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Old 05-06-2011, 01:39 AM
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This is kind of a stripping catfight story but with a pretty big twist. Hope you enjoy.

A cheering crowd carried a naked woman through the streets as she cried and screamed. One would think this was a crowd surfing incident gone wrong were it not for the fact that it was the age of pirates.

The canon blasts that day shook the entire village. The militia defended the village and drove off the pirates who escape in their ship. However, there was one pirate who did not catch up to them. It was Victoria, the captain’s wife.

She was the much feared yet desired woman of the ocean. Always dress in a black skirt and black leather corset to show off her large breasts.

The militia surrounded her, muskets drawn and one woman stepped forward, the prison warden Elizabeth wearing the dress of an average barmaid. She pulled out a sword as did Victoria.

Elizabeth rushed toward her and they broke into a battle of precision fencing. Only in one parrying mistake, Victoria’s rapier flew out of her hand and rolled down the stairs. She turned to chase it, stopped only by Elizabeth’s rapier blade that rubbed along her neck.

Victoria closed her eyes and trembled. She was finished now, so she thought. It would only take a second for a swordswoman of Elizabeth’ skill to slash her throat. Maybe she would spare some mercy. Or not.

Elizabeth raised the sword to the pirate woman’s stomach and slashed her straight across her waist. Victoria opened her eyes. She looked down and there was not a drip of blood across her waist and she felt no pain. She looked down again and screamed.

Her skirt tore from the waistband and dropped down around her ankles. She could not believe it. She staggered over the stairs, naked from the waist down except for her lacey white floral print panties that hugged her round bottom, going in between her cheeks just slightly like some 17th century boy shorts.

The crowd burst into laughter and mocked her with crude shouts.

“Look at those skimpy undergarments,” a man shouted. “What a wh*r* she is.”

Another man laughed. “Yes look at that. Just look at Victoria’s secret.”

“A very large bum she has. Why don’t you get some exercise, ya’ pig.”

Elizabeth tripped and crawled back up to her feet. She slapped a hand over the front of her panties and then placed another hand over her chubby ass. She hunched over in disbelief. All of the average peasant villagers were seeing her in her underwear and mocking her. A once feared villain now a laughing stock for swine.

Victoria’s sword brought the humiliated woman back to reality, as the cold blade again touched her neck.

“You’ve humiliated me enough,” Victoria said. “Now let me die with dignity.”

Elizabeth laughed. She lowered her sword down between Victoria’s breasts and over the strings that held together her corset. She tapped the strings with her sword and then slashed downward across the laces. Victoria flinched but was again relieved that she felt no pain. Well, no physical pain, at least.

The laces tore apart and her corset loosened, falling down her body and onto the ground. Elizabeth threw her arms over her breasts, but Victoria’s sword urged her arms away and forced her to keep her hands by her side and reveal her treasures to the entire crowd.

The crowd cheered at the sight of her breasts hanging down from her chest. Victoria couldn’t take it anymore. She started crying. The feared pirate was crying in humiliation in front of everyone.

Elizabeth smiled. Humiliating other women was her specialty and she enjoyed degrading the women in her prison. She was going to take advantage of this opportunity. She pushed Victoria to the ground and sat on her stomach. From here she grabbed a handful of each of Victoria’s tits and started twisting and squeezing them.

“Please stop,” Victoria screamed.

Elizabeth stopped, but only to continue on to another punishment. She flipped her over and bent the crying woman over her knee. Her stomach rested on Elizabeth’s knee and her ass stuck out as she rested there on her hands and knees.

The first was like a whip crack. She slapped her hand across Victoria’s pantied ass. Elizabeth pinched the waistband and snapped it against her back.

“You ready to show everything off, b*tch,” Elizabeth whisper.

“Please, stop this. I’m sorry.”

Elizabeth laughed and pulled the woman’s down her chubby thighs and let them bunch around her knees. She continued spanking the naked woman, each slap landing on her ass with a snap and a constant rhythm.

“Say you’re sorry,” Elizabeth told her.

“I’m sorry,” Victoria said. “Ouch!”

“Say that you’re a pathetic naked wh*r* with a fat ass.”

“I’m a pathetic naked wh*r* with a fat ass. Ouch! Please stop.”

Elizabeth tied the woman’s hands behind her back and threw her onto the saddle of her horse and rode the steed through town. Victoria could only look shocked as the crowds laughed at the naked villainess.

Elizabeth brought her to the town square and locked the naked woman in the stocks, where she was bent over and her head and hands were locked in the wooden board. From here, the villagers mocked the defeated woman. They threw fruit at her and by the end of the day, Victoria was a big sticky mess, covered in the pulp.

To be continued. . .
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Old 05-09-2011, 06:47 PM
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fucking great! i have a soft spot for catfight... rather, sword fight stripping...

MOAR PLEASE GOODSIR
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Old 05-11-2011, 03:35 PM
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Loving it. Is it time for the continuation yet?
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Old 05-11-2011, 06:43 PM
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Thanks for nice the comments. I'm working on the next part. I've been busy but hopefully it will be done soon.
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Old 05-12-2011, 07:44 AM
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Default Swords and ENF...

I love a good sword fight... I also love ENF. Thank you Mr. Aard for writing a story with two things that I love... Swords are a very useful tool in the creation of ENF...
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Old 05-28-2011, 11:58 PM
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Part 2

Victoria’s humiliation continued and the town spared no mercy. Elizabeth poured feathers on the naked girl and they stuck to her body with the sticky with fruit pulp. Victoria wept madly. The warden unlocked the stocks and Victoria ran off through the streets covered in feathers. The villagers chased her with sponges and buckets of water, running after the woman, completely covered in feathers except for her fat ass that jiggled behind her, bouncing with her stride as if to mock her chasers.

It was such a thrill for these villagers, dashing through the streets in pursuit of the woman who had caused them so much trouble, the wife of the pirate who’s crew swept through this town and left behind piles of dead bodies and looted houses. So they chased her with thoughts of vengeance.

One fast man tripped Victoria to the floor and the villagers pile up on her. Her one hand grasped into the air beneath the pile of men. They held her down and poured water on her and scrubbed her all over. She screamed and writhed under their grip. The men scrubbed down every inch of her body. They especially sponged down her breasts and they spread her legs to scrub the black pubic patch between her legs, as well as running the sponge between her ass cheeks.

The prison warden walked over to them.

“Ah, good job,” she said. “Clean the wh*r* and then I’ll take her from here. She’ll be putting on a show for you boys tomorrow.”

Victoria’s hands were bound behind her back as she was escorted to a carriage. Victoria and Elizabeth glanced into each other’s eyes as she was about to be thrown into the carriage. It was a scene of contrast as the naked and defeated Victoria stared with tears in her eyes and a bitter frown across her lips, while Elizabeth chuckled at her and flashed a triumphant and taunting smile at the disgraced nude woman.

The carriage rode through cobblestone streets with the pathetic prisoner inside and once they arrived at the jail, Elizabeth threw Victoria into a prison cell.

She sat the on cold stone ground with her head between her knees. She was still naked. The warden didn’t give her any clothes before she locked her up. In the cells next to her were other women that were stripped of all their clothing before they were brought in.

This was the sadistic warden’s method for punishing the prisoners. She could think of no better way to humiliate a woman than to rip off all of her clothes and force her to live with her nudity revealed to everyone. Oftentimes, the prisoners would be forced outside to perform labor such as digging and wood chopping, all while without a bit of clothing to wear and the villagers watched . Even when the prisoners were not in the public eye, they still felt a sense of degradation, having to crawl around their cells naked like animals. It gave them a sense of inferiority. All day long they felt the jiggle of their breasts and ass cheeks as they moved around. They felt their bare skin against the stone floor. These conditions gave e them a strong feeling of vulnerability.

The situation was unthinkable for a woman of her reputation, a feared pirate’s wife. A woman feared not only for her cruelty and precision swordsmanship, but coveted also for her dark beauty. Her black hair against her pale skin and a red corset above a black skirt, beneath which were fishnet stocking and boots.

She cried thinking of how she had been knocked down a peg. The full reality of this humiliation was just entering her mind. She was reduced from pirate prestige to nothing but a naked and crying wench. When Elizabeth ripped off the woman’s clothes, it was as if she also robbed her of her character. The blond woman stood in contrast over the bare black haired woman. Good had defeated evil.

Her body was only for her husband, but Elizabeth tore off her clothes and exposed it to everyone including the lowly slobbering peasant who stood giggling at the naked Victoria. She was above these swine, but now they were allowed to stand there and look at her nudity and mock her. The disrespect startled Victoria, how this woman could just rip off her clothes and show her bare treasures to everyone.

Victoria kept crying and now the prison door opened and Elizabeth entered the room. She tied Victoria’s hands behind her back and marched her out of the room. Victoria had no idea where she was going, until Elizabeth marched her right outside of the prison door. Victoria screamed.

The streets were lined with villagers cheering and chanting. In the town of Edithsburg this was the common celebration when a wanted leader, especially a female leader, was captured. Festivities were held as the leader was paraded through the streets naked. This was only the beginning. In a horse driven cage, there was a fat naked woman licking her lips as she stared across the street at Victoria. The pirate’s wife gulped at the thought. Elizabeth couldn’t be that cruel. No way.
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Old 06-02-2011, 06:07 AM
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oh my GAWD... please post the next part immediately please.
please.
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oh my GAWD... please post the next part immediately please.
please.
But don't forget about your other story.
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Old 06-04-2011, 02:43 AM
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I was thinking that I would write the finale to the other story and move on since I was starting to get bored of it. Of course, the final part would be about Megan getting her revenge.

The next part to Pirate's should be done soon. Hope everyone is looking forward to reading about the humiliating things that the fat woman does to Victoria.
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Old 06-10-2011, 05:24 PM
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uhhhhh yesplz. I eagerly await the next installment. Your other story is excellent too! but this one speaks to my love of genre shtuff.
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