worked for me just fine :D now buy a good photocam so we can enjoy the fun with pictures :P

Nice job!
 

A guy writes an interesting story. He's criticized for his grammar and told he's not telling the truth. That's a great way to chase him away from sharing again.

I LIKED his story, even with the grammar mistakes. Please share more with us as this unfolds!

Well, we are going to all get together tomorrow night. If anything does happen I will share it with you. I will try my best this time to at least write in a manner that would suggest I made it to the seventh or eighth grade.

- Speaking for myself, and all others that enjoy reading the language mandated by our forum rules, I welcome your next effort. I also want to commend you for accepting constructive criticism, and using it to elevate your personal performance. Kudos to you as a lifelong learner.

- Uhm, no. If you check his post below, it seems he intends to post again, with improved quality. Criticism is a good thing. So is personal growth. I fully expect we will all enjoy jbrown113's next offering even more, as a result of his openness to feedback.

Well,my weekend was a bust. My friend ended up sick and could no make it. My wife and her friend were drinking some ,and did end up topless. Around 9:30 I got a phone call from a sick child that was staying at a friends. I went to pick up my child that was a hour and a half round trip. When I got back home my wife and friend were just in living room watching tv. I went on to bed around midnight as I by then was not feeling very well. I woke up around three to go to bathroom again not feeling very well and noticed my wife not in the bed. After a stint on the toilet I got up and noticed my shop lights on but took myself on back to bed. I woke up around 10:30 and my wife was gone with my child , she had begged to go to grandparents house. Her friend and I sat in the living room and talked for awhile. She said to bad you felt bad last night because after the kid fell asleep they had quite the experience without me. My wife and her friend have never had an experience alone and I had e couraged her to do so if she ever wanted to. When my wife returned I was told very little other than they had a good time. I acted like I was very dissapointed about missing it and was offered a blow job by the both of them . My wife started for a short bit and by the time her friend got good and going I had to excuse myself to the bathroom where I spent the most part of the rest of my weekend.