Hi Splotch, the padded bra is also my favorite type of humiliation and I can see where things are going with May very early on already. I'm just wondering if it's possible to get everyone to give her a few close shaves, make the characters in the story think she's real for awhile and makes May more cocky and then give her a big exposure in the end?

It's really a way of building tension in a story but I don't know if it can be done in an interactive story...

Thank you for getting this started!

However, I fear that since there are so many girls mentioned at the start, this story might become paralyzed by excessive choices. I don't mean to sound negative here. Do you think we could/should pare it down to 3 starting girls?

The point of this story was to leave it open so others could design their own girls. So, for now at least, I'll leave all these pathways open. None of the other's should interfere with what any one person wants to do, being seperate.

Jim, I like your idea of dragging out May's exposure. You're welcome to take a thread and make it happen there, saving up for one big exposure then ending it.

Okay!

Well, if I can get moving quick enough, the cheerleader seems perfect. :)

oh yeah, I kind of made her for you.

good additon derelict, btw

Thanks, it's a start!

Unfortunately, the "good stuff" can't come soon enough! :)

Wish I had the writing skills mate... :o

I tried! My first time, so please be kind with your comments :o .
And yes, I managed to keep May's bra on... already have an idea for next chapter...

Got a bit of mental Diarrhea.
Please be kind - take it as a long first attempt, broken into a few parts.