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Old 12-02-2015, 12:06 PM
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A very interesting direction and really brings callie out in a big way. Poor jane it looks like soon everyone will know just how plain Jane really is!
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I miss this story, i was hoping to see Jane back in all her glory for comic con to be humiliatingly exposed for the final hurrah!
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I miss this story, i was hoping to see Jane back in all her glory for comic con to be humiliatingly exposed for the final hurrah!
This story does deserve a finale. I'm terrible at finishing stories, but I'll give this one a shot soon!
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Fantastic story really like the balance and speed the story developed.

I have some ideas which you could use for inspiration. But I am sure you have your own sense of where this story can evolve. Which I expect would be even better.

The first is the whisper that Callie gave to Jane

1)Could be along the lines of shave your bush or I shave your head. This could involve that Jane considers all girls which shave to be sl*ts due to the fact when she tried shaving hers she became extremely horny. Which would make her more compliant with further sexual blackmails, and fact she feels that enjoyment from it would cause her greater shame and embarrassment.

Or if want something less explicit you could be that Callie whispers to stop dyeing her hair or she would shave her head. Resulting in her having ugly regrowth.

2nd Firstly the blackmail of Jane is based on her desire to remain popular so Callie needs to use this against her by giving her hope of not being revealed as a fake but forcing her to choose more humiliating costumes or tasks in order to remain so. Like she can choose between a wonder women outfit but having her face exposed or dressed in micro thong, nipple pasties, full green body paint and alien mask.

3rd At Comic con could have Jane run into an old bully expelled from school working as security Jane could attempt to trade Sex with the bully in order to have him beat up Micro Max and Callie. But have Callie and Max find out about the plan, and project the security guard fucking her on the big screen at comic con catching the horny Jane having a huge O- Moment. This would result in the bully being sacked ruining Jane plan. Also giving blackmail material for Callie to have Jane now have sex with nerds in order to avoid being exposed at the sl*t who was fucked at comic con on the big screen in an alien mask.

Also if you wish to turn up the heat could have Jane

This could be further exploited on here return to school by making her choose a task in order to earn her spanks and support bra for a day by completing tasks. Like getting having to send Callie a photo of her giving head to a member of maths club geeks. Or wearing a micro mini with no panties earns her push-up bra and inserts for a day. Turn her into the school bike for nerds.

Anyway look forward to reading your ideas in the future.
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I think Jane should come out on top personally. She has been humiliated enough but with winning comes revelation and that maybe she should be nicer in the future, always conscious of her short comings and simply enjoying her fantasy instead. a rather different sort of ending than the usual never able to return. so far Jane's humiliation has been local, it should remain that way and have the protagonist have the tables turned on them!
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Fantastic story really like the balance and speed the story developed.

I have some ideas which you could use for inspiration. But I am sure you have your own sense of where this story can evolve. Which I expect would be even better.

The first is the whisper that Callie gave to Jane

1)Could be along the lines of shave your bush or I shave your head. This could involve that Jane considers all girls which shave to be sl*ts due to the fact when she tried shaving hers she became extremely horny. Which would make her more compliant with further sexual blackmails, and fact she feels that enjoyment from it would cause her greater shame and embarrassment.

Or if want something less explicit you could be that Callie whispers to stop dyeing her hair or she would shave her head. Resulting in her having ugly regrowth.

2nd Firstly the blackmail of Jane is based on her desire to remain popular so Callie needs to use this against her by giving her hope of not being revealed as a fake but forcing her to choose more humiliating costumes or tasks in order to remain so. Like she can choose between a wonder women outfit but having her face exposed or dressed in micro thong, nipple pasties, full green body paint and alien mask.

3rd At Comic con could have Jane run into an old bully expelled from school working as security Jane could attempt to trade Sex with the bully in order to have him beat up Micro Max and Callie. But have Callie and Max find out about the plan, and project the security guard fucking her on the big screen at comic con catching the horny Jane having a huge O- Moment. This would result in the bully being sacked ruining Jane plan. Also giving blackmail material for Callie to have Jane now have sex with nerds in order to avoid being exposed at the sl*t who was fucked at comic con on the big screen in an alien mask.

Also if you wish to turn up the heat could have Jane

This could be further exploited on here return to school by making her choose a task in order to earn her spanks and support bra for a day by completing tasks. Like getting having to send Callie a photo of her giving head to a member of maths club geeks. Or wearing a micro mini with no panties earns her push-up bra and inserts for a day. Turn her into the school bike for nerds.

Anyway look forward to reading your ideas in the future.
Thanks for the suggestions! I'm working on this finale, keep suggestions coming! I may incorporate a lot of these ideas!
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Few further ideas

1)Callie arrives to pickup Jane for comic con in a small 4 seat car. Callie gives Jane the choice of sitting up front where everyone can see her without the mask or she can choose to lie down on nerdy neighbor and equally distasteful friends lap. Cause Jane chooses the option which allows her to keep her image intact. Callie will drive like a made women resulting in Jane sliding up and down on the back seat on the laps of the nerds. Resulting in the nerds ejaculating in their pants much to Jane horror as she has to spend the rest of the trip laying on the wet patches and the smell.

2)Callie gives Jane the choice of choosing what she wears or who she dates to fridays movies. Jane thinks she can outsmart Callie by choosing the clothes so she can look super hot. So Jane dresses up in a modest sundress. The date chosen by Callie is an obnoxious Freshman who has the reputation of being extremely handsy. Can also incorporate giving Jane the choice of a well lite popular hangout for the school or a dark movie theater. Cause Jane doesn't want choose a place where Mc,Hansy will feel her up but she has an image to maintain so she chooses the dark theater. Mc-Hansy has the night of his life while Jane spends the night trying to fend him off unsuccessfully.

3)Jane thinks she can beat Max and Callie by getting a boob job so she sleeps with the neighbour and his friends for the money. The Neighbour makes the deal that he pay but she has to sleep with him one time after the surgery. Unknown to Jane the Neighbour is actually Callie cousin. When she arrives back at school with her new enhanced boobs feeling that Max and Callie now have no blackmail material to use against her as she now has large fake boobs. Have her be rude and mean to Max and Callie. Only for Max or Callie to turn around and agree but we now have a video of you whoring yourself out to my obese cousin. Results in Jane realising she can never escape and is at the mercy of her tormentors.

4)Max or Callie force Jane to come to their bratty little brother pool party. Jane has the choice of wearing a unflattering one piece swim suit or bikini bottoms and loose white tshirt. After choosing the the bikini and tshirt Jane realises there no TOP and boys at the party have much fun after unwrapping the presents from Callie which is a super soaker. Also have callie remove the inner lining of the bikini bottoms and while Jane is forced to play twister with the boys in a wet see through tshirt and unknown to her massive obvious camel toe. Callie takes photos editing out the head before putting on the school website/facebook site. Resulting in Jane listening to all her friends talking about who that massive sl*t showing off pussy and tiny titties on facebook. To save from having her identity reveal she has to perform another dare for Max/Callie.
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