its good!
 

I enjoy these types of stories! Please write more! Miley Cyrus vs. Lindsey Lohan would be great!

I have to agree with what's been said here so far. WHile the ideas behind your stories are good, the pacing is off. You need to build the imagery and action .. at the moment it's coming across like you're calling a race, hurrying so you don't miss what happens next at the exclusion of detail

I like the idea of putting pictures of the celebrities in the story, since I don't always know who these people are. Are all the stories going to be 2 or 3 people, or could you do some with more?

Should so restart these stories love them ;)