexiest style ever worn by women.

I hope to have Rachel's story going on soon!

Yes it is really important to describe the panties its what all EUF about including how embarrassed they are. Panty description is must especially if the story does not have some sort of visual aid like illustration.

My English is very bad that is why I prefer to put some illustrations in my story since my vocubalary to describe things is limited but I think there is a drawback to using Photo comic type story lines it kills the imagination and makes the subject fix atleast with a non graphic non visual story the image of the subjects is based on the interpretation of the narrative each individual will have a different interpretation of a certain description of the subject i.e. blonde girl, petite Asian, etc. we perceive things based on our preferences and I think that is a major advantage for any story without a photo illustration, in a photo based story it leaves nothing for the imagination.

Very well written.
 

You are an awesome writer. The way you drive the action is supremely readable and unique.

I don't regard myself that highly, but I sincerely appreciate your kind words! ;)

Anyway, if you enjoy this kind of stories (EUF), may I reccomend you my other stories? They may be of your interest!