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ewong247 11-11-2015 07:34 PM

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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2108031)
I totally have no room to talk after trashing my ongoing writing.com story but I was just wondering if anything still getting worked on?

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...026-Im-not-her

https://www.writing.com/main/interac...action/outline

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...of-Humiliation

These are the three I still check up on occasionally, but they seem pretty much dead. Just wondering if everyone moved on to different sites or something.

From what I can tell, we haven't fully moved into another site. I think a couple people from this board created stories on chyoa.com, but none have had many additions besides ones from the original author. A few stories on writing.com have been updated, but sadly not the ones you're looking at.

I myself have been trying to figure out something to post onto some of the older stories, but haven't had the time or inspiration to do so.

Anonegg 11-14-2015 07:34 PM

I've been struggling to write any ENF stuff lately. I don't know if anyone else has this problem, but the writing.com stuff being updated at the moment seems to be stories which I haven't been following and, due to their current length, would require a bit of a commitment to read through (for example, the latest Erica chapter, "Erica gets to leave here with a prize", is currently the 45th chapter of that story thread). As a result I find myself shying away from contributing since I'd need some knowledge of what has happened so far.

I did, however, add two stories over at Chyoa:

https://chyoa.com/story/adventures-o...bby-ditz/cover

I contributed about 8 or 9 chapters to "Adventures of a Chubby Naked Woman" on Writing.com, and nobody added to my work. So I decided to take what I'd written and post it as a new story on Chyoa. Some of the scenes you'll recognise, and are completely unaltered. There were a few setup chapters, however, which were written by other authors. Rather than stealing their work I've decided to write my own introductory chapters instead. This one is currently open for additions if anyone is interested.

https://chyoa.com/story/the-namish/cover

I mentioned this idea a while ago, and I finally decided to make a start on it. It's currently locked so that only I can add stuff on to it - I have a few ideas that I want to expand upon and explain before I let other people add to it. For example, gym class / PE is performed in the buff in this story, but the students wear wrist and ankle bracelets that project a hologram PE kit onto their bodies. I want to show how they work but also to suggest one or two ways they might falter before anyone else starts fiddling with them.

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I've sort of given up on the Create Your Own Story site. Without the ability to see which stories have been updated it's pretty useless, which is a shame as there's some really good stuff on there.

ewong247 11-15-2015 04:24 AM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 2110343)
I've been struggling to write any ENF stuff lately. I don't know if anyone else has this problem, but the writing.com stuff being updated at the moment seems to be stories which I haven't been following and, due to their current length, would require a bit of a commitment to read through (for example, the latest Erica chapter, "Erica gets to leave here with a prize", is currently the 45th chapter of that story thread). As a result I find myself shying away from contributing since I'd need some knowledge of what has happened so far.

I did, however, add two stories over at Chyoa:

https://chyoa.com/story/adventures-o...bby-ditz/cover

I contributed about 8 or 9 chapters to "Adventures of a Chubby Naked Woman" on Writing.com, and nobody added to my work. So I decided to take what I'd written and post it as a new story on Chyoa. Some of the scenes you'll recognise, and are completely unaltered. There were a few setup chapters, however, which were written by other authors. Rather than stealing their work I've decided to write my own introductory chapters instead. This one is currently open for additions if anyone is interested.

https://chyoa.com/story/the-namish/cover

I mentioned this idea a while ago, and I finally decided to make a start on it. It's currently locked so that only I can add stuff on to it - I have a few ideas that I want to expand upon and explain before I let other people add to it. For example, gym class / PE is performed in the buff in this story, but the students wear wrist and ankle bracelets that project a hologram PE kit onto their bodies. I want to show how they work but also to suggest one or two ways they might falter before anyone else starts fiddling with them.

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I've sort of given up on the Create Your Own Story site. Without the ability to see which stories have been updated it's pretty useless, which is a shame as there's some really good stuff on there.

You can bookmark your favorites on chyoa.com

You just need to be in a chapter, and scroll to the very bottom of the page. Next to the button for the "story map", there's an icon that looks like a ribbon, but it's a bookmark. When that story is updated, you'll get a notification on the top right of the page next to your username.

ewong247 11-15-2015 09:07 PM

Also, don't be discouraged by stories with over 20 chapters. Many of them are usually a paragraph or less in length. But you're right, there's still plot points to remember, characterization and personality traits that have to follow through. That's why it could be fun to find a new thread in the same story to add to.

I hear you though. I had severe case of writers block for months. I tried reading new stories, old stories, my own stories for inspiration, but none came. Eventually, I found a story line that I haven't explored in a while and that's what's getting me now.

I added a couple chapters to your "Adventures of a Chubby Ditz" story. I like that she's unaware (it's a trope I continually enjoy writing about) so I'm hoping that subsequent chapters will have her unknowingly subjecting her naked body to several people she would normally not want to see in that state.

"The Namish" might be too big of a concept to trust others to understand and contribute to. I understand it, but it's not my cup of tea.

As to the ones on writing.com, "I'm not her" is an interesting one I've been following, but I don't like the diaper play. I enjoy the protagonist being mistaken for a young girl if she is treated like one (bossed around, spanked, having someone else choose clothes for her), but not if she fully becomes one.

"Naked Fantasy Life" needs more contributors. I added the thread of the Elf Ambassador who is stripped by a powerful sorceress and switches places with her. I would like a thread where she is stripped and then mistaken for a elf peasant who would normally walk around naked. It's just terribly embarrassing for someone of nobility to be mistaken for a commoner.

"A New Dawn...of Humiliation" is fantastic, but I have more fun reading it than contributing to it. Maybe that will change, but not right now.

Anonegg 11-16-2015 01:25 PM

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Originally Posted by ewong247 (Post 2110483)
You can bookmark your favorites on chyoa.com

You just need to be in a chapter, and scroll to the very bottom of the page. Next to the button for the "story map", there's an icon that looks like a ribbon, but it's a bookmark. When that story is updated, you'll get a notification on the top right of the page next to your username.

You mis-read me, Ewong-san. I was talking about the Create Your Own Story site, not the Chyoa site.

If you've never heard of CYOS before, pizzam:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ation_of_Katie

If you need the rest of the links then let me know, there are 9 ENF-ish stories (one or two are exhibitionism in public, which is sort of similar).

ewong247 11-16-2015 04:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 2111264)
You mis-read me, Ewong-san. I was talking about the Create Your Own Story site, not the Chyoa site.

If you've never heard of CYOS before, pizzam:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ation_of_Katie

If you need the rest of the links then let me know, there are 9 ENF-ish stories (one or two are exhibitionism in public, which is sort of similar).

Oh, right that site. Yeah its terrible that you can't bookmark or save your favorites to a list. The only thing I can say is that you can click the category title (usually the title of the story), and it will give you a list of all the chapters attributed to that story. You have to hunt around for any chapters you haven't seen before. Unfortunately, there isn't an easy way to see which chapters preceded the chapter your reading. It's nice that it gives you the freedom to create whatever kind of links you want, but it makes it less user friendly.

ewong247 11-16-2015 04:21 PM

I've done my own search on the CYOS site, but out sound like you might have a longer list of stories that would pique by interest. So if you could include links, that would help.

Zelten 11-16-2015 04:54 PM

Add me as another one who has had bad writers block. I've been wanting to add more to Naked Fantasy Life, but keep drawing blanks every time I try tow rite a chapter.

phantom_pen 11-17-2015 10:51 AM

Writer's Block seems to be a thing that happens to me nigh constantly nowadays. I've managed to get some chapters out recently, but all too often I just can't come up with something that feels like a decent chapter. Just a theory, but I think I do better when I have a "partner" as it were. The back-and-forth can help.


Also, on a side note, I'm contemplating trying to resurrect my RP forum. I was considering dropping the RPG elements and just reducing things to being centralized around simple writing and letting whoever is in the "storyteller" position decide the results of certain actions and the like. Of course, it would be good to know if this would even drum up any interest.

phantom_pen 11-17-2015 08:05 PM

Well, the forum of the setting is Cerindclvr's Enferia universe. So, it's a medieval fantasy-based setting. That may not be everyone's cup of tea. I probably should have clarified that in my previous post. My mistake.

SergeantC 11-17-2015 09:56 PM

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Originally Posted by ewong247 (Post 2111328)
Oh, right that site. Yeah its terrible that you can't bookmark or save your favorites to a list. The only thing I can say is that you can click the category title (usually the title of the story), and it will give you a list of all the chapters attributed to that story. You have to hunt around for any chapters you haven't seen before. Unfortunately, there isn't an easy way to see which chapters preceded the chapter your reading. It's nice that it gives you the freedom to create whatever kind of links you want, but it makes it less user friendly.

At the top of each story, above the title, are several small boxes. Click the one labelled "Watch," and this will add the story to your personal watchlist. It isn't quite as useful as writing.com, but it will allow you to go to the recent changes page, from the tab on the left side of the page, and see any changes or additions to any story you are watching.

Hope this helps.

phantom_pen 11-18-2015 12:17 PM

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Originally Posted by MsKittyVicki (Post 2111945)
What's your point? Enhancing of the bust line has been around as long as hookers. Look at medieval styled dresses. Bustiers have always existed and if the cups are bigger than the breasts, than I'm sure cloth was used to make up the difference... Rowr!

Fair enough. I just wanted to clarify that because the setting may not be to everyone's tastes, not because your tastes wouldn't be feasible.

In any case, I suppose there's no harm in posting the link to the forum here? It has been dead for some time, and there's going to be overhaul to the way things are done when/if enough interest gets drummed up to revive it, but there's no better way to get the word out, is there?

I can't post the url, but just do a google search for "Enferia Adventures" and it will be the very first result.

Anonegg 11-20-2015 02:55 PM

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Originally Posted by ewong247 (Post 2111331)
I've done my own search on the CYOS site, but out sound like you might have a longer list of stories that would pique by interest. So if you could include links, that would help.

As requested:

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...u're_Naked!
(Various ENF scenarios in various locations - very much the main 'general' ENF story).

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Pi_Pi_Pi
(Various girls join an exhibitionism-orientated sorority.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Work_Attire
(Two exhibitionist women get to decide what the other person wears each day.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ation_of_Katie
(Katie is humiliated by just about everyone. Coincidentally, Kate's children also has some interesting characters with different concepts).

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...ting_Adventure
(Sci-fi or unusual ENF concepts.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/ENF
(Only a few chapters added, unfortunately - not really worthwhile, but could be something to build on?)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...7s_Naughty_Day
(Basically a girl likes to be sexy and naked, but to be honest all story choices lead to the same dead end ENF situation regardless of what you choose.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own.../Public_Nudity
(Exhibitionist story - a girl decides to spend the day naked, and goes on various adventures. I've added a few chapters to the 18 y/o - Stay At Home - Gardening story.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Country_Girl
(Girl working on a farm, with a stingy step father who refuses to buy her new clothes. So she starts to secretly work nude in order to protect her outfits...)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...evils_Daughter
(A bit weird this one - about a girl who worships the devil. But you can see straight away there's an option for her to walk around in the buff in order to shock her family.)

http://editthis.info/create_your_own...aked_in_Public
(Only a few chapters so far, really needs some developing.)

SPLOTCH11 12-01-2015 05:57 PM

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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2108031)
I totally have no room to talk after trashing my ongoing writing.com story but I was just wondering if anything still getting worked on?

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...026-Im-not-her

https://www.writing.com/main/interac...action/outline

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...of-Humiliation

These are the three I still check up on occasionally, but they seem pretty much dead. Just wondering if everyone moved on to different sites or something.

Since posting this, Fantasy ENF has been more active then any other story on writing.com I've seen in quite some time. Check out the fresh chapters here:

https://www.writing.com/main/interac...d-Fantasy-Life

I'm going to try to keep the momentum going by adding when I can, I hope it takes back off again.

ewong247 12-03-2015 04:05 PM

CHYOA site updated
 
In case any of you haven't checked chyoa.com in a while, they just updated the site to add more features. I'm not a fan of how they changed the way you access new chapters in your favorited story list or that they made it harder for you to see any comments made on your chapters. However, the site seems sleeker. It'll take some getting used to.

The one change to note here is that they now allow you to bookmark individual chapters, which uses the icon that was originally used to favorite a story.

So, now if you want to favorite a story so you can get notifications of when it gets updated, you now have to click the STAR ICON next to the bookmark icon at the bottom of the page.

cerindclvr 12-04-2015 01:07 PM

Enferia
 
Heya. We could, in fact, use some new blood over at the Enferia role-play forum. I'd say things have been resurrected pretty well -- the board is up and moving around again, so to speak. But some new names would be ideal. It is medieval-fantasy based in a setting of me and others' creation, which is part of the appeal. Some things about the world have been established, but there's basically little to no limit on the types of characters we can have or realms they're from.

The main part of the board features gladiator-style stripping combat, at the end of which the winner further humiliates the loser, much like in the story series I posted here a long time ago:

https://forum.oneclickchicks.com/showthread.php?t=78414

The forum also features more classic fantasy adventures, all pretty much focused on getting the characters naked while they try to achieve a goal (which often includes getting other ladies naked, haha). If anyone has any interest, apprehensions, or general questions, feel free to message me or phantompen. I know we'd like to see what you have to offer!

The Enferia forum is here:
http://enferiaadventures.forumotion.com/

If you like fantasy ENF check it out. Definitely check it out if you like ENF role play..!

SPLOTCH11 12-04-2015 05:43 PM

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Originally Posted by cerindclvr (Post 2120815)
Heya. We could, in fact, use some new blood over at the Enferia role-play forum. I'd say things have been resurrected pretty well -- the board is up and moving around again, so to speak. But some new names would be ideal. It is medieval-fantasy based in a setting of me and others' creation, which is part of the appeal. Some things about the world have been established, but there's basically little to no limit on the types of characters we can have or realms they're from.

The main part of the board features gladiator-style stripping combat, at the end of which the winner further humiliates the loser, much like in the story series I posted here a long time ago:

https://forum.oneclickchicks.com/showthread.php?t=78414

The forum also features more classic fantasy adventures, all pretty much focused on getting the characters naked while they try to achieve a goal (which often includes getting other ladies naked, haha). If anyone has any interest, apprehensions, or general questions, feel free to message me or phantompen. I know we'd like to see what you have to offer!

The Enferia forum is here:
http://enferiaadventures.forumotion.com/

If you like fantasy ENF check it out. Definitely check it out if you like ENF role play..!

This is all news to me, excited to jump in!

SPLOTCH11 12-20-2015 07:56 PM

I know my decision to erase 'Nothing to Hide' off of writing.com upset a lot of people, myself largely included. This also made showed how unreliable I am. But, There's a definite gap or hole in ENF style fiction right now. Do people think that another writing.com like writing.com would be a worthwhile project, or is writing.com pretty much abandoned? If people are down mention it here. If someone else wants to start the project so I won't have run of it (or the ability to hastily delete it) comment here, or just start it, whatever!

ewong247 12-21-2015 02:26 AM

I think if you were to do it, the best way would be to use chyoa.com. It's the most user friendly site. It's free, you can add as many different branches getting a single cashier as you want. You can choose to have chapters be added automatically or if you want to moderate the new chapters so nothing like mrwoodson happens. The only barrier to entry is having an admin approve your story, which is easy if you post at least two chapters of actual story, and not just options or background.

Writing.com is fine, but the structure of our now feels more restrictive of the creative process. Chyoa.com gives everyone more freedom. You can even give other users the ability to moderate your stories so it doesn't have to fall on you to approve everything.

torretxt 12-22-2015 05:52 AM

It's about time!
 
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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2128998)
I know my decision to erase 'Nothing to Hide' off of writing.com upset a lot of people, myself largely included. This also made showed how unreliable I am. But, There's a definite gap or hole in ENF style fiction right now. Do people think that another writing.com like writing.com would be a worthwhile project, or is writing.com pretty much abandoned? If people are down mention it here. If someone else wants to start the project so I won't have run of it (or the ability to hastily delete it) comment here, or just start it, whatever!

I'd love to see you resurrect "Nothing to Hide" and start again. Writing.com is fine. The problem wasn't with that site so much as your hasty decision to chuck it all in. People are used to going there and using it. There are thousands of members that can add their input already in place as well as those who follow you here and at ASN. All of the alternative places require some learning how to navigate or require pre-approval (delaying chapter additions which may or may not be a good thing.) I guess what I am saying is that so far there is no one perfect place as each of the alternatives mentioned have good and bad points. Writing.com is a known factor and people use it and there is steady traffic.

I for one would love to see you start the story again as if it were never published using the same premise and use your creativity to get it started and see where it goes. The best part of the original story was that you started story ideas and others rounded things out. The HUGE number of chapters tells me that you were doing something right.

If you DO decide to do this again you MUST make a mental decision that once you start the story will be out there forever. Hands off - leave it alone. No offense but if you can do that we all win. How about a nice Christmas present for us fans - announce you'll take up the story again.

ewong247 12-22-2015 06:29 AM

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Originally Posted by torretxt (Post 2129776)
People are used to going there and using it. There are thousands of members that can add their input already in place as well as those who follow you here and at ASN. All of the alternative places require some learning how to navigate or require pre-approval (delaying chapter additions which may or may not be a good thing.)

Torretxt, you're right that writing.com has more traffic for like minded folks, but I think the creative freedom chyoa.com provides could persuade others to join.

As far as slowing the process by having things pre-approved, chyoa.com only has to approve the initial creation of the story. It just helps of you write a couple chapters to let the admins know what you're writing about. After that, you can set it up so new chapters are automatically approved and posted. You still have control over the chapters so you can edit or delete them if needed, and authors can edit or delete a chapter they created.

I swear I don't work for them, but I just love the versatility and freedom of the site. Since you can add as many chapters as you want, you can have infinite possibilities instead of writing.com eventually limiting a chapter to two choices unless you pay. There's also no need for chapters labelled "other" or "author's choice".

In the end, it's up to you, Splotch. I just want to let you know what options you have.

torretxt 12-22-2015 08:14 PM

I see your point
 
Ewong, I appreciate your point and would never presume to debate the issue with someone of your writing prowess. I wasn't necessarily trashing any other site including your recommendation. I guess my point was that the limitations of writing.com didn't hinder Splotch's story from gathering . . . how many hundred chapters was it Splotch? A hell of a lot I think - several, several hundreds.

For any story to achieve THAT many postings - not all from Splotch - has to appear in a place where there is a huge following and people can readily find it and feel comfortable using the site. Why mess with what was obviously working - very well indeed from the popularity of the postings over such a long time. It would be still gathering chapters if the author hadn't killed it. (Sorry Splotch - nothing personal - just saying the story didn't die because of anything Writing.com did. )

In any case - the real point is that Splotch needs to decide to resurrect the story. I feel HE needs to be the one to do this as it really is HIS story - everyone knows it is so.

SPLOTCH11 12-23-2015 03:49 PM

https://chyoa.com/story/LAUREN'S-LITTLE-SECRET.8050

Here it is: A new interactive small breast ENF story! Thanks for your thoughts, but I actually started working on this before I even saw the debate between writing.com and chyoa.com Part of my goal is to reach a new audience and I think a new sight will be perfect!

Also, just to clarify, this is not a remake. Though similar, it's a different story. I don't want to be limited like that, plus nothing to hide kind of ran it's course. It's fine if this story goes in similar directions but as a whole I'm excited to make something new! That's part of the motivation for the new site as well. I'm excited to see how the story will work out with moderator controls and unlimited open chapters!

So please, check it out, feel free to add! There's only a few chapters so far but I'll probably add more today.

Seuern 12-24-2015 04:42 AM

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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2128998)
I know my decision to erase 'Nothing to Hide' off of writing.com upset a lot of people, myself largely included. This also made showed how unreliable I am. But, There's a definite gap or hole in ENF style fiction right now. Do people think that another writing.com like writing.com would be a worthwhile project, or is writing.com pretty much abandoned? If people are down mention it here. If someone else wants to start the project so I won't have run of it (or the ability to hastily delete it) comment here, or just start it, whatever!

I've noticed the same gap and while I do believe your deletion set us in all directions (there's two new writers on Writing.com, maybe we should give them an invite here?). The ENF/CMNF writers we mainly read, are well, here. That's not to say a bad thing, but it shows we're a fairly small group. What is there, five or six of us? I'm not saying there's anything wrong with any of the writers, I enjoy seeing a contribution from anyone who posts here, but there's simply not enough of us. How can we go about inspiring the next generation of perverts who want to see women disrobed in less than ideal situations?

A problem I'm seeing is there's a lack of a medium for us to really go at. Writing.com is alright, I prefer it (they even let you put AdBlock back on!), but they've also stolen our ability to create new Interactives without paying first. I've been having many, many ideas and have been writing them solo, even tried to convert some of my popular stories into Interactives, but no such luck. There's many stories, but they're stale or the site we're trying to put them on simply isn't user friendly. Me, personally, write as a hobby and don't entirely feel like going to jumps and hoops to find where I can contribute and only be confronted with a codex to learn so I might begin to contribute.

Also, I'd wish you wouldn't be so hard on yourself. You did nothing wrong. I myself have had the urge to wipe it all away many times, and while I'll certainly miss Vanessa and her adventures, at the end of the day, it doesn't much matter. You're still here and you're a valuable writer; I think if we kept the story and lost you, it wouldn't be the same. Hell, you were the one updating the story half the time.

SPLOTCH11 12-26-2015 05:42 PM

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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2130441)
https://chyoa.com/story/LAUREN'S-LITTLE-SECRET.8050

Here it is: A new interactive small breast ENF story! Thanks for your thoughts, but I actually started working on this before I even saw the debate between writing.com and chyoa.com Part of my goal is to reach a new audience and I think a new sight will be perfect!

Also, just to clarify, this is not a remake. Though similar, it's a different story. I don't want to be limited like that, plus nothing to hide kind of ran it's course. It's fine if this story goes in similar directions but as a whole I'm excited to make something new! That's part of the motivation for the new site as well. I'm excited to see how the story will work out with moderator controls and unlimited open chapters!

So please, check it out, feel free to add! There's only a few chapters so far but I'll probably add more today.


Already the response to the new story has been awesome! I'm very happy with the move. Check out the stuff that's been developing, lots of open chapters to be filled!

Zelten 12-29-2015 02:44 PM

Teraton also created a new interactive:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...i-Fi-Stripping

Lot's of potential.

farman 01-07-2016 12:23 PM

new chapter
 
I added a new chapter at the interactive story ( writing.com ) "Yuki's Horrible Day''. Enjoy!

Anonegg 01-08-2016 03:10 PM

Have to admit, not a huge fan of the Chyoa overhaul. It was a lot easier before finding out which stories had been added to.

My apologies Ewong, I didn't realise you had chapters pending approval on Chubby Ditz. I've given them the okay today. I'll see if there's a way for me to automatically approve in future.

ewong247 01-08-2016 03:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 2139479)
Have to admit, not a huge fan of the Chyoa overhaul. It was a lot easier before finding out which stories had been added to.

My apologies Ewong, I didn't realise you had chapters pending approval on Chubby Ditz. I've given them the okay today. I'll see if there's a way for me to automatically approve in future.

I wasn't a fan at first either, but once you figure out how to find things, it gets easier. Chapters needing approval should have a notification, so if you don't have that set up, go to the "notification settings" for that. At first I thought that would end up cluttering my notifications list, but so far it's been manageable.

I can't tell you how long it took me to finally figure out how to add tags to my chapters!

However, I still like chyoa.com more than writing.com right now. The interface takes a little getting used to, but adding chapters is so easy, and it has the same functionality as writing.com without all the limits and pay walls.

phantom_pen 01-08-2016 05:50 PM

I've added two stories to cyoa now, and while I haven't done too much in the way of building them up and I'm still getting used to exactly how the site works... I have to say I like it. Perhaps one of the biggest advantages is not needing to come up with chapter choices for every new addition, leaving that to whoever chooses to actually add something. It allows for much more freedom in my opinion, and there doesn't seem to be a limit to options that can be added to a chapter. Or at the very least it's a very generous limit.

CaptainKen 01-15-2016 11:58 PM

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Originally Posted by SPLOTCH11 (Post 2131868)
Already the response to the new story has been awesome! I'm very happy with the move. Check out the stuff that's been developing, lots of open chapters to be filled!

Splotch the story is coming out really good and is a lot of fun to read! I loved Nothing To Hide, but I think this one might end up being evven better!! Congrats on the great writing and I can't wait to see how the story turns out! :)

Boss2125 01-16-2016 04:43 AM

Does anyone here have any contact details for John Knuckles? I really want to let him know just how much I enjoy his writing.

SPLOTCH11 01-17-2016 05:34 PM

I think you can contact him on Chyoa.com if you go to his profile.

SPLOTCH11 01-17-2016 05:35 PM

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Originally Posted by CaptainKen (Post 2143303)
Splotch the story is coming out really good and is a lot of fun to read! I loved Nothing To Hide, but I think this one might end up being evven better!! Congrats on the great writing and I can't wait to see how the story turns out! :)


Thanks! Honestly Nothing to Hide had about run it's course for me. Most of my threads had run themselves into corners. I'm really enjoying coming back to this type of story fresh.

SPLOTCH11 01-27-2016 06:30 PM

https://chyoa.com/story/Comic-Book-ENF.7919/map

Wanted to post a link to the new Comic Book ENF story Ewong has made. A lot of open chapters, some are starting to get going really well.

Z678Vash 02-03-2016 06:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Zelten (Post 2133461)
Teraton also created a new interactive:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact...i-Fi-Stripping

Lot's of potential.

It looks it will be fun. I was in the process of adding a chapter only to discover I couldn't: Due to heavy traffic adding to interactive stories is temporary unavailable for guests and free members.

Not sure how long that's been going on because I haven't added anything for a while. Heck maybe it's always been that way all along and I just never saw it, but that's yet another reason why it's such a pain to use Writing.com :mad:

Anonegg 02-05-2016 02:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Z678Vash (Post 2154347)
It looks it will be fun. I was in the process of adding a chapter only to discover I couldn't: Due to heavy traffic adding to interactive stories is temporary unavailable for guests and free members.

Not sure how long that's been going on because I haven't added anything for a while. Heck maybe it's always been that way all along and I just never saw it, but that's yet another reason why it's such a pain to use Writing.com :mad:

It's only since they began clamping down on us mooching Freemiums (who nonetheless provide the content for their site). It's not even true. I've been reading a chapter in the past and wanted to open both of the following chapters, so I right-clicked each and opened in a new tab. They both opened at the same time, yet one of them was blocked due to heavy traffic. I hit refresh and it loaded no problem.

They just want your money. Don't give it to them.

Z678Vash 02-07-2016 09:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Anonegg (Post 2155347)
It's only since they began clamping down on us mooching Freemiums (who nonetheless provide the content for their site). It's not even true. I've been reading a chapter in the past and wanted to open both of the following chapters, so I right-clicked each and opened in a new tab. They both opened at the same time, yet one of them was blocked due to heavy traffic. I hit refresh and it loaded no problem.

They just want your money. Don't give it to them.

Oh don't worry. I have absolutely no intention of giving them anything.

Seuern 02-08-2016 04:27 AM

Batting an idea around in my head. Something to with snow and a girl caught out in it for a long period of time where she partakes in the traditional cold weather activities more or less against her will. Might be a personal, might do a CYOA, but I can't quite come up with the scenario with which she would be outside, and if she were to get out, why she would stray away from her place.

I'm never good with short stories and usually in the stories I've written to or contributed to, there's quite a bit of backlore as to the reasoning and everything.

ewong247 02-08-2016 09:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Seuern (Post 2156879)
Batting an idea around in my head. Something to with snow and a girl caught out in it for a long period of time where she partakes in the traditional cold weather activities more or less against her will. Might be a personal, might do a CYOA, but I can't quite come up with the scenario with which she would be outside, and if she were to get out, why she would stray away from her place.

I'm never good with short stories and usually in the stories I've written to or contributed to, there's quite a bit of backlore as to the reasoning and everything.

Is she alone, with friends, a boyfriend/girlfriend? They could each have a different motivation to get your protagonist into the snow naked, and keep her there.

If she is alone, it could be an accident. A mislabled door or ambiguous signage while she is trying to find her way from the lockers to the sauna. She could be challenging herself to be more dating, and feels like no one would be out in the snow, so no one would see her if she streaked, but things her or of hand. She could be a closet exhibitionist and wants to test it out. She could be an athlete trying to test her endurance in extreme temperatures.

Overall, it's an interesting premise, but the longer you have her out in the snow, the less I'm going to believe she will be ok. Hypothermia is not sexy. Well, most of the time. If it makes her go to the hospital naked, then there can be some sexy fun.


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