[ENF] The New Fantasy Wrestling League

[JackNY51]

Hello! I have decided to restart my Fantasy Wrestling. This new version will be much more fan-run. Throughout the entire time, I will be highly encouraging everyone to send me a PM and request anything. Also, this time it will include celebrities, or anyone you can think of, not just WWE wrestlers (though they will be prominent as that is my personal favorite set of woman). I am hoping that you all send me many requests and I think opening the door to just about any female will increase the popularity of this thread. So, before I begin, I cannot stress enough, PLEASE send me Private Messages (or post in the thread) and send in requests. You could be very vague, and I will just work with it, but feel free to add any details you would like to see (what they were wearing, who wins, what the punishments are,ect)

Enjoy!
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Match 1: Selena Gomez Vs. Miley Cyrus Vs. Katy Perry(Requested)

The first woman to enter the ring is Katy Perry. Katy comes out wearing one of her famous black waist-high shorts (as seen in into photo) and a white top. She is wearing small boots and is very smiley as she waves to all of the fans. Katy makes her way to the ring and sits on the rope as she watches her opponents enter the ring.

The next lady to come down to the ring is the cute and innocent Selena Gomez. She is wearing a white tank top (as seen in into photo) and a pair of denim jeans with brown sandals. She instantly becomes the girl that everyone is rooting on to win because of her cute personality and her young and innocent appearance. As she gets to the ring, she smiles and says hello to Katy Perry, who smiles back and returns the greeting.

The final woman to come out is Miley Cyrus. Unlike the first two, Miley is not waving to the fans. She is acting very stuck up as she shakes her hips and makes her way down to the ring. She is wearing a white sweatshirt, with raggy denim shorts and a pair of stylish boots. When Miley gets to the ring, she looks at Selena and Katy in disgust.

The three woman all take a corner, and the bell rings, scheduling the start of the match, and the first in the new league. The woman obviously have no wrestling experience so everyone is just looking forward to a clothes-ripping cat fight.

Almost instantly, Katy and Miley go for eachothers hair as Selena stays off to the side. Selena instantly regrets entering this match, as she is scared of being stripped and humiliated, but couldn't resist the money offered for participating.

Katy and Miley each have two handfuls of eachothers hair as they are both rolling around, trying to get an edge on one another. While this is happening, the two woman are both trying to remove an arcticle of clothing, to get one step closer to winning.

It was Miley that struck first. As the two were rolling around, she kept taking small pulls as Katy's white top. Eventually, the shirt started to fall apart and develop two or three big holes. It took just one more tug, and Miley was able to sloppily pull the shirt off of Katy's torso. Katy's face did turn a little bit red as she had the biggest boobs in the match, and now they were only covered by a lacey pink bra.

Both Katy and Miley finally stood up from the hair pulling war, both with messed up hair and a lot of pain in the scalp. Miley went up to Selena, who had not seen any action yet, and started to yell at her for not doing anything. Selena just succumbed to the yelling and tilted her head. It seemed like Miley was going to rip off an article of clothing, but Katy came up behind an unexpected Miley. She tuned her around and easily unzipped her jacket, and then Selena pulled it off from behind. Miley was more angry then embarrassed but she still gave a little yelp and put her hands over her standard red bra.

Selena and Katy smiled, happy to see Miley angry and embarrassed. They got a little to caught up and an angry Miley Cyrus gave a big kick in the gut to each girl. As they bent over in pain, she easily grabbed the bottom of Selena's white tanktop and lifted it right off. Selena had on a blue and white bra and was humiliated.

Then, Miley turned her attention to Katy, who was still bent over in pain. In a very quick and swift movement, she unhooked Katy's lacy black bra as it fell strait to the mat, and Katy's bit tits popped right out. Katy, like Selena was humiliated and covered her big boobs with her small hand.

Miley, who was now on a role, and getting an adrenaline rush from being outnumbered, but still winning, charged towards Selena and delivered a kick that made her fall to the ground. Miley, who was only stripped of her shirt, wrapped her hands around Selena's bra and began to tug. Selena held onto her bra for dear life as a tug-of-war ensued. Eventually, an exhausted Selena lost the battle and ,like Katy, her tits became exposed. Selena's cute face turned beat red and she ran outside of the ring, trying to find anything to cover herself with.

The officials eventually told Selena that she needed to return back to the ring. Selena, who had found a small piece of cloth to cover her breast with, nervously trutted back to the ring. Once she got close enough, Miley helped her get back in by grabbing a chunk of hair and pulling her in. In the process, Selena dropped the cloth and her breast became exposed.

Miley stood over Selena and put her hands on the waistband of her denim jeans. Selena yelled for help but Katy was still in the corner of the ring, rubbing her pained scalp and trying to cover her large exposed breast.

Selena continued to yell for help as her jeans were slowly tugged off leaving her in the center of the ring with a pair of blue and white stripped underwear. Selena had never been so humiliated. She was screaming and loosing control.

Katy Perry could not bare to see anymore of this, as she finally got up from the corner and snuck up behind Miley. Katy simply pulled down Miley's pants. Miley's face was one of pure shock and humiliation as a little white thong was exposed and her shorts were gone.

Selena, who was right at Miley's feet in her underwear saw the shock on Miley's face that kept her frozen. Selena quickly jumped up, grabbed a hold of Miley's lacey white bra and yanked it right off. This put Miley into a deeper state of shock as she felt the cold A/C hit her nice warm nipples.

Katy came from behind and got a hold of Miley's thong. However, Miley quickly regrouped, terrified of being stripped, and managed to kick Katy before the thong was pulled off.

Miley quickly took Selena by the hair and threw her out of the ring so she could focus on slowly one opponent. Katy came at Miley with speed, but was met with a swift, strong punch. Miley Cyrus had just knocked out Katy Perry.

Miley smiled, and stood over the motionless Katy. Miley spent a good deal of time un-tying the strings on Katy's shorts. Once they came loose, Miley tugged at the shorts as they came off with no struggle from Katy who was still motionless in a black and white stripped thong.

Miley then began pulling down Katy's thong. By the time the thong got to her knee's Katy awoke. Once shot took a look at her naked body sch screamed and tried to keep the thong on but it was far too late as she layed naked on the mat.

Miley, wanting to "put salt in the wound" held Katy's thong above her head and started dancing.

"SMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK"

A loud smack was heard as Miley screamed in pain. Selena had crawled behind her during her dance and gave one of the hardest smacks ever seen. Then Selena, rather then pulling Miley's thong down, she pulled it upwards, giving Miley a massive wedgie. Miley danced around in pain, and once the tong had gone about a foot high, Selena quickly yanked it down, stripping Miley!!!

Miley cryed in pain, and rubbed her butt. Selena, who, for a nervous girl, had gotten used to being without a bra, jumped for joy and smiled. Katy Perry eventually made her way up(and butt naked) and gave Selena a hug.

They both turned their attention to Miley, who was in between them in the center of the ring. She started screaming vulgarities to both Katy and Selena and promising revenge. Once the girls moved in closer to her, she tried running out. Unfortunately for her, Katy had caught her by the hair. Miley gasped in surprise as Katy pulled her closer before putting her over her knee.

Katy delivered 5 OTK spankings to the nude and naughty Miley who kicked and screamed the whole time. Then Selena, in just her underwear, gave about three whacks that made Miley flinch in pain.

Katy released her and she ran backstage, tears in her eyes.

[JackNY51]

Remember, this will not be as updated as the other one. I cannot urge you enough to PM me a request.

[bahio27]

excellent story! How about Emma Watson versus Emma Roberts?

[JackNY51]

Posts are going to be coming out MUCH slower. I hate to sound stuck up, but I feel like my storys are not getting the appreciation that corresponds to the efforts that I put into them... Maybe my style of writing would be more appreciated on another board.

[hentai muncher]

Originally Posted by JackNY51

Posts are going to be coming out MUCH slower. I hate to sound stuck up, but I feel like my storys are not getting the appreciation that corresponds to the efforts that I put into them... Maybe my style of writing would be more appreciated on another board.

I've been holding my tongue for a while now, but this new post really rubs me the wrong way. You want feedback? Here's your feedback: you're not very good. You're stories just aren't sexy. They have no psychology whatsoever. Two or more women fight each other and eventually one or all of them end up naked. Plus there's always various spelling mistakes.

I have a fetish for stories involving female wrestlers getting their clothes forcibly stripped off, which is why I read your other series despite your limited skills. I really miss The Pac, but he doesn't post here anymore (plus I've read his more recent stories on another website and apparently he's now into some overly dark ad violent stuff now.) I was really hoping you'd be able to fill the void he left, because really anything is better than nothing. But if you're gonna pull this prima donna nonsense, then forget it.
If you want to keep writing, then keep writing. If you don't, then don't. Being a comment wh*re is not cool.

[JackNY51]

Originally Posted by hentai muncher

I've been holding my tongue for a while now, but this new post really rubs me the wrong way. You want feedback? Here's your feedback: you're not very good. You're stories just aren't sexy. They have no psychology whatsoever. Two or more women fight each other and eventually one or all of them end up naked. Plus there's always various spelling mistakes.

I have a fetish for stories involving female wrestlers getting their clothes forcibly stripped off, which is why I read your other series despite your limited skills. I really miss The Pac, but he doesn't post here anymore (plus I've read his more recent stories on another website and apparently he's now into some overly dark ad violent stuff now.) I was really hoping you'd be able to fill the void he left, because really anything is better than nothing. But if you're gonna pull this prima donna nonsense, then forget it.
If you want to keep writing, then keep writing. If you don't, then don't. Being a comment wh*re is not cool.

Sorry you feel that way. Funny how various other member have given me compliments, looks like you're alone here.

But rather then saying I suck, why not give me tips. Whats turns me on may not turn you on, but obviously my stories worked for various other member. I am open to changing my stories to fufill others wants but they need to tell me what they are...

[JackNY51]

Also, before you criticize, you should actually have respectable posts yourself... you do not.

[hentai muncher]

Originally Posted by JackNY51

Also, before you criticize, you should actually have respectable posts yourself... you do not.

Didn't you want feedback? If you only wanted certain people to criticize your work then you should have said something. To be fair, you have gotten a little better than when you first started. To be unfair you also seem to have gotten in the habit of whining when a few days have gone by without anyone commenting on your thread.

[Kyrel]

You want comments and constructive critique. OK, I'll throw in my view.

Your basic idea is ok. Two or more celebs wrestling or fighting in the ring, and one or more of them ending up naked and embarassed.

When that's said and done, however, your writing is lacking something IMO. What I'd like to see would be longer stories with a better build-up and some more drawn out description of the events in the stories. IMO some of the stories seem to get a little repetitive, but you can "fix" that by doing what I suggest.

To elaborate a little on what I mean, my main problem is basically that I get the same feeling I get from a bad pornmovie without any plot. Two people meet, get naked, have sex, end. Most of us here are probably men, so we probably tend to have a tendency to skip over the build-up in terms of watching porn. But a story doesn't provide still or moving pictures. Your writing have to provide the context, the mood, the setting, the movements etc. Everything. You want to paint an elaborate, captivating picture and story that will play out in the mind of the reader, and I'm left with the feeling of looking at a picture without proper colours, foreground, or background. The drawing itself is still good, but it just doesn't provide the same as the same picture put into a context. Same thing if you watch a horror movie without any sound. There's just something missing, even if the movie is otherwise brilliant.

I'd like to be able to provide you with a host of different examples of my own writing, or baring that, links to such stories. Unfortunately I don't style myself a writer, and right now I don't have the time to hunt down several stories that have what what I'm trying to get across here, but I did come across this one recently:

http ://chross.blogt.ch/forum/read.php?8,8069

Basically I find this story to be pretty good.

Good luck with your writing. It's not bad, but you have room for improvement (just like the rest of us...).


/Kyrel

[cerindclvr]

I think what uh, Hentai Muncher was trying to say is that your comment did come across as a little entitled, given that many authors have written arguably better stuff here and gotten about half as much or less comments/criticisms. That said, your enthusiasm and frequency of posting is appreciated -- it's one of your better qualities. But not everyone checks here every day, and most of the people who read any stories are going to click 'thanks' at best. A sad state of affairs, sure, but you shouldn't feel as under appreciated as you sound. I know how, when basically writing for your own enjoyment and the enjoyment of others, a writer must get as much feedback as humanly possible. It fuels him. Checking your thread again and again and not finding any commentary is frustrating and discouraging. Believe me I know.

As for your writing itself; I've given my two cents in the past and it still amounts to "you have potential, keep at it and work on becoming a better writer in general." The story content/idea of your work isn't really the problem to me, it's your technical expertise. As for the "artistry" of it all, Kyrel pretty much nails it in the previous post:

"What I'd like to see would be longer stories with a better build-up and some more drawn out description of the events in the stories. IMO some of the stories seem to get a little repetitive"

all in all I appreciate your contributions... I think you're just suffering, at least in part, from the lack of traffic on the fiction forum here. Keep writing bro.