[ENF] The Ravenous Bug - Continued

[booboobooboo]

Love the descriptions of humiliation. Other writers could learn from you. "Screaming in humiliation" damn good stuff.

I'd like to see more from you

[crapycrapycrap2]

Originally Posted by booboobooboo

Love the descriptions of humiliation. Other writers could learn from you. "Screaming in humiliation" damn good stuff.

I'd like to see more from you

Lol, wanted to type "began"... woops

[TopherCross]

I don't really post a lot but this is a awesome story.

Keep up the good work dude

[Mortimer]

I really enjoyed this one, it was a a fun read.

Something bugs me a little though:
in chapter 4 we got Amy getting away from the bug barebottomed, and the moth change targets without finishing her, but when we see her again in chapter 5 she's fully naked hidding in the bushes. Did we miss a cretor/creature confrontation here?